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I really don't know why, but almost all Hong Kong comprehensive novels feature harems. A good Taoist priest acts like a pornographic film.

Don't read harem. If you're writing about horror, don't write this. Times have changed. In the past, many people read harem. It's troublesome to tell the truth in novels with female protagonists. It's not easy to write.

Let me give you a suggestion. When writing a Hong Kong-Chinese ghost movie or a supernatural movie, the protagonist should not be too fierce. Otherwise, you can specify a character. This does not mean that you should write that he is not strong, but he must be logical. Becoming stronger is a process. It cannot be said that you are particularly strong when you first join the Tao. It is just like fighting monsters to upgrade. First fight small monsters and slowly upgrade. When fighting big monsters, form a group and find helpers. In the early stage of fighting the boss, it is best not to just find a bunch of helpers and beat him up in a group. This will show that the protagonist has an IQ and is not just rushing forward after getting the golden finger. If you write a very strong organization in the early stage, you will basically die miserably as a newcomer if you crush the game.

To be honest with the author, you can't tell the difference between Taoism and Taoism at all. You are writing about Taoism under the guise of Taoism. Taoism does not know how to use mahogany swords and talismans, does not know thunder methods, and does not know all the core contents of Taoism. Taoism really has nothing to do with gods and ghosts.

What's the difference between traveling through Hong Kong and not opening a harem, and being a eunuch?

To be honest, the First Commandment should not be in this mixed world. Youdaofa completely conflicts with the desperate world view of the First Commandment. The First Commandment can only be a stand-alone copy and cannot be integrated into other Youdaofa worlds. Ghosts have no means of resistance. Humans are just captives raised by ghosts. The protagonist's miscellaneous department is raised by upper-level ghosts to deal with unruly new ghosts.

Before I started watching it, I entered the comment area and found a bunch of people arguing about whether to have a harem or not. I have been reading novels for many years, from renting books in bookstores to piracy on websites to now subscribing to genuine books. If you don't write about the harem at the beginning, almost no one will read it, and you can't write about it from the neck down. The harem and non-harem each lead the way. Since the starting point standards have become more and more strict in the past few years, many harem style masters have either changed their careers or stopped writing. Single female protagonists without female protagonists have become the mainstream. Those who write about harems are either authors with poor writing skills or newcomers, resulting in fewer and fewer novels that can be read. Several harem novels that are readable are either unfinished or so eunuch that new readers at this stage basically don't like reading them even if they don't hate reading harems in the first place. It wasn't until The Watcher came out that people realized that the harem could still be written in this way. The harem is not dead. After that, more and more authors began to try the harem theme. Only harem-themed novels can be read now. What I want to say after writing so much is that unless you are a big boss, do you think that if you post a post, the author will change the outline to suit your consciousness and change it to harem or no harem? You can only represent yourself!

I hope they don't write the first commandment, the setting is too disgusting. Other ghost movies have a combat power system, but he has nothing.

It's a pity that the more the writing becomes, the more traditional it becomes, and there is no personal style. In the end, the protagonist becomes like a tool man, the main line is not clear, the power system is too complicated and not clear enough, and the fate is over.

Author, couldn't you please stop writing about the protagonist talking to himself? He doesn't have the character of a monk at all. He always looks excited and happy. Do you have any peace of mind?

Come on, authors of the same genre, let's encourage each other

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If Hong Kong TV shows don't look for Cecilia Cheung and Joey Wong, it's like traveling through time in vain.

In other novels, the protagonist jumps over a higher level to fight monsters. The protagonist is shocked by people lower than him many times😨. It stands to reason that he has watched a lot of movies. Why is he always shocked? 😅

The spells are a little awkward, and it is not advisable to patch them together. It would be okay if there are many spells shouted out and there are pictures, but the simple words are a bit awkward. Maybe you can find some basic Taoist scriptures and copy them? After all, the mantra is to show off only if you don't understand.

Author, your plot is not bad, but it is really defeated by your writing. Various sentences do not make sense, the dialogue is awkward, and the rhetoric is inappropriate. Read the comments from the beginning. There are very few people who say that your plot is not good. Most of them are complaining about your wrong use of words and unclear sentences. For example, when you describe the talisman paper, you say that the yellow talisman is as white as new. Do you want to write yellow or white? How rough do you have to be to write this? You need to practice your writing skills. I'll see you next time when you're good at it.

After finishing "I Descend to All Worlds", I have been looking for similar novels. Your introduction seems to be similar, but the reviews don't seem to be good, so I don't dare to read it.

I'm just wondering, are you going to collect the corpse for the Japanese colonel? ? ? It's already pretty good without giving it to him. Good guy, it took me a long time. Is this the foreshadowing?

I want to get a paper marriage certificate. Is this setting convenient for you to figure out the numbers? What kind of rubbish paper Taoist priest?

The book of cows and horses says that after entering the Tao, it takes half a day to enter the Tao, and when it comes to practicing Qi and entering the Tao, it takes half a day to practice the Tao.

Looking at the catalog, there is no mention of the plot of the paper wedding dress? Are you not allowed to write?

Indeed, when writing horror, don't end up writing about a harem, and don't have a female protagonist. With a heroine, unless you make her the same as the protagonist or the protagonist is invincible. It is more difficult to have two protagonists, otherwise the heroine will be criticized as a pendant and a child-bearing tool. Why don't you take her with you after you travel across the world? I'd say you're a scumbag for treating your dick ruthlessly and abandoning your wife. Take it with you, you have to arrange the plot again. If the arrangement is not good, it will be the heroine being a stupid idiot and holding you back.

Are The Ghost Mission and The First Commandment the same world view? The settings are all different. In the first commandment, people say that there are no spells in their world. The so-called black dog blood, rooster blood, and peach wood swords have no effect on the ghosts and ghosts in their world. The ghosts in their world are not afraid of the sun and can still play possession during the day. Once possessed, the original owner immediately becomes a living dead 🙂🙂🙂 This world is different from all ghost worlds that possess Taoism. So I personally feel that if they are combined together, it will poison the readers.

Order it all, please be specific, don't overdo it

The subject matter is good and the writing style is average. Let's make it work. I hope the author can absorb experience and improve. Why should we use the Western world to write about our ghosts, ghosts, Taoism, and immortality? Is it bad? Wanjie Teacher Jiu Shu, Four Eyes, Chizuru. In the early stage, there were ghost movies and zombie movies. In the middle stage, there was Liao Zhai, in the later stage, Journey to the West, etc. Isn't it good? Which one is worse than the West? Is the Lord of Mysteries really that good?

Come to think of it, I've seen it before. I remember that in the last chapter, the protagonist just confessed to dating Yun Jin, and in the next chapter, he tricked another woman into engaging in double cultivation. He gave up on it at that time. Anyone who has seen it can tell me how to deal with this, harem? Or are you looking for female dual practitioners everywhere, but are not responsible?

The protagonist in the first part is quite cool, but later on he becomes more and more slutty, his coolness becomes lower and lower, and he gets excited at every turn.

Suddenly I remembered the first time I read this book, why I clicked in, because I wanted to see time travel into various horror games 😄

The original Hong Kong drama was so good, it had to be withdrawn from "Fengshen Honghuang", and the sense of mystery and expectation was suddenly gone.