I Am a Swordsman in the Age of the End of Law

Don't let this go. In the introduction, the Immortal Power turns into a blind fortune teller, the Demonic Giant makes a living by eating rats in prison, the Immortal Sect becomes the mascot of the imperial court, the Eagle Claw, and the protagonist's predecessor was killed by a wild dog in a mass grave in the end. Isn't this enough setting? If a mere mortal defeated an immortal cultivator, it would be consistent with the introduction. However, there are huge loopholes in logic and flaws. The defeat of a mortal cultivator by itself is a poisonous point. If cultivators secretly support mortals, it is a fraud. Unless the powerful immortals and demonic giants you are talking about refer to those low-level immortal cultivators. If you say that cultivators support mortals and then are killed by mortals, it will be even more serious. It is extremely poisonous. Also, the author seems to have a strong vision of the ancient mortal court? Forget about killing the immortal cultivators, hundreds of thousands of troops can come out to attack the mountain-protecting formation. Does the author know how many resources are needed to do this? All in all, logical flaws and introduction fraud must account for one of them. If you try to achieve both, the result will be that neither of them can be achieved. There is a problem with the basic settings.

Let's talk about the direction first, either the apocalyptic elite stream or the worldly hegemony stream, but not relying on both is a fatal injury. Inventory of flaws: 1: As elites and geniuses who have lived for thousands of years, they will not sit still and wait for death. They must open up a path of practice. Two: As a material cultivation stream, it must have an inextricably complicated relationship with the secular political power. The two must work together and it is impossible for a unified dynasty to emerge in the end. Moreover, as a world map for cultivating immortals, it is too small. Three: As practitioners of the Immortal Cultivation style, their power is too poor. Four: Everything happens for a reason, and there must be various signs when spiritual power dissipates. It is impossible for the top spiritual sects to be completely unaware of it. Five: Serious reduction in intelligence.

As a reader who has been reading Feng Yu Zhui until now, I must say that you are a lazy bird. It reminds me of the two books you wrote before the anti-virus software series. The characters in them have been playing the mantis stalking the cicada with the oriole behind them. Every time they make a calculation, they think it is like this, but then turn around and say there are other calculations later, making the readers look like fools. Although it is not the case this time, it is almost the same. I keep farming and changing maps, and the protagonist always has a backup plan, which makes me very tired. Maybe you don't want to write the Anti-Virus World series anymore, but maybe you should think about changing the direction. Otherwise, the content will still be the same, just changing the skin of the Anti-Virus World.

This plot setting is really annoying. If this really happens, the cultivators will directly cultivate the Immortal Dynasty. Just really take over. You dare to say you dare to come out. People directly play with the national destiny. All civil servants are part of the national destiny. Mortals are so upset that they want to eat shit. The higher-ups of cultivating immortals directly join forces and secretly cause trouble. If they think too much, a few people will obey the majority, and everyone has similar interests. When 90% of the high-level people in this world come to my side, all the power of speech will be tilted towards me. If you dare to cause trouble, if you want to be beaten to death by the group, then try it. What's the use of having more people? A warm epidemic will kill them all. Even in the Age of Ending Dharma, people are still the same as heaven and earth. The lack of people is equivalent to a nuclear bomb. If you fight a nuclear bomb, you want to eat shit. If that doesn't work, they can just turn into demon cultivators and suck people's blood. Train him into elixirs from top to bottom. Even if 10,000 or hundreds of thousands of people pile up nuclear bombs, he will be invincible. It's so easy to do without Reiki. I just use thunder and lightning. In addition, you are overthinking the degeneration of monsters. Do you know how long this process takes? The monster who cultivates immortality. Even without the power of cultivating immortals, people can sway with their bodies. It can cause great damage. An impact from the sky is equivalent to that of a fighter jet. Do you know how powerful it is? Shock you to death. How many large structures are there in the sea? The formations swayed in various ways. A huge tsunami or many small tsunamis can easily be created by churning the water. It can be a little difficult on land. But I'm still not afraid of you. Those who are no longer good at cultivating immortals can still open secret realms. Do you know what a secret realm is? A big boss opens a space and everyone goes in to play, that's it. Once this secret realm is opened, it will still exist without any consumption. Can play with space. This level of involvement is involved. Some of his skills no longer require aura. Don't tell me anything about the need for spiritual energy, mana, etc. If you need legal advice or contact, I can open up a secret space by refining my energy. Is that okay? If it doesn't work, people can still play seize the body. The soul leaves the body and seizes the body. The soul does not need spiritual energy. In addition, Hushan Town does not need to be open all the time. Is it useful for ordinary people to fight so many times? I'm afraid you don't know how severe the plague is. Just change the terrain of a mountain range. Exploding mountains and rivers, tsunamis, and earthquakes are directly triggered. You mortal, block it for me. There are simply too many people who don't need spiritual energy in the world of immortality. Ghost cultivation, demon cultivation, faith, fortune, blood energy, cannibalism, and a lot more. Why Choose Reiki? Because Reiki is much simpler than them. Among the examples I mentioned, none of them require you to pay a price or have restrictions on what you can do. There is spiritual energy, why don't I use it?

