The Sword Cultivator of Douluo Dalu

I suggest changing the title of the book to "Poseidon of Douluo Continent"

The author is too clumsy and too long-winded. Can't you simplify it a bit? Don't write anything unnecessary.

I hope the author will make progress in this emotional drama. The single female protagonist in the previous one was great, and the emotional drama is like boiled water 😢

I also read the author's last book and finished it. Although that book left me feeling bland and a bit watery, it didn't make me sick like this one. This book is more bland and watery than the previous one, and it kind of ruins the characters. Let me talk about a few points that disgust me The first point: the handling of the relationship between characters. I have also made posts before complaining about the protagonist's differences in the relationship between Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena (ps: at that time, the author had not yet written about Gu Yuena's memory of seeing the protagonist, and did not reveal that the two were related in advance). The protagonist is afraid of trouble because of Xianyu (as he calls himself), and alienates Tang Wulin time and time again. But Gu Yuena, who could also bring him trouble (before Gu Yuena exposed a certain relationship), did give up alienation. Regardless of whether they are in the same orphanage or living together, if you really want to distance yourself, there are always ways, such as ignoring the other person. When the other person is close, you can also reduce contact and reduce conversations. As long as the other person does not expose their identity and is willing to follow the rules of human society, then the protagonists can always keep their distance from each other. But the protagonist gave up very quickly, or the author didn't want to write about Gu Yuena being alienated at all, because then the author couldn't continue writing. The cost was that the character's handling of the relationship gave me a bad feeling. Moreover, the protagonist's self-proclaimed outlook on life is about being a salted fish, but it did not give me, the reader, the idea of ​​being a salted fish at all. Instead, he revealed a bit of arrogance. From the perspective of God he once had, he took himself out and constantly criticized Douluo's one or two things (it is undeniable that he is qualified because he is an outsider, but is it necessary to write so much? It is already enough). On the contrary, the male protagonist of "Cultivation Chat Group" really gave people the impression that everything was just a coincidence before he really made up his mind. Luo Li in this book didn't give me this feeling at all. Second point: The sword cultivator is still the martial spirit of the main character, the mage (or the wizard from the previous film) who uses elements. Both the title of the book and the protagonist's martial spirit are swords. As a result, the soul skills and the protagonist's domain are currently related to elements (except for the ridiculous sword intention, which gives me the feeling that it is a by-product of understanding the elements. On the contrary, the sword intention is the most out of place). As a result, the protagonist's martial spirit was written in the recent chapter, and the sword was actually the Silver Dragon Spear, given to him by the Silver Dragon King. The inexplicable reason for writing the body swap is to allow the protagonist to better understand the power of the elements. Then why write about sword cultivation? Continue to be the wizard from the previous movie. The third point: the water of content. I wrote a rough chapter of "Peerless Tang Sect" and told it to Leng Yaozhu as an unofficial history. In the latest chapter, I also wrote out the process of cooking, and I won't mention anything else. It feels like the author has no content to write and is just trying to make up the word count. Am I paying money to watch you write about the cooking process? Or should I read the abridged version of other books and read the general content? The fourth point: the original personality of the character. Let's talk about Gu Yuena again. Gu Yuena's setting here is that she has read the protagonist's memory and understood the general story of Dou 1 to Dou 4, as well as her own final ending. The author himself also wrote about Gu Yuena's evaluation of herself as a love brain, and that Gu Yuena thought she would never be like this again. However, what the author wrote did not give me, the reader, any change in her. The protagonist and Ouyang Zixin met by chance, and Gu Yuena asked the other party to dream about deepening their relationship with Tang Wulin. (Not to mention the reasons the author found, just talking about the process, this is the process) Afterwards, it was teased several times that the protagonist's fanfics before time travel would exclude her Gu Yuena. She also made it clear that she was described as the most beautiful woman before the protagonist traveled through time. Isn't this still a love story? It replaced Tang Wulin as the current protagonist, openly and secretly mentioned that she was the number one beauty, and accepted her. The reasons given for Ouyang's dream seemed to me to be nonsense. When combined with what happened later, my feeling was that the protagonist looked at Ouyang too many times because of Tang Wulin. Moreover, this kind of behavior is very despicable and inconsistent with the character of the Silver Dragon King. (One more thing, the plot of frequent body swaps and the plot of Gu Yuena forcing Li Luo to arrange a skirt is really stupid, disgusting, and unfair.)

The protagonist can inherit the water god's throne later

I would like to give the author a piece of advice, don't keep talking. The dialogues between the characters in the previous book and this one were all just talking.

Please ask if there will be a female protagonist. I hope there will be more female protagonists, but it still depends on the author's ideas. Finally stop getting wet

I hope it will be a single heroine, Gu Yuena, without a harem. I hope it will be a single heroine, Gu Yuena, without a harem.

The writing style is very good, not too brainless, and the analysis is also well-founded, and the plot is also layered. Of course, if you like to read the kind of mindless and exciting writing, you don't know, well, I still learned a lot about writing from the author's writing style.

Although you have cooperated with the Silver Dragon King, your disadvantage is still too great. After all, there are a lot of god kings in the great god circle. You only have one god level here. Alas, are you sure the protagonist has no cheats? There are no big cheats in Dou San, so it's really a bit difficult.