The Wizard of Douluo World

Withdraw, withdraw 😒

I understand that in Douluo fanfics, as long as there are characters in it, the plot development is biased towards Tang Clan/Shrek/Haotian Sect/Tang San and the people around him. This character will gradually become extreme and double-standard.

After signing the contract, the plot fell apart. First, he destroyed the Golden Dragon Spear, and then told Gu Yuena about Tang San of the God Realm. How could a four-ringed person with no background know this? The key is that Gu Yuena still doesn't doubt it. It's really outrageous. The collapse is estimated to be around 400,000 words.

The author is currently writing the plot very smoothly. I hope the author can clearly understand the horizontal comparison between the two power systems. Don't do anything. A ninth-level wizard is equivalent to the extreme Douluo operation.

Knowledge is power. We must not take the opportunity to tie Tang Shenwang to the operating table for research.

Generally speaking, it's okay, you can read it, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The article does not explain why Gu Yuena and Tang Wulin don't know each other. They met when they were children. There is also why Gu Yuena takes the initiative to approach the protagonist. The article does not explain clearly. If it is five stars, it can only be given two stars.

There's that Xu Xiaoyan everywhere. He comes out every few chapters. What's the use besides talking to people? He also helps her become a god. He also sticks his head out and shows a sweet smile. After it's put on the shelves, the writing is even more confusing. No wonder it's on the street.

Nowadays, most of the Douluo 2 fanfics feature Huo Yuhao as the protagonist. Huo Yuhao's moral level has dropped below the floor tiles since the Soul Master Competition, and he is comparable to the Tang Shenwang. Cheating, playing on behalf of others, and killing people in matches are a matter of course! ! In the end, he became the Tang family's domestic dog and Licking Dog. Even if Huo Yuhao knew the truth, he might be very happy. After all, humans and Licking Dogs are not the same kind of creatures, such as Bibi Dong! !

Gu Yuena

The only Douluo III that is interesting to watch, the author writes it very well. I hope that the god can be strapped to the operating table for study later 😏

I feel that Shrek Academy should be responsible for the bombing. I estimate that at least 2/3 of the people in the Federation want them dead. For example, in their first-year final exam, they challenge someone who is one level higher than themselves. If they lose, they will say that they are one level higher than me. It is useless if they win. If they beat the opponent, they will say that I am from Shrek Academy. This is very hateful.

I highly doubt that the plot after Chapter 100 will be continued by AI.

How should I put it? Overall it's pretty good, but Gu Yuena's writing is weird and a bit inexplicable.

Without Gu Yuena, I think all my hair is gray, so I'll just use it 😏

Why is Tang San so powerful? Is his deduction ability so strong? Can the development in ten thousand years be deduced down to the centimeter? Is it really that powerful and destructive? Isn't it invincible?

After thinking about it again, let me tell you, first of all, I really like the setting. Other fans copied the original work day by day, first Na'er, then Gu Yue, then Gu Yuena or Sanyi. I never thought about how helpless Gu Yuena was (I said Na'er was separated and lived in the outside world for several years before she was released) Find it and taste it yourself), I am very happy that this book is not divided and it is Gu Yuena from the beginning, but the writing in the back has deteriorated. You said Gu Yuena is the heroine, there is basically nothing about her in the back. Anyway, everything is with the protagonist, and the feeling of interaction is not allowed. Xiaoyan has a lot of roles, and all kinds of resources and benefits are Xu Xiaoyan's (as for Gu Yuena, just one sentence, she doesn't need it like the protagonist). Anyway, I saw later that Gu Yuena got a set of elemental amplification necklaces, wizard training methods, and a sword from the protagonist, and that's it. You read the three correctly (Xu Xiaoyan: mirror soul power increase and natal weapon, tailor-made training manual, fairy grass, customized soul enhancement liquid, tailor-made martial soul (Gu Yuena helped)) Guess who looks like the heroine, and the protagonist and Gu Yuena are talking about the same person, no problem , if you don't believe it, you can bring it in and see. It's totally fine. Let's not talk about it. Let me just say it directly. Gu Yuena feels that she has become the protagonist's strength amplifier. There is basically nothing to do, and there is no interaction (not as much as Xu Xiaoyan). Also, she treats Xu Xiaoyan well. Come on. It's inexplicable. To be honest, friends help each other rather than blindly giving and giving. They are not friends. What do you think of others? What is your relationship? Why are you blindly tolerant and giving, and why can others accept it with peace of mind? Gu Yuena directly becomes the vase and the protagonist's strength amplifier. I can't see her role except for the fusion of a martial soul (of course, she basically has no role. After all, her roles will be the same if she is the protagonist, and the protagonist will be the same if she is the protagonist. I am speechless). Summary: The female protagonist and the male protagonist are one. Hua, it's the same with her or without him. The relationship between friends is like that of a father and daughter. He is good to her with infinite devotion. If you can explain it clearly in one sentence, I will love it for three or four chapters. Regardless of how good I am to others, I am always better to Nana. It's just that there is no description. You can think about how good it is in detail. I can't imagine that it's your fault. I'm sorry.

