National Expedition: Save the Immortal Cultivation World

Damn, one chapter a day, the donkey dare not rest like this

There will be more updates during the Chinese New Year. There are too few during the Chinese New Year.

The author is a liar, trying to sell someone else's flesh. After reading Chapters 6 and 70, I still can't see that it has anything to do with cultivating immortals.

The logic is illogical. The immortal is trying so hard to make the last batch of humans in the three thousand worlds learn immortal skills to resist the demons that even the immortals cannot resist? ? ? This is like the United States being unable to resist aliens and giving its own technology to African tribal people to resist aliens. . . . . The second one is that it's too much like a game. Those who learn from Jin Bell are all about defense, while those who learn from Lingyan are all about speed. The level 5 defense output is not as good as the level 2 attack. . . In this river? It would be reasonable to assume that the output of a level 5 tank cannot match that of a level 2 mage. . .

I don't know which foundation is reliable, so I donated to the Han Hong Foundation in everyone's name. I wish everyone happiness and health during the Lantern Festival.

I took a quick look at the comments section, and when I saw those who said they were illogical, I went to reply to them. But when I saw those who said they were intellectually helpful, I had no desire to reply. Let's talk about logic first. In the Immortal Realm, Gouchen Immortal Lord, half disabled, in the lower realm. The legacy left behind was obtained by Lao Zeng. Lao Zeng is a Nine-Tribulation Immortal, so of course he wants to be called a Nine-Nine-Tribulation Immortal. That is to say, become an immortal king. So, the lower world. Yes, I fell into Gou Chen's trap and became a semi-crazy immortal. I had no choice but to reincarnate as Lao Zeng. He was once again affected by the battlefield and plotted against me. He didn't even have a chance to inherit his predecessor's legacy before he died. At this time, the world of immortality has become the prey of strange demons. And was brought under absolute control. What is Lao Wei? The strange demon is the old cat, the world of immortality is the mouse, and Old Wei is just the flea on the mouse. People like Lao Wei are cannon fodder created by Lao Zeng under a back-up plan in order to struggle. And Lao Wei is still one of them. Now it seems that it is not even a flea, but at most a virus on mice. In the end, Lao Wei made an impossible comeback, but he got some information that made him aware of the higher-level battle, and he just resigned. It just becomes a blind spot for both warring parties, and then combined with the situation, he operates himself as a third party in the war, and then, he picks up the omissions, that's all. To put it bluntly, he took advantage of the information gap and became an oriole. The entire war, the layout of the strange demons, was to crush the enemy with great force and use the maximum information control, but it was still caused by local loopholes that led to the overturn. However, the greatest results were still achieved by the Immortal World and the Immortal Cultivation World. Similar to the logic of a horseshoe losing an empire. It smells a bit like Domilo's collapse. From here, it can be seen that although the strange demon looks fierce, due to profit reasons, there is no joint force, resulting in a weak actual combat power. In fact, the alien demon's greed for resources has made the battlefield situation too compressed, making it appear that the opponent's resources are insufficient. It may also be that the higher-ups are too greedy for resources, causing the battlefield at the lower levels to be too large, leading to an anxious situation on the battlefield. This highlights another issue: stability. This shows how powerful the high-level alien demons are. It also illustrates the cruelty of the struggle between high-level alien demons. In other words, it was the power of the high-level alien demons that led to the fall of the high-level human race in the fairy world. I don't know if everyone understands this logic. Now, there are three levels of power levels displayed. The level of the human race's ancestral temple is currently unknown. Immortal Lord level. Each has nine people, dominating the entire battlefield. The Nine Tribulations Immortals (the main combat power in the Immortal World, general level), the One Calamity Immortals (the secondary combat power in the Immortal World, soldier level), and the Special Recruitment Immortals (the cannon fodder combat power in the Immortal World), these forces form the main composition of the Immortal World's combat forces. Currently this is what I am most looking forward to writing about in the future. The third level is the world of immortality. This is a reserve base. Basically, the wars we see now are the fight for these lower worlds. However, this is only a marginal battlefield. The main battlefield should be in the fairy world. The number and eliteness of the soldiers determine how well the main combatant controls the edge battlefield. The strange demon was stolen by Old Wei because of insufficient control. This kind of thing must have happened countless times. This is why Gou Chen went down to the lower realm and why Lao Zeng also came down to the lower realm. Reenacting the world of cultivating immortals means re-cultivating. By starting over, let the lower-level immortals have a chance to reach the top. On the card table, there are nine people on each side. But, is it really only possible to have nine people? Forbidden life, how to become taboo. This is the new hole dug by the lazy bird. Give the hook. But, love the hook he gives. Looking forward to his follow-up. This is the logic line I see now. As for reducing intelligence, it is better to say that my intelligence is not enough and I cannot understand. That's all. Actually, what Lao Niao wrote is very straightforward. He did not deliberately hide the background of the story, nor did he make any mystery. Even Lao Niao's writing is very straightforward and the plot is very compact. His writing method is very simple, that is, through information differences, time differences, and gradually unblocking and decrypting higher-level information to unfold the plot. This is his usual way of writing. It seems that the scenes in the story are grand and the world is endless, but if you look closely, you will find that he has enclosed the story in a small circle and a small logical framework. Come and see the world frame. The current powerful party. Humans, strange demons, celestial demons, spiritual fruits. On the human side, nine of the Immortal Lords are currently dead, and only two of the other eight have revealed a hint of information. Not all nine strange demons appeared. There is only one heavenly demon. The spiritual fruit doesn't even have a name. In other words, on the local battlefield in the fairy world, strange demons acted together due to pressure. The infighting among the immortals resulted in the death of one of the immortal kings. Due to the pressure, the strange demons compressed resources to the extreme, leading to a rout on the edge of the battlefield, leaving Lao Wei to pick up the slack. It seems so. Look again at the hole dug by the old bird. Gouchen died, why? He knows too much. Please note. Here, information represents power, and power represents status. Gou Chen Xianjun has obtained more information, which means that he has higher growth potential. It is equivalent to him being a genius in the human race, the future pillar, and another upcoming big boss. But, he died. Look again. The Immortal Lord has destined nine people. What if a tenth person appears? Enter the ancestral temple? Then what? Become the superior of the Nine? Look at Lao Zeng's attitude towards Lao Wei. Lao Zeng strives to be the first person under Lao Wei. Why? He was afraid, afraid of becoming an outcast who could be abandoned at any time. Look at Gou Chen's reaction. A heavenly king was able to quickly surrender his status and defect to Old Wei. The strange demon, instead of killing an imminent Immortal Lord, went to kill Gou Chen. Is it strange? Just because Old Wei might fail to overcome the tribulation? Or are they not worried or afraid of another newcomer coming to the table to play chess? What about logic? What logic makes them react like this? Yes. Lao Niao's book is written by someone who follows logical thinking. When those people in book reviews said that this book has no logic, I laughed. This is simply... I can't complain... Okay! Keep going... It's too long, so let's just do it! If you think what I said is not good, feel free to complain...