The first time I came into contact with the works of Lazy Bird was when He Caitou recommended it on the public account, saying that he had recently read an interesting book "Immigration to the Immortal World". Since then, I have been reading it, and I have probably read both the large and small books. The book style of Lazy Bird is relatively obvious: quick map changes, many reversals, one-person dog, lack of heroine image, and no emotional drama - usually just watch the sunrise and pass it by. It brings a lot of problems, including unreasonable world settings, nesting dolls and illogical logic when reversing and changing pictures. Anyway, there are a lot of bugs, and the ending is often rushed. These are often complained about. I still like Lazy Bird's books, because although he is a man and a dog, he is not alone, but helps the world; although the protagonist in his novel is strong, he is not against the sky, and always has the support of a team; and he can also realize that if one force does not have the check and balance of another force, then when you master it, it will be the beginning of your own tragedy; and the world in his writing is always alive and dead, and the cycle is endless. Although the results of this work are not good, come on, lazy bird, and hope to continue to accompany you in the future.

The title seems okay, but after reading the introduction, I no longer have the desire to read any more. Even in the Age of Ending Law, the aura between heaven and earth did not disappear in an instant. Couldn't those monks notice that the aura between heaven and earth is slowly decreasing? If you really treat immortal cultivators as fools, since you know that the Age of Ending Law is coming, you will definitely think of a way out. The golden elixir only has a lifespan of 500, and the Nascent Soul is only 1,000. In the next period of time, you will definitely try your best to collect spiritual stones and spiritual objects. At least it will be enough for your own consumption in the next few hundred years. High-level monks will kill low-level cultivators. Level monks, so the next few hundred years will be very chaotic, and those low-level monks do not have a long lifespan, nor are they rich, so except for a few who live in seclusion, most of them will go to the mortal world to live a prosperous life, or create a force, or found a family, or control the country. These are very good choices, and those powerful ones are sure They will not just watch themselves slowly disappear. Some people who are indifferent to life and death will experience the world of mortals, but most of them will find ways to escape the world, or use spiritual materials to use secret methods to seal themselves in order to avoid the catastrophe of the end of the world. When the spiritual energy recovers and then wakes up, the demonic monks may use blood sacrifices to stay alive, so in the next period of time It will be a disaster for mortals. It is quite funny to see mortals attacking the world of immortality after 50 years. As long as the foundation building, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul monks do not die of old age, it will not be considered the real end of the Dharma. Therefore, mortals will have to wait at least hundreds of years if they want to turn around. When most of those monks die, it will be the era of mortals, and it will be the real end of the Dharma.

There are quite a lot of pitfalls in Wairi. Judging from the current rhythm, it is more sinister than the previous Changhe series. This world should be an appetizer.

Just think of the power level of this book as low martial arts, and you won't be very depressed when reading it.

Xiancao, I feel that Qidian's new book this year will be among the top five, or even the top three If you keep at it, it will definitely become popular. The current results don't seem to be very good. Judging from the number of fans, I feel that it is most likely due to the title of the book. I have read the title of your book many times, but I always read it as "I am a Sword Immortal in the "Doomsday"". I thought it was a doomsday text, a simulated doomsday text, so I never clicked in to read it. Today I saw someone recommending it at station b, so I clicked in to take a look. Also, is there something wrong with the introduction? Personal feeling The introduction of this book should focus on the huge conflict you wrote earlier about the endless conflict between mortals and immortal cultivators who are about to lose their power without knowing it, especially the identity of the protagonist, the head of the Immortal Sect Use this contradiction as the entry point Look forward to it The feeling is very strong, I am looking forward to the story of the immortal cultivator who lost his power ten years later The introduction of the current version is all background introduction, plus a little bit of golden finger rebirth and foresight, and there is no conflict at all The suspense of rebirth is too cliche and not attractive. The eternal conflict between mortals and cultivators is, in my opinion, a very novel and attractive aspect of this book. This should be written in the introduction. In this case. It can only be said that the title of the book "I Became a Sword Immortal in the Age of Ending Law" that fits the story but is very mediocre and lacks any highlights can also be changed For example, Ten years later, what will happen if a cultivator is hunted down by mortals? The spiritual energy disappears. How should I, the leader of the Immortal Way, face the mortal reckoning? The time of reckoning has come, cultivators of immortality! I will end the war between immortals and mortals! Only I know that the end of the Dharma era is coming I feel that the best title of the book is about the contradiction between grasping mortals and imminent loss of cultivating immortals It just seems hard to think about The above is a personal opinion and is for reference only

The protagonist is a reckless man. The Demon Killer and the Blue Dragon Slayer Formation are too reckless. If something happens, there will be endless troubles. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would be dead.