I would like to state here that as of the past year, the content of this book has been rubbish. The author has no idea how to write it. It is also suspected of plagiarizing another book: The Legend of Dragon and Phoenix. It is not recommended to read it.

I felt that my place was broken when I met Yun Ming. There were a lot of meaningless things about the will of the world and so on. Why should I tell him that the protagonist was of no use? It was just a loser mentality. She wanted to show off to others what others didn't know. Yun Ming even wanted to kill the protagonist while they were talking. What kind of contract could I sign?

It's very well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

The latest plot actually split Xu Xiaoyan and Le Zhengyu, leaving Xu Xiaoyan with an original and inexplicable female character. So what was the purpose of the previous plot with Le Zhengyu? It's incomprehensible, it's too poisonous.

Looking at the protagonist, I am speechless. The middle and late stages of Douluo from Douluo to Douluo are when the Tang family has the weakest influence on Douluo. And the author must not have read the Legend of the Dragon King carefully. In the original work, Tang Hao himself said that in order to avoid the detection of the Lord of the Abyss, his soul consciousness was dispersed throughout the Douluo plane, and he had no ability to interfere with the Douluo. And Ah Yin is just a seed of life and has not yet become the true core of life. As for being afraid of this or that?

It's terrible, and the wizard system is not systematic. The author just writes whatever comes to his mind, and the emotional drama is not good either. Reading this book is a complete waste of time.

It's not like bro, all books like this are plagiarized. The plagiarized book is called Douluo Fighting Dragon Warrior, Magic and Martial Arts.

After reading more than 60 chapters, I only have one thought, and that is purely anecdotal. I don't know how anyone in the comments would say something like "the writing is very good"…

