About My Reincarnation as a Cat

The comment area is a bit deserted. Since the author wants to make suggestions, let me briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages First of all, the advantages: 1. The writing style is excellent. It is rare to meet a newcomer who can write such a smooth writing in a new book. Either the author has a vest or has been engaged in copywriting-related industries. Overall, it was very comfortable to read. It didn't forcefully show off all kinds of rhetoric, and it wasn't like that kind of white text that makes people uncomfortable. 2. The character setting is great. Leaving aside the protagonist, what attracts me most about this book is Xiaoyu and Xia Tian. As the heroine, Xiaoyu has a very lovable personality, silly, but also has her own shining points, which is very different from the stereotyped heroines. Next is Xia Tian. As a time traveler, he received a box lunch at the beginning. It is a bit like the existence of Fan Xian's mother in Qing Yu Nian. She only exists in the memory of the male protagonist. It will not compete with the male and female protagonists, nor will it affect the overall plot. However, it makes people look forward to what the world will look like after it has been changed. 3. The details are handled very well. I don't know if you have discovered many details, such as the description that the names of the male and female protagonists combined are "Shen Yu Luo Yan", for example, Xia Tian's tombstone is a doraemon (and a runaway doraemon), and the fallen leaves later "look like a dragonfly". For example, the behavior of the male protagonist is not deliberately written about how a cat should be, but people who have raised cats will understand that this is just a cat and it is natural. There are also many jokes in the article that make people smile. 4. The plot is relatively smooth, and it can be seen that the author has a good mentality. I have not seen any BUG so far, and I look forward to the future direction of the plot. Let's talk about the shortcomings: Rather than talking about shortcomings, it's my personal worry This book is obviously unpopular among mainstream themes. After all, there are many urban novels written, but there are very few protagonists who turn into cats, and even fewer can write this kind of novel well. We usually look for a sense of substitution in the male protagonist, but after the male protagonist turns into a cat, it is difficult to express this sense of substitution in a cat. Judging from the previous plot, this book should be a daily novel with an emphasis on adult life. The highlight is how to interact with the heroine after turning into a cat, and how to promote the plot. If the follow-up is not done well, the book will easily collapse. In addition, most readers actually prefer to read online articles without using their brains, which means I can read them at a glance and understand the plot. But in this book, many details need to be discovered carefully. This also means that the results of this book may not be ideal, and under the unsatisfactory results, will the author still have the patience to write it down slowly? I saw another comment from another guy in the comment area: "Except for the inexplicable beginning, the writing is pretty good." I don't intend to start a fight, but if you read it carefully, the beginning is actually the most exciting part in my opinion. This is also my worry. How many people care about the author's intentions? In short, I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I also hope that the shining points of this book can be discovered by more people.

The writing is very good. This book is obviously not the kind of book that relies on jokes and contrasts to attract readers, but the author's delicate writing style and vivid scenes constructed one after another. In the current trend of systematic writing and comedy writing, this is a rare work that can slow people down. I hope the author can persevere and this book will definitely be successful.

A book that wants to tell a story quietly, there are only a dozen chapters at the moment, but the flow is sufficient and the look and feel is very comfortable. Personally, I like it better and support the author to continue serializing it.

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I beg the author to keep writing. There are very few online articles of this style.

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