Medieval Spiritual Revival

I have found that there are more and more good works recently. If you want dark fantasy, the author can look at Cthulhu (although it is science fiction). DND and Warhammer should also provide some fantasy ideas (DND, one of the ancestors of modern fantasy games, has a too complex and huge background) Fullmetal Alchemist (the author has ideological problems but good ideas) Royal Knights Order (too many famous dark scenes) Devilman, Flame Fist and Chainsaw Man are also good works 😏 Although most of them are dark and desperate works, their depth is enough. I hope it will help the author's future creations

Are you considering becoming a glorious second-shift beast? 🙂

The author has a completed novel, so you can rest assured that his character is guaranteed. It's just that in real life, I'm a social beast. Sometimes updates suddenly stop. It's not tj anymore, but I was caught working overtime.

Let's talk about the key elements of wizards and western fantasy novels in my impression. Let me tell you in advance that all the following are the author's personal thoughts, which may not be correct, but will be reflected in the book I wrote. Although the protagonist of this article has access to the medical system, he will definitely embark on the path of a wizard. In my imagination, the medical system will provide unknown herbs and medicines, and the protagonist's job is to judge the efficacy and side effects of these things, and rely on wisdom to gradually become extraordinary. I really like the extraordinary profession of wizard. But unfortunately, there are very few entertainment works that can achieve the wizard setting in my mind, including many very famous Western fantasy novels, which are actually just Eastern fantasy dressed in Western fantasy settings. First of all, a wizard should be wise, not necessarily righteous wisdom, nor necessarily kind wisdom. He can cast functional spells through inconspicuous props and materials. Therefore, the wizard's power does not have to be strong, and he does not have to be able to move instantly, or have a level 10 magic that can change the continental shelf with one shot. When a wizard uses more than a dozen materials, a very strict ritual, or some ancient spell to transform himself into a falcon, spends three days and three nights flying from the castle to the palace, and transforms back into a human again in full view of the public. This feeling is not necessarily worse than the sword fairy traveling across the planet in an hour, or the great magician teleporting anywhere. In movies, there are not many characters that give me this traditional wizarding feeling. One is Snow White's stepmother, the other is Snape from Hogwarts, and Voldemort likes to be parasitic on other people, but doesn't like Gandalf the Whitebeard. Castle, wizard, tower. Herbs, materials, potions. Spells, research, experiments. These are what wizards should have. In addition, the background of this article is an imaginary world created based on real factors. There is no East Asia, America and Australia, and only a little bit of Africa. The writing style is specifically imitating the accent of translators and medieval biographical novels. It may be too harsh at first, but it will gradually correct later.

To be honest, each chapter is not coherent. You have to read half of each chapter to know what the story is about. You may feel very literary and think it is quite literary. It is obvious that you want to imitate the writing style of European novels in the 18th and 19th centuries, but readers will be very tired after reading it. Each chapter is like reading a new novel. Furthermore, the protagonist encounters too many accidents, too many uncontrollable things, and the most important thing is that the research is too clumsy. In the final analysis, it is because your writing is free-wheeling. You write wherever you think. There are too many things you want to write, and then you cram a lot of uncontrollable content into one or two chapters. For example, when it comes to foreign wars, that is a big background that can be written for one or two hundred chapters. As a result, you ended it hastily and you took the story too casually.

The protagonist is a bit like a psychopath. He was an ordinary person who didn't understand anything at the beginning and then became very bad inexplicably. Then he got better again. The system is poisonous, right? It's so broken. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I read a chapter. The protagonist is a villain who has turned around. It's a rubbish novel.

I don't know how to evaluate it. It's completely different from the introduction, and there are big gaps in the narrative, which makes it very confusing. Moreover, I don't like to listen to people's advice, so I wrote out a lot of poisonous points. I know it's very poisonous, but I just want to write it because I think it's cool. Obviously the writing technique is quite good, but it also feels like that later on. Suddenly, the protagonist is cut into trash, and a bunch of ordinary people and people who have just received a little muscle strengthening become the main fighting force, killing the monsters that were produced before. I can only say that your results are purely due to your own death. You obviously have good subject matter and writing skills, but you don't listen to others and like to have your own way. Ah, yes, yes, please be more careful next time.

It's a lot of nonsense and has no point. If you fail to show off, can you be more concise and clear?

Alas, I feel that this book is actually good, but it is very annoying when the protagonist's things are always spread out by various accidents. Things that cannot be controlled by oneself always annoy people. Also, the protagonist feels too proud and completely irrational. It feels like the author wants to write the protagonist to feel like a crazy doctor in the movie but cannot write that kind of B style. As a result, he is not like the mastermind, BOSS, noble, or time traveler.

I don't even know what you are writing. It's just like a hodgepodge, so I can't figure out what it is. When I saw the first story about Mazarin waking up, I couldn't understand what it was about and how it had anything to do with werewolves and the like. It is recommended to post it to Tieba

The writing is really not good, the writing is too messy

There seems to be something wrong with the character design. It doesn't have the cultivation of modern people at all. You must know that the thinking of modern people is very different from that of ancient people.

To be honest, when I was a child, I clicked on it two or three times, but I was poisoned by the second one. Originally, the theme of the revival of spiritual energy in the Middle Ages was quite interesting. I was attracted by the explanation. But the system in the second chapter, even if it has a system, it is still a medical system, and I can't stand it.

The protagonist is really inhumane and has no sense of involvement. The protagonist's character unnaturally brings the reader into opposition. It's amazing. I guess many people are not sensitive to the protagonist.

Long-winded, messy, emotionless, and distorted human nature

This book is like a foreign book that has been translated on a computer and then randomly deleted or added some paragraphs. It is full of erroneous sentences and incoherent paragraphs, creating a novel with an incoherent preface and an incoherent follow-up. In general, neurotic patients have broad ideas that normal people cannot understand or follow.

After reading chapter ninety-seven, several supporting female characters died, and the main character suffered from schizophrenia. It was simply a poisonous weed.

It made me a little nauseous, it was a dark text, it slipped away

What happens after Chapter 93?

At first I felt uncomfortable thinking that the protagonist was a modern person, but after about ten chapters it was better. Now the protagonist has become a sea tiger and crazy guy in my eyes, which makes it much more comfortable.