The old monster Yuanying, the old monster who transforms into gods, the wording is too stupid.

Why no comments? ? It's too short

The author's lack of consideration: 1. Readers must be brought into the side of cultivators, so in the Age of Ending Dharma, if cultivators are personally humiliated, it will greatly hurt the readers' feelings. At the same time, combined with the characteristics of modern Chinese people who do not accept submission and have clear ideas, the encounters of cultivators must be quite aggrieved and will definitely explode their mentality. Therefore, there is no market for articles about abuse of masters. This is why. 2. The author has not carefully considered the plot. It's too natural, too naive, and it doesn't take human nature into consideration! Logically speaking, if the protagonist predicts what will happen in the future, the optimal solution is to send the future situation anonymously and send it everywhere. So, the choice of the cultivation world at this time is very simple. It is better to believe that it is there and directly destroy a fragile feudal dynasty into a weaker tribe or village or replace it and establish a dynasty of cultivators. It's not difficult at all and it's bound to happen. 3. The author uses game thinking to understand and construct the world, and has lost the authenticity of the world he created. The execution power and economic strength of the feudal dynasty are simply unable to deal with any "60 Minutes Superman", and they cannot even prevent the other party's beheading action. After every beheading, there is a high probability that the dynasty itself will collapse without the need for external force. 4. The virtual world needs to be logically self-consistent. Advantages: The author's writing style is good, well written, and easy to read.

Mortals can build a dynasty, but why can't those who cultivate immortals build it? With such huge energy, knowledge and various sect heritages, it is not easy to build a dynasty. Even in the Age of Dharma End, there are many ways to support the population and develop mortal forces. The leaders of those cultivating immortals of the big forces have not accumulated countless struggles and experience in various fields. No one is better than mortals in terms of business skills and worldliness. Mortals fight only by relying on interest ties, family inheritance and power and population. There are no big forces cultivating immortals. How come those cultivators who have lived for thousands or hundreds of years have no ideas and plans to develop and control mortal forces, and completely treat mortals as As a consumable, without any reasoning or plan for the future, I just know that it is a brainless and completely suicidal way to do it until the mortals gain power. This is too unreasonable, so I feel that there are logical loopholes in the mortals' fight against the immortal cultivating forces. There is a problem with the completely suicidal fighting method of the immortal cultivating sect from the beginning, which can make the mortal forces lose power. Control, leaving no escape route at all, it is completely a collective suicidal struggle to consume each other. There is no self-protection or compromise between the big forces of cultivating immortals. There is no reasoning or plan for the future. They just do it in a brainless way, and then usher in the rise and counterattack of the mortal forces. This is too plot-killing.

Cultivation, what is the purpose of practice? In the world of cultivating immortals, practice is to survive in the world and raise your head to the sky. Even if your closest relatives and loved ones have left you for thousands of years of loneliness, your heart will always be like a sword that penetrates all difficulties and pursues the unknown. In practice, in reality, the seven emotions and six desires can be controlled freely and moderately, thoughts are clear, living in the world, knowing the human heart, understanding the principles, feeling the changes of the four seasons, ten years as a day, enjoying the way of nature, sitting in this world, without any regrets.

It makes me laugh. Even if there is no spiritual energy, there are still decades to go. Immortal cultivators can control a large number of puppet dynasties in minutes. Before they lose spiritual energy, they can use earth and wood magic to attack a large immortal sect on a city wall of 100 meters. Outside the mountain gate, a mountain is moved to a new place, deep in the mountains and old forests, the road cannot be reached, and a large army attacks? Do you want a genius to marry into the dynasty? I don't know how to spit out an old trough

After reading three chapters, I feel that it is really ridiculous. Immortal cultivators are all-rounders. Even if their spiritual energy is gone and there are not many spiritual stones, it will not take many spiritual stones to assassinate an emperor easily. No matter how hard it is to support a powerful person, you can always do it. This is impossible. Love is directly reduced to letting dogs for the court. I am convinced. You are not cultivating immortals, but are in the world of low martial arts. If the spiritual energy is gone and the sword energy can't reach three thousand miles, then you don't need thirty miles, you can always have ten miles. Why can't you kill a high-ranking member of the imperial court to intimidate you? You will be like a tortoise being ridden on your head. You can't fight if you don't have enough spiritual stones, but you can't run away. In the middle of the night, send a foundation-building practitioner to burn food and grass for up to a week to see if they get away.

