Having Failed in Building the Foundation, I Just Want to Spread My Branches.

The writing is pretty good so far, but the heroine must not be very strong. By the way, is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? Personally, I feel that multiple female protagonists are better, because each female protagonist will help the protagonist, and they all have connections and can improve themselves. The only bad thing is that there are none. But you must not write about the Shura field. What you are looking at is the family. It is more interesting to have more people and more strength.

The more I write, the more real it becomes, and it looks good. For example, it is really good to give birth to a child without spiritual roots. For another example, if you take a concubine, you can have multiple helpers. Actually, I feel that the author can write about marrying one from every profession, such as array master, weapon refiner, talisman master, etc.

According to the setting of this book, the origin of the golden elixir of human golden elixir monks can be absorbed and promoted by human monks. The golden elixir of human golden elixir monks has become an important resource. This will have at least two consequences. One is that those golden elixir monks who cannot advance will leave the golden elixir to the younger generations so that they can advance. Second, the big forces will hunt down the golden elixir monks of the small forces everywhere to collect resources. This kind of world of cultivating immortals is darker than cultivating immortals in the underworld. It is simply hell.

Let's commemorate it, a rare first place

Fortunately it's not Weibo, otherwise your plot about buying and selling female tribesmen wouldn't be washed away.

Author, I feel that it would be better if there are more female protagonists. The family can expand and develop, and the clan can have more people.

Let's finish the college entrance examination first and then write it in August or October next year. Sorry(இдஇ; )

The subject matter has a bit of a period feel! This requires writing and plot to attract readers.

Please forgive me if there are any typos or incorrect sentences, and I also ask everyone to help me correct them, thank you! The author is a newbie, and is learning writing skills, conceiving plots, and gradually making progress... Thank you again! 😁😁

The words used to describe it are written in a weird way

This update is too slow. The writing is pretty good. I'll wait until next year to read it.

Are there any similar family stories, this one starts from the beginning, instead of the kind where the main character has a big family at the beginning, which is very dull, a bunch of people, and you have no impression at all after reading it 🤭

The writing is good, but not enough to read.

The investment is successful, let's take a look at my work "Lords of Two Realms"

First of all, I want to give it a thumbs up. I personally think the subject matter is pretty good.

Don't be such an old brat. . .

Is it updated yet? It's pretty good, don't be a eunuch.

How come the protagonist does not have a treasure to protect him when he is reborn, nor does he have a system, nor does he have an innate world in the universe! How did you travel through time and be reborn? Bad review!

Why not update? Isn't the money good?

This spiritual vein setting is not very good. Why not go from level one to level one, but from level five to level one?

There is a recent book shortage, do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~