They all praise me and praise me. I will donate again in everyone's name.

It is not recommended to read, it is a novel about cultivating immortals, you will be born directly in one day, and there are only three books on exercises. Anyway, the three golden chapters are full of poisons, which is not as good as a real brainless and enjoyable article (it is written to remind you to read it without using your brain, which is very enjoyable). It is difficult for Chinese people to find a person who is 180cm tall and weighs 220cm who does not look fat.

Already subscribed, I hope you will be fine Lazy Bird. You have written more than ten novels. I hope this one will not change the map too quickly. I hope to write about the depth of history. The Fuyun Sect is the sect established by the protagonist of Sword Immortal. I think fighting should be supplemented and the opening of the veil of history should be the starting point. China's benevolence, justice, etiquette, etiquette, et cetera, highlights should be portrayed, and the novel should come from life that is higher than life. I hope that these bright ideals will be passed down to us. People are emotional animals, family affection, love, friendship, brotherhood. There is a saying that goes well, the dead are gone, the living must live well. I hope the lazy bird can become a god, once. Every character is a person of flesh and blood. Don't always write books centered on the protagonist. I hope you can flesh out the characters of the human race of Sword Immortal's Apprentices through side descriptions. Bird, I don't know if you can see that I am a god. You can take a look. People's oaths, inheritance, etc., Don't have much material but depict the richness of history. Greetings, ten years of lazy bird fans

I've written 14 books, but there's a reason why I haven't become a great person yet.

Does Lazy Bird have delusions of being persecuted? I always feel that except myself, everyone in his writings is a sinister villain who wants to harm him. The protagonist himself always has a lot of excessive psychological speculation, and always guesses the dark truth behind the world out of thin air. Every time I read a book, I don't look at the author, but after reading a few chapters I notice something is wrong. Then I look at the author and realize that it is indeed him 😄

This book is really half-baked and tasteless. Not bad, I can still watch it. Well, there are a lot of things that are unreasonable in the viewing process. 1. The plot dialogues about women, etc.: It feels like the self-obsession of a middle-aged fat man, with a greasy feeling... 2. I am really insensitive to numbers. I just write xx million numbers casually. 3. The description of the exercises is very weak. It's obviously about moving mountains, but at the beginning it insists on the fact that water is good for all things and doesn't argue with it. It was really too much of a drama. Can't you look for specific scriptures related to mountains? I'm not good at it. 4. Many of the protagonist's choices are to shoot the arrow first and then draw the target. Anyway, it's just a reckless choice. Anyway, he is the protagonist. Every time, he just manages to turn defeat into victory, risking death and surviving. Anyway you are right. The author wants to describe the protagonist's wisdom, and the choice should be reasonable and there should be enough foreshadowing. In the end, it was not the case. It seemed that everyone else was blind, but the protagonist was the smart one. It's better to give a golden finger, it's all up to the author to brag. 5. The main character's imagination is different. I doubt that the free chapter and the subsequent chapters were written by the same person? And the most double-standard thing in the whole text is the protagonist... If it weren't for the shortage of books, I really wouldn't want to read it.