After looking at the first few pictures, it is difficult to understand 1. Immortal cultivators do not have the word "immortal" engraved on their faces. Your feudal dynasty is not modern. In modern times, there are fugitives who cannot be found by the government. In ancient times, it is not easy for me, a casual cultivator, to find a place to pretend to be a mortal. I rely on a few magical skills to live a better life than ordinary people? No matter how serious the conflict between immortals and mortals is, what can you do? Even if you are not an immortal, can you find a place to hide? 2. Immortals are not fools. Even if the super sect is ready to be a turtle and wait for the spiritual energy to recover, they will not put their eggs in one basket. Do I have to conflict with the mortal forces that support me? 3. Why should the high-level immortal sects fight with each other? Wouldn't it be better for us to join forces to support the forces in the world? We can even support multiple forces to play balance. The Pope can play balance and dominate for a while with his faith, but we true immortals can't? 4. Immortals are not monolithic, but you, the mortal Wang Chao, are monolithic? Aren't the emperor's sons all of the same mind? 5. Why can't it be a mortal emperor who is the Emperor of Zhou, and our immortal sect is Qin, Chu, Zhao, Qi, Wei, Yan and Han. 6. We don't need to destroy the human dynasty several times, we only need to be able to destroy it twice. The first time will show the world that we can do it, and the second time will never be needed. Even if the mortal dynasty fights to unify the world, our attitude must also be considered. 7. It is not even necessary to destroy human dynasties, as long as it can destroy mortal rulers, the Immortal Sect has the right to be on an equal footing with the emperor. Even your succession to the throne must consider the opinions of the Immortal Sect, otherwise I can change someone to be the emperor.

The story is good, but there should be some deviation in understanding the practitioners. It is impossible for a practitioner to enter the Age of Dharma Ending just because he has no energy. Otherwise, what to do if we invade other worlds, and what is the reason for entering the Age of Ending Dharma. It must have been sealed by a strong person and changed the rules of the world. .

I haven't read it yet, I just want to ask, your immortal cultivator doesn't cultivate the body. No matter how powerful the boss is, his physical fitness is the same as that of ordinary people. Isn't it true that even if you don't practice, your physical fitness can be improved every time you level up?

First, many people complain that immortal cultivators lose their aura and become useless. In fact, this is not the case. The author actually has many side explanations, such as internal friction. Immortal cultivators are not actually defeated by mortals. According to the world view constructed by the author, the way of heaven in this world should have will. There is also a section in Chapters 60-65 that describes what the protagonist saw when he watched the surviving deeds of the fourth generation of ancestors. According to the rumor, an ancient immortal swore to heaven to slay demons, defend the Way, and protect the common people in order to obtain the opportunity to practice immortality against heaven. This is essentially a transaction with heaven. The heaven-defying here should refer to a path that should not be allowed. The price for not being erased in the transaction is to protect the common people. However, the immortal cultivators in the book all regard human life as nothing, even if The relatively kind-hearted immortal cultivators can still feel at ease with the mortals who are accidentally injured in the fight, and when they make up for their mistakes, they feel that they have done a great favor and should be thanked. Therefore, it should be regarded as a violation of the agreement, so it should be regarded as being punished by heaven. In the age of the end of the law, the immortal cultivators have gone against the general trend, so the immortal cultivators should be defeated by heaven and not by themselves. They lost to mortals because they were useless Secondly, I also saw some people complaining about why the immortal cultivators did not control the mortal dynasty. My guess (personal guess, don't complain if you don't like it) is for the sake of orthodoxy. In the end of the Dharma era, large sects have three choices before them One is to remain in seclusion until the resources are exhausted and gradually die out. The second is to control the dynasty to gain a living space The third is to contact the mortal rulers and gain the initiative in order to hope for a glimmer of hope in the future Why not choose one or two of these three options? My guess is that some high-level immortal cultivators know some secrets and want to create a gradual transformation of the immortal cultivators. The situation of being suppressed by mortals in order to conceal the truth or pay the price. If you choose the second option, it will lead to a large consumption and dispersion of resources. However, top-level immortal cultivators want to win a glimmer of hope in the future but do not want to sacrifice themselves, so they need to concentrate a large amount of resources (especially immortal cultivation resources). Therefore, option three has become inevitable and the sacrifice will be huge. Some middle- and lower-level immortal cultivators keep their own resources concentrated and reduce losses, hiding the truth from the sky and ensuring that their vested interests will not lose too much The third is about finding new paths. I think they are divided into two categories: one is small and medium-sized sects (in comparison at all levels, the real top sects must have What is hidden from the world cannot be fully seen at the level of the protagonist, so the small and medium-sized sects may be what he knows and the big sects he thinks are not contradictory) they have found a way but it is incomplete or too late, while the top sects, like the second point of view, have a way but do not expose it in order to hide it, or it can only alleviate the inevitable contradiction. Of course, there must be truly powerful people who can find new ways to survive, so there should be monks who are similar to or have the same purpose as the protagonist in the later part of the book, but without the protagonist's prejudgment, if there are no such people, then it is indeed the author's problem The fourth is the introduction. My personal opinion is that the powerful people and magic giants in the introduction may be the losers of the game At the same time, everyone is welcome to publish their own opinions. The requirement is not to write too radical words, and everyone can discuss rationally.

