My Hong Kong Underworld

I would like to remind the author that it is okay for Hong Kong dramas to include supernatural beings. It is normal. Anyway, most of the Hong Kong dramas I have watched have collapsed due to the inclusion of deadlocks. Others have had no problem adding the special powers of Lyon exorcist policeman Ah Xing or even God of Cookery Guanyin, but as long as the deadlocks are added, it will be over and will inevitably collapse. I have not seen any that are ok. So you must not join a deadlock. The key to a deadlock is that there is nothing to write home about. There is just a long-legged Ma Xiaoling and nothing else. The power system is just like that, and the world must be destroyed and meteorites are needed. It's too long. The key is to have such a little power to win the name. The account was taken, so the Nine-Character Mantra was a wrong version of the Japanese Nine-Character Mantra. There was nothing to look forward to. It was not a serious world at all. Apart from other things, Guanyin, the God of Cookery, was better than those. If I could call on Wang Lingguan, I could get rid of all deadlocks.

The attribute panel is too complicated. I still don't understand how strength, agility, and constitution can be calculated separately. How can you become agile if you don't have strength? Where does strength come from if you don't have constitution? It's obviously one thing that has to be divided into three parts. This author is even weirder. What's the point of making intelligence and then spirit? Is it just to limit development?

Why can he publish a potential new book with only 50,000 words? Looking for someone to edit py?

Fang Min and his family are going to live in public housing. Can they afford to go to Edinburgh school? This school is attended by the children of rich families, and the protagonist is working part-time as a punching bag. What does the author think? Although I know you want to unfold the plot, can't you think of a better way? For example, you can go see beautiful girls with your classmates.

I just don't understand, points, attribute points, skill points, why keep these? The attribute points are almost hundreds! There are dozens of skill points, why keep these? Do you think your body will be able to adapt immediately if you add these attribute points and skill points?

How to put it this way, after reading dozens of chapters, I discovered that one problem is that the protagonist wants to learn everything but is not good at it, and the stall is too big at once. There are too many plot characters at the same time, which is very difficult to control, and it is too high-profile. If it were the real world, I would not survive three episodes.

(Qiu Suzhen)

Why keep the points? If you don't want to improve your strength? Why keep the attribute points? Waiting to die? Are the reactions as fast as a sniper rifle? Are you going to be beaten to death even though you know you're not fast enough?

With this learning system and skill points, it feels like you are constantly running through the plot. In fact, you can directly click on the technology tree, trigger tasks and gain skill points. When the time comes, you will become a real technology tycoon and have capital that can influence the world. Everything can be done with just a few words.

The writing is so messy that I can't read it anymore.