I have read many of the author's books, and I feel that the setting and writing are all online, but the plot is fucked up. There is a saying that the IQ of the person with the highest IQ in the novel is the IQ of the author. I don't know if this is the reason. The author really likes to write some high-intelligence plans, but in fact, they are not so high-intelligence and seem a bit ridiculous. Originally, the author's intelligence is not low, and he likes to write some such high-intelligence plans. This creates a huge gap between the real battle of wits and the author's imagined battle of wits.

After reading the beginning, I wanted to make a point. How can a group of losers leave a Kung Fu inheritance that allows people on earth to defeat strange demons after practicing it? After all, if your technique is useful, it won't be Earth's turn, so many worlds ahead should have successfully prevented the invasion. Earth is a world on the technological side, and practicing martial arts is equivalent to starting from scratch. Wouldn't it be funny if it took 300 years to learn and defeat the alien demons that have successfully invaded 2,999 worlds?

This book is too limited. It says it's about immortals, but it's about martial arts. It's also limited to three professions. A world of cultivating immortals feels like a novel about martial arts online.

Seeing the end of the defense of Cangwu City, the coordination of various military units is well described, but there are a few things that I am unhappy about. 1. The character ends too casually. This should be considered a group portrait description, but the entrance and exit of each character is too abrupt. In the early stage, the little villain who followed the protagonist all the way to Floating Cloud City was taken offline by simply saying "Why are they special?" This was okay. Later on, Chen Ce gave him so many descriptions, but in the next level, he simply disappeared (saying that he had chosen another legion). It felt like he was forcibly taken offline just to give Qi Mei the upper hand? Is your writing power not strong enough? The second is to pretend to be 13 to readers (personal feeling). The expulsion of the Lord of Cangwu City was obviously not done because he could not obtain the permission of 80% of the people, but what is described later seems to be a choice made by the protagonist on his own initiative? You said, "Everyone praises him for making the right choice, and then he appears to be profound but feels happy in his heart." This is a comfortable way to pretend. 13 There is also the part about killing the demons under Fuyun City. Why is beheading the right choice? The author is half-said. According to the description, sealing is clearly the best choice. Why is the protagonist so uncertain about what to do if he already knows? Including building a teleportation array under Fuyun City, I didn't do it because of the obvious benefits at the time, and I didn't understand it if I fought hard. In addition, since we want to describe District A and District A, we should also mention the trialists from other worlds in their districts, right? In fact, they were able to pass through Floating Cloud City perfectly and arrived at Cangwu City early. They must be aware of things in other worlds, right? In addition, the failure of District A is very unnatural. After all, 500 spirit stones were left behind, and District A, which has twice as many talents, would not be familiar with it in advance, and would not know how to let some little monsters in (Wakanda in the Women's Federation knows how to open part of the barrier). In addition, District A and District Two did not divide their troops. Who would have thought that monsters would come out? How do they get through the first few times perfectly?

If I hadn't searched for the author's name, I wouldn't have known about opening a new book. Why are the titles of Qidian books becoming more and more retarded recently? Even if it is a good book, if you cover it with a layer of shit, it will be difficult for others to take a peek!

This is the only book I read that makes me want to keep reading and forget the passage of time. I have also read some of the works of great masters or highly praised novels that many people have mentioned before. But after reading dozens of chapters, I really felt that the writing style was just like Xiaobai's writing. Every one of the protagonists and supporting characters with an above-average IQ is exactly the same routine from eight hundred years ago with a new shell. Or the setting is novel but the writing can't keep up. On the contrary, there are some excellent works that not so many people see and admire. Some people are completely brainwashed and blindly follow what others say is good or bad. It's normal for some people to like novels and some to hate them. I have been reading this novel for three and four days now, and it is considered to be one of the best articles in terms of ideas and writing so far. If you want to read this book, it's best not to read the comments section. Read the fifty chapters first and then make your own judgment.

To screen readers at the beginning, I suggest you give up writing and concentrate on work. Of course, if you write full-time, then go move bricks as soon as possible.