In summary, this book cannot fully describe the four words "decapitation tactics". The author wanted to create a very novel setting, but this setting cannot be fulfilled. Then some people criticized it as a stupid dog, but the book was obviously not without merit, so the author's fans fought back. There is nothing interesting about summarizing a bunch of answers. There are so many books on Qidian, and this one is not missing. There are a few fans among them. I think they are very active. They will refute every post. I wonder if he is very idle? No need to work? The money the author earns from writing books belongs to the author. If you defend him like this, does he give you any money? If so, tell me, and I will join you Finally, what I can't figure out the most is that if there is a lot of spiritual energy in this world, everyone can waste it, but if you want to be outstanding, want to go one step further, and want to become a human being, a fairy among immortals. Then you have to find a way to make up for every shortcoming in yourself. However, there was no such person in that world of cultivating immortals.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not bring in ordinary people, but why some readers brought in immortal cultivators. I'm thinking that in reality I'm not an ordinary person? Do I need to bring in regular people? Don't I read a novel just to experience something I haven't experienced in reality? Or is it that you are a cultivator in reality, so you want to read novels to bring in ordinary people?

I got interested after reading the introduction, but the logic is wrong. An old antique who has been cultivating immortality for many years can do nothing without his strength? Have you lived so many years in vain? People who can fight their way to the top are not comparable to ordinary people even if they have no strength. Years of scheming and layout ability can kill ordinary people.

This book was forwarded to the bilibili forum, and the replies in that post generally showed doubts and disdain for the book's cultivation system. 😅 Even if the vitality of heaven and earth is lost, the world of cultivation should not have stretched its hips to such an extent, allowing mortals to ride on its head, without any means of coping. The monks have lived for so many years. Even if they lose their extraordinary power, will the city's wisdom, methods and knowledge be lost? How could such a cultivator come from a place where he has no control over mortals? 😅

The spiritual energy is also declining, so what is written next door? The god-transforming elders of each sect exchanged secret methods, slaughtered their own disciples and the creatures of several states as fuel, and then used the secret methods to preserve themselves for tens of millions of years, in order to recover their spiritual energy and be reborn again.

I just can't figure it out. Even if the spiritual energy declines, immortal cultivators will not be suppressed by mortals 😅. Immortal cultivators put aside spiritual energy techniques, physical fitness, brain development, and ideological realm are not comparable to mortals. Do mortals still develop technology? Just look at ancient times and you will know that those aristocratic families and royal families would not agree. Look at the former Prime Minister of Japan who was shot dead by civilians.

I really didn't expect that a Level 5 author could write such a creative and illogical novel.

I don't even want to read this kind of book even if it is exempted. This bullshit website keeps recommending it to me. This introduction will poison 90% of people. It's really disgusting. It's true that it's written in such a disgusting way. Nt

In my opinion, cultivating immortals should not be like a useless piece of trash that loses power after the spiritual energy has receded. Instead, it should be a means of pursuing the ultimate truth and pursuing evolution. Let's not talk about physical and spiritual cultivation. Cultivation of immortals is the evolution of the human body. Even if it is just absorbing spiritual energy, circulating and compressing it in the body, nourishing it. The evolved body has also opened a huge gap with ordinary people. Just like the magician of the magic system, the person who pursues the truth will never be at a loss or even become a waste due to changes in the external environment. Moreover, the immortal cultivator competes with the people of heaven and earth for resources. How can he be a waste with such an appointment?

I'm not afraid that the subject matter is old or bad, but I'm afraid that the author can't tell the story well. After reading five chapters, I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do.