I have a suggestion for the author. It's my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. What the author has finished writing this book: Are you interested in writing a Peerless Tang Sect fanfic? If the heroine is concerned, I hope it will be a double heroine. Because there are no Peerless fanfictions on the Internet that write about these two characters. I think it is very interesting. Most of them are about either the harem or the single heroine, which is too boring. Also, don't write about Orange and Wang Qiuer. These two women are too disgusting. The words of the first heroine: It's the rebellious and handsome Wang Dong'er instead of the suture monster Tang Wutong. I hope the second heroine is the transgendered Huo Yuhao. After recently watching Huo Yutong in Douluo: Peerless Light, I feel that the female Huo Gua is so cute and gentle. She is simply a good wife and mother. Think about it. How interesting it would be if the male protagonist married these two. Their martial arts fusion skills The goddess of light is so beautiful. She not only has two experiences, but also a third experience. So I hope to write this two female protagonists. They are the male protagonist and the female protagonist of the original novel. But Huo Yuhao has become a female. As for the beginning of the story, if the author has no inspiration, just refer to my ideas. I struggled to think of the story inspiration. First of all, the male protagonist is called Long Xuanyu or Long Haoyu. The male protagonist is the second generation of Blue Star rich. He was gentle and kind, but his family was ruined and his property was taken away by his fiancée and his good brother. These two adulterers and adulterers wanted to get rid of the male protagonist, but they were killed by the male protagonist who prepared a detonator along with the two scum. The male protagonist's good brother was named Ji Boda, and his fiancée was named Liu Ruyan. I couldn't help but have been inspired by watching too much of Emperor Ruyan recently. The catchphrase of Emperor Ruyan is: Liu Ruyan was not born in the sky, and the scum is like the eternal night. The male protagonist's soul traveled to the universe of the Divine Seal Throne, was chosen by the soul of the God of Creation, and became the son of luck to save Haoyue, the God of Punishment. The male protagonist was reincarnated successfully. Long Haochen's brother. After rebirth, the male protagonist became cold and indifferent. He sealed his heart with cement and did not believe in love and friendship. He only believed in family affection. The male protagonist is very good at pretending. It is difficult for anyone to leave the male protagonist's heart. Only his weak brother, mother and his teacher Yi Lao can have a place in his heart. It is difficult for others to enter. The male protagonist received the second ancestral throne given by the Creator God. It was created by the Creator God using the power of chaos and creation. The Seal Throne of Chaos and Eternity. The super artifacts Sword of Chaos and Armor of Eternity are specially designed to seal and control the power of divine punishment. Throne of the Divine Seal. The male protagonist is the eldest disciple of Electrolux and is also Electrolux's favorite disciple. Electrolux sacrificed himself to save Long Haochen who was killed by the Demon God Emperor and passed on the pseudo-super artifact of the Tower of Eternity. The male protagonist is either called Long Xuanyu or Long Haoyu. The author decides because the Holy God of the Dead saw in the male protagonist that his past self was betrayed by his lover and his family was killed. However, the male protagonist I will meet Yi Lao again. You should say, why didn't the male protagonist save Long Haochen? Because at this time, the male protagonist was undergoing the test of the Divine Seal Throne of Chaos and Eternity. The test was more difficult than the Creation and Eternal Divine Seal Throne, so it took longer. After the test, the male protagonist got the truth told by the Creation Soul, and knew that Haoyue's purpose was to destroy the plane in the final battle. Together with Long Haochen and the Demon God Emperor, they stopped Haoyue. However, the three of them joined forces and still couldn't defeat Haoyue, who had the strength of the God of Creation. They could only let Long Haochen play the emotional card to contain Haoyue. In order to retain his strength without killing Haoyue, the male protagonist could only use the Sword of Chaos to peel off his second godhead, the Godhead of Divine Punishment. The original Haoyue was the brother of the God of Creation and the guardian god of the universe. However, due to some reasons, such as experiencing some tragic things in the Creation Continent, he was forced to have evil thoughts of destruction and formed a second God of Divine Punishment, thus degenerating from the God of Heavenly Guard to the God of Divine Punishment. He became a demon who destroyed the world. However, Haoyue also became a contradictory person. He had dual personalities. One was kind and was Haoyue's Godhead. The other was the Godhead of Divine Punishment. The two gods fought with each other, causing Haoyue to lose consciousness. One moment he destroyed the world, and the other moment he told the demons to build the Demon God Pillar and kill himself completely. In order to protect the universe, it was like the Dragon God of Douluo. The Dragon God's Creation Godhead and Destruction Godhead. The inability to coexist and integrate caused the Dragon God to go crazy and trigger a war in the divine world. He was eventually divided into two halves by the Shura God and turned into the kind and wise Silver Dragon King and the violent and destructive Golden Dragon King. This is also the case for Haoyue. However, Haoyue does not have a strong person like Shura God who can split his own into two halves. But this time there is such a person, it is the male protagonist. The male protagonist uses the super artifact Chaos Sword specially to deal with Haoyue. Haoyue's Divine Punishment was cut off. Haoyue regained the God of Heavenly Defence, but her strength dropped to that of a God King. However, Haoyue no longer had to destroy the world. But before she disappeared, the evil thoughts of Divine Punishment used her last strength to activate the black hole and destroy all the worlds. The male protagonist saw that the black hole was directed at the Divine Punishment in his hand. He quickly made a decision to sacrifice himself and save all the worlds in order to protect his family and absorb the Divine Punishment. His strength skyrocketed, reaching the level of a half-step creation god. Although he counteracted the black hole, the skyrocketing power made the hero's soul and body unable to bear it. He suffered backlash and fell into the black hole. The hero's body was shattered by the black hole. The body quickly disappeared. The God of Chaos and Eternity Seal Throne activated its power to protect the hero's body for rapid regeneration. During the process of decomposition and regeneration, the power of the black hole finally disappeared. The hero's body recovered and maintained the appearance of the hero when he was ten years old. However, the Divine Seal Throne tried its best, but luckily it was a blessing in disguise. The black hole drew out the power of chaos, which was absorbed by the Chaos and Eternity Divine Seal Throne and the Tower of Eternity. The Eternity Tower evolved into a super artifact. This idea refers to Tang San in The