Simulation of the Heavens Starting from the Fox Demon

The further you go, the more riddles you get, which makes it difficult to read on! 😴

Isn't this going to be a little more refined?

I haven't read any of them, I just felt confused. The protagonist has no sense of direction. The description in the article is also extremely boring. There is no motivation to attract readers to continue reading. And as long as you are human, your mood and mentality will change. The protagonist spent 12 years in depression, and the protagonist's father also emphasized in various ways The protagonist must destroy the royal family in the future, but as soon as he comes out, the Holy Mother's heart is overflowing, causing trouble for himself and healing strangers,,, After spending 12 years in this environment, even if he is not depressed, bitter and resentful, he should have developed a hard-hearted and not meddling in other people's business, but he still has the Holy Mother's heart overflowing. If you don't know how to write the plot, don't write like this!

I gave up after reading Chapter 32. It is one of the rare books that made me give up halfway. If I don't like it, I will usually say it after reading it. But you, the protagonist, have been suppressed for 12 years and have been basically in contact with each other for 12 years. You can't let others say that you are not proficient in the basics. After you come out, you can just give me various charity. People They will help when they can, instead of thinking about donating money when they have food and clothing problems. That is stupid. How can modern people be so stupid? The time traveler you describe is not an abnormal person or a lunatic, unless you say that the protagonist himself is the reincarnation of the Virgin Mary? Just say it straight, I guess people who give up will line up, and what is the meaning of Awakening the Sword Intent of Suffering? Your descriptions are becoming more and more like aboriginals, writing novels about aborigines under the guise of time travel? Don't you know how to write time travel stories? Hard-written? There is absolutely no highlight as a time traveler. He looks like an aborigine who knows the storyline of traveling through the past world. After 12 years of repression, have you awakened the bitter sword intention? Is it appropriate? Is it possible? In ancient times, Tushan was almost full of demons. It was only the first month of the Eastern month. They were forced to enter Tushan under special circumstances. How dare you go in straight? The hatred between the two clans is a world feud. Even if Tushan Honghong doesn't kill you, it doesn't mean that others won't kill you. How about the few pennies you have on you? Won't be kicked out? The plot you arranged is inherently unreasonable, and you also accept a disciple, a person who has experienced all the worlds, to become a disciple of Tushan Rongrong? Call the experts directly. And swinging the sword 30 times a day is considered hard work? When I contacted table tennis, I had to do 500 times just to warm up. How did you find the courage to write like this? Not familiar with the basics of 12 years? A time traveler must have a mature mind. Traveling to a place where everything is precarious and dark, he must always be thinking about improving himself, because he is afraid of death! This is a common human problem. In a world without mobile phones and entertainment, there is a lot of time. If you sleep too much, you will get a headache. What do you do with so much time? 12 Years have made you not familiar with the basics, is it useless? This is no longer a useless question. This is a question you wrote. The logic is inconsistent and you can't explain it. I learned martial arts when I was a child, and I was also exposed to weapons. I got a red tassel gun. Any set of marksmanship must be repeated 50 times a day. This is a set, not your kind of sword. If you swing the sword several times to break down the moves, I swing the gun 50,000 times a day. What do you call hard work? What I do every day is ordinary at best. According to your logic, am I invincible?

Toxic, I don't understand why I left, why can't I just live with you? I'm an adult after all, I can't stand this, it's not a killer organization, it will kill you, and it will be funny without revenge, it is equivalent to someone killing your mother, you ask your father to give up hatred, regardless of this hatred, give up sex, in ancient times, not only killing people, but also having all your property confiscated, and persuading you to quit.

I didn't understand what was written. Newly seen the protagonist Ou Shen is a bad guy. Would the author distribute all his wealth to strangers on the road? ? ? Occasionally, once or twice, it can be understood that one party has difficulties coming from all directions, and it is a catastrophic type of difficulty that one cannot survive. There are so many beggars in the world, so why doesn't the author give all of his wealth to them? ? ? It's enough to be pitiful once or twice. In the ancient context, five taels of silver was equivalent to the food bought for five hundred thousand yuan. It can be used by a family (a commoner family in ancient times) for ten years. The author can give half a million to a beggar with hands and feet. I think it was good to give that little girl to the beggar. But the protagonist lost all his remaining wealth, so~~~

How to put it, it's a bit baffling, personal opinion: Simulator, infinite flow, a training system of multiple world systems, shouldn't we explain the performance of other world systems in this world? After getting the Qinglian Sword Song, I didn't know how to practice swordsmanship in the main world at the beginning. I couldn't understand how to practice swordsmanship again. How on earth did you know how to do it. There are also different levels of cultivation. You practice and level up, but there is no description of your level at all. From what level you rose to, the name of the level has changed. Why don't you describe the training system? Don't tell me that I can't understand it even if I've read the comics. I'm sure I'll understand even more if I haven't read it.

You go to Tushan just for the sake of foxes. You will be restricted everywhere when you go to Tushan. It is not as free as the Sword Clan.

Is there multiple female protagonists, is the author great?

Many plots are nonsensical, incomprehensible, bland, and tasteless, and it would be a pity to abandon them.

I hate inexplicable simulated deaths. People are very fragile but also very strong. Your way of death is just ridiculous.

If you plan to make money, I suggest you cut it. If you want to hone your writing skills, you can continue writing.

It's a bit embarrassing, the main character is written as if he doesn't have a high IQ.

What a mess, the author of the Black Fox King section should read it himself... It's like a composition. Just kidding...🙂

The previous chapter was a bit long-winded when I was fighting with Tushan Yaya, and the little thieves really affected the reading experience.

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There are eight water cards in ten chapters, and most of them don't have protagonists, and they also abuse the master. This is the first time I saw a lot of ability texts in the simulator, but they can't beat the natives, but the martial arts practitioners can beat the immortal cultivators.

The writing is too poor and not suitable for old bookworms. The writing is confusing in many places, such as the wrong name in the front, some of the protagonist's monologues being awkward, etc. Goldfinger's arrangement is also inexplicable, just like the first real person to enter this kid... That's it.

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