Konoha Ninja: Wildfire Starts a Prairie Fire

Quite handsome

I cut it off without even finishing the introduction. There are more and more authors like this starting from the beginning, hey.

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

It looks pretty good so far. Kaleidoscope is not a crappy teleportation amplifier like Amaterasu Yuedu or something like that. It's pretty good. It just updates once a day and that's it. Let's keep it up for a few months.

Wildfire: I want to create a world with Tsubaki, I will directly activate the infinite Tsukuyomi

The battle scenes have the taste of early Naruto, awesome

The theme is good, but the story is told too hastily, and the characters are not very fleshed out. I would like to give you a few personal suggestions. You can write out the growth and psychological activities of the protagonist and supporting characters, and the inner feelings of the protagonist or supporting characters at certain periods of time. There is no need to advance the main story line too fast. Write one chapter or several chapters slowly for one thing. I think the story might be a little more exciting this way.

Now it's really Obito. Hurry up, I want to see a world with Hinata Tsubaki created.

Just tell me, don't make us wait.

Please update faster, only 1 chapter per day.

What about updates? The few books I have been following recently are all written and then entered the palace.

Awesome, everything related to the protagonist is dead

This is reasonable. Not everyone can use the Flying Thunder God. That thing is not teleportation. It has a landing point and can be predicted in advance. Minato's nervous reaction is not comparable to that of ordinary people.

Wouldn't it be nice to call her Starfire? (Dog head)

Most of the fans didn't save White Fang. Is it because the strength is not enough?

I feel like reading the text has a very hard feel to it, in terms of writing style. The plot is very good and not too toxic at the moment. The protagonist thinks that this is a two-dimensional world with no danger. This is a poisonous point. However, if combined with the introduction, he will probably become disillusioned later because of who dies and become disappointed with the world.

There's something there, but there are a lot of typos

Then look forward to the author's next book. Remember to send a notification when a new book is released.

Tasteful Naruto fanfic, already top-notch

It is a very realistic book. From the early stage of middle school to the late stage of growth, it matures step by step. It not only contains the childlike innocence of watching Naruto as a child, but also has a unique interpretation of Naruto as an adult. It has a considerable sense of immersion.

The writing is good, no need for eunuchs, the quality is maintained, and it will definitely be popular. I dare not say it will be a big hit, but it will definitely be a small hit.