Legend of Tang Sect Heroes absorbing the power of chaos to advance. However, the male protagonist and the others arrived in a dimensional space with no end in sight. The Divine Seal Throne wrapped the acquired chaos power around the male protagonist to form a shield. It is used to protect the male protagonist and then continue to travel through the dimensional space. Some people want to ask me why I didn't use the power of chaos to protect the male protagonist at the beginning. It's not because I don't want to because I have no power anymore. The male protagonist has just neutralized the black hole and consumed too much divine power and is no longer able to fight. Some people say that there is a space world in the Divine Seal Throne. Why don't you go in and avoid it? The male protagonist cannot enter while wearing the Divine Seal Armor. And even if you go in, it will be in vain. The Divine Seal Throne will also be damaged. There was a situation where the Demon God Emperor broke and damaged Long Haochen's Divine Seal Armor. The Divine Seal Throne was unable to be used during the damage repair process. Not to mention the power of the black hole. I don't know how long it took. He flew through the dimensional space and finally arrived in a universe. It is also the Douluo Universe. The Divine Seal Throne flew to a planet under the guidance. This is Douluo Planet, which is also what we know about Douluo Continent. Huo Yuhao has changed his gender because this is a fanfiction. It was even more of a surprise given to Tang San by the Lord of the Plane before his death. In order to express his feeling of being killed, he turned his father into the Lord of the Plane for his own selfish purposes. He actually murdered him, a Douluo Continent native Plane Will. He hid the gender of the Son of Destiny so that Tang San could see that he was a boy. He sent his daughter down to seduce the Son of Destiny and become his own. But if he found out that his son-in-law was actually a woman, would he be able to accept it? Still talking about turning the female Huo Yuhao into a man, Tang San, the double-standard king, is also capable. No matter you are a boy or a girl, as long as you are the son of luck, just be my Tang San's dog. I can't get it and no one else can get it. It's just pitiful for Tang San's daughter. The female Huo Yuhao who just came out of the White Tiger Duke's Palace came out and set up a tent in a forest to practice. Her soul power has reached level nine in a few months. You can break through the tenth level and hunt the first soul ring. You can avenge your mother by becoming a soul master. At this moment, there was a loud noise in the sky and something fell near Huo Yuhao's tent. Huo Yuhao went out to check the things that fell from the sky and opened a huge pit. There was a person in the pit. Seeing that the person was still alive, Xiao Yuhao carried him into his tent to recover from his injuries. This was the first time she was alone with a boy. Her mother said that there were differences between men and women, but it was a special situation. In order to save people, it was impossible for her to take out a second tent. She bought this one with the remaining money left by her mother. She really answered the sentence, "A penny can't help a hero." The male protagonist Long Haoyu woke up. Where is this place? Xiao Yuhao said this is my tent. But I saved you. Otherwise, you will be eaten by wild beasts. The male protagonist said, Thank you. Hello, my name is Long Haoyu. Hello, my name is Huo Yuhao. In this way, they met Wang Donger in Shrek. The male protagonist joined the Tang Clan because he had not read the Douluo Dalu novel, so he did not know that the most priority problem in front of the male protagonist was to solve the problem of food and clothing. The conditions of the Tang Clan were not bad, and he joined Shrek Academy. There were no extra rooms in the dormitory. He shared a room with Wang Dong and Huo Yuhao, and it was all about the stories, bonds and feelings between them. My suggestion is the author. The early stories are usually bland and funny. The mid-term game is full of blood. In the later stage, the three-view rift valley becomes stronger and upgraded to resist Tang San. It also prevents Wang Dong from turning into Tang Wutong, and also prevents Tang San from having to make the female Huo Yuhao become a man and fall in love with Tang Wutong. Anyway, in the later stage, the main theme is a kind father and a filial daughter. The hero's martial spirit setting is that the first martial spirit is the Nine-Headed Demonic Dragon of Divine Punishment, the second martial spirit is the Divine Seal Throne, and the third martial spirit is the Tower of Eternity. And why give such a strong setting to the male protagonist? It's not good if it's not strong. Otherwise, there is no way to defeat Tang San at this time. There is no plug-in system. Otherwise, he will join the God of Destruction faction. Otherwise, he will join the dragon soul beast faction. Otherwise, he will be a dog for Tang San. Tang San in this period is too strong. My inspiration ends here. Some of the settings of the Divine Seal Throne are written by San Shao. For example, the Demon God Pillar was built by Haoyue after telling the demons. This is really written by San Shao. Some of the settings behind are added by me. Anyway, it is written by a fan. It is normal to add some settings. San Shao always likes to change his own settings. He recently wrote a new book called The Divine Seal Throne: The Bright Moon in the Sky. I did this for the needs of the plot. After all, I am not writing about the Divine Seal Throne, but about Peerless Tang Sect. The Divine Seal Throne This is the beginning of the early story. The author must want to say that you are so inspired, why don't you write a book yourself? But I really don't know if I can read novels in the future, let alone write novels. The comments the author saw I wrote are all my own suggestions and inspirations. If this comment makes the author feel bad, I will delete this comment. Here are some women's clothing Huo Yuhao

Very awesome🤓✌️

The writing of Dou San is okay, but the writing of Dou II is too watery. The creativity of the book is very good, but the author didn't write it well. Don't be too watery when writing Dou II. Let the post-god world be written too hastily. The will of the world is on your side. You can follow the flow of heaven in the future. There is a wizard novel about conquering other worlds. It will feel much better if you write slowly according to this situation. The author still has not mastered this idea. Well, the author also made the protagonist too weak. If you have the strength, you should solve it early and develop it vigorously. The protagonist said there that I mainly want to train you, otherwise what will you do if you leave us? If you say so and do it, forget it, you will finish everything later, turn around and do Tang Hao, A Yin, Tang Wulin, you just say you want to be good at braille and that's it 😰, the back part is too damn watery! ! !

The book is good, and the plot is okay, but it's too clumsy. Does the author's family live in a reservoir? Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water. Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water.

Tai Linwen, please delete the heroine, it will affect the reading experience.

As far as the Douluo trilogy is concerned, Shrek's best dean is probably Moon, and the others are more or less violent. Of course, there are also reasons for being too old🤤