Say a few words, don't vomit or be upset.       ，，       :，，，， Many early level clearance methods seemed to be very methodical and unique, but in the end it felt like a reckless person. For example, he chose to stay in the black fog to collect ores and search for resources. The protagonist analyzed it properly and finally stayed in. The way to pass was to rely on his own strength to be one step ahead of his teammates to forcefully protect his teammates. It was too simple and crude. Ability definition: The author tried his best to realize the indispensability of various professions, thereby proving the importance of the team. However, it felt very torn, that is, the feeling of forcibly assigning roles, such as Zixia, Lingyan, Bishan, and Qingmu. For these professions, I felt that the underlying logic was not clear enough. For example, Zixia, I only saw that the attack was very strong, and she could clear away the demons with one palm, but why was she so strong and why could she not compare with others? The explanation she gave was not convincing enough. Lingyan is extremely fast but fragile, moving mountains, and is a human shield with strong defense. For example, moving mountains are endless mountains that evolve in the heart lake. Lingyan is a swallow, or more advanced, wind, and Zixia is fire. But looking from the front to the back, most of the descriptions I see are very vague idealistic definitions. Why not write down a more practical definition, such as moving mountains, special meat, resistance, strong strength, early descriptions of muscle and bone tempering, and transportation of qi and blood. Isn't it more suitable? Lingyan should greatly improve the ability to run, jump, dodge and move, and can stand or move on non-load-bearing objects, and even borrow light and small objects to fly into the air with luck. Something like this would give a more immersive feeling. The cool point: The difference between online novels and traditional novels is that the rhythm, the cool point, is nothing more than: pretending to be cool, beating monsters to upgrade, and the rhythm of dullness and climax is appropriate. In terms of character creation, the resources that you have worked so hard to obtain should be given to others. Then, after training, you can't become the protagonist to help. For example, for the internal team, the extremely precious spiritual stones can be released at any time, and the personnel who have been trained with great difficulty will run away when encountering problems. After returning to the earth, the people will be poached and leave as soon as possible, without any countermeasures? What if I send a blacklist notice? To use another analogy, the government comes to wish to donate resources, and the protagonist doubles the amount tenfold with a wave of his hand. Can he just donate? In fact, the author has written corresponding measures, but most of them are just scratching the surface. Perhaps, maybe I am too violent. In the end, the strength gap between the protagonist and the villain is too big. Even if you want to show the struggle and survival of all mankind in the face of disaster as a whole, outline courage, hard work, etc. For good qualities, sufficient positive feedback must be arranged locally Furthermore, in the general environment, most of the other legions are just rotten fish and shrimps, and there are no distinctive characters with extremely personal characteristics, such as using soldiers like gods or strategizing. It is unrealistic to win by relying on this. Finally, to summarize, the book is actually not bad, but it is not refreshing enough to read. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.

Since I started using anti-virus software, I have always felt that the lazy bird was captured by the virus. The latter ones are basically incomparable with anti-virus. Until now, I can't even find the author when I search for Lazy Bird at Qidian.

Hehe

The author is an older man in his thirties or forties. He writes things that look like they were written in the last century. The plot is old-fashioned and the protagonist is vulgar. Three chapters are a little poisonous, and ten chapters are a big poison. There are only a few minor issues with each chapter individually, but together they look awkward. Not only are they not fun to watch, they actually made me fall asleep while watching them, which is really admirable.

There are still good-looking points, but it is full of a sense of lack, a sense of powerlessness and lack that the author wants to try his best to describe the real skills of the world of cultivating immortals, but the writing is not enough.

Know a few islands

But let's report the lazy bird together. If you are too lazy to urinate, please give me some extra cum 😜😜😜

This book is a rare piece of fairy grass. Don't deny it just because some people say it's not good, and don't deny it if you don't agree with your own ideas after reading some of the content. Keep reading, keep reading, and there will be explanations.

Pig's Knuckle is not a virgin bitch, he just has a big picture. He is still black-hearted when he should be black-hearted. He knows how to be evil and keep a low profile! Unfortunately, there haven't been any old coins so far, or plots where the routines are reversed and reversed, or the tables are flipped over when they disagree. I miss the first few books written by Lazy Bird.

It was good at the beginning, but it fell apart in the middle. The protagonist had no plug-ins, and relied on various layouts with the authority of one or two levels of the formation. It is the same as the big guys in the cultivation world who use the formation without permission. Upgrades also have the resources to upgrade at will, and others have lived hundreds of years in vain.

Please improve! Don't be too inverse. I'm stupid. Birds are not human, and Wei Dasha is even less human. Even the readers have been tricked. In the first two chapters, everyone thinks you are Wei Dasha, and the next second you are really cool. Even we readers have been tricked and are not human beings.