I Draw Peerless Immortal Aptitude Every Day

[Please be careful if there are any spoiler-like comments] The plot is good and the progress is very fast, but the male protagonist has no sense of existence, and the development of the supporting characters has no details. After watching it for a long time, I saw that the male protagonist is stubborn, and the writing has a different effect. The female character on the bus is outrageous. According to what is written in the book, she must have sucked other men dry. It is also mentioned that this woman is not a perfect body. She later reshaped her body and then practiced double cultivation with the male protagonist. There is nothing wrong with her. She is not a heroine, but a slave, but I don't like this character.

The plot is pretty ordinary... I feel it's a bit cliche but the handling of the emotional line is really confusing. The junior sister is the fiancée of the protagonist, the second senior sister is obviously interested in the protagonist, and a female villain from the Hehuan Sect is also determined to catch the protagonist. The female evil sword fairy in the Demon Suppression Tower is also very fond of the protagonist... Then the master is a woman, the supreme elder is also a woman, and the soul in the fiancée's necklace is also a woman... After writing so much, the protagonist has no reaction at all, and is not even willing to talk to them. There is a sense of tearing 😐

Although it is a group portrait, there is no follow-up to the protagonist's interaction with him except the beginning. I feel that the protagonist is too frustrated and does not enjoy the refreshing feeling of being behind the scenes everywhere like Han Jue.

Dreaming back to ten years ago, this routine is no longer new.

If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality well, but you have to create a diamond-glazed body and drag it to the monk.

What kind of sect can allow all the elders to go out to slay demons, leaving only one leader to guard the house?

That Wu Dongyue is so disgusting 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢, she threatens the protagonist from the beginning, and then lives in her shadow, and then the protagonist's combat power is beyond the limit, and he is still willing to be fucked, what kind of Stockholm is this. Then one day in the world, there are thousands of people in the cave. What kind of cuckold plot does the author have some misunderstanding about the readers' sexual preferences? Don't bring your own preferences into the readers' thoughts. As someone who writes cool articles, don't you know that killing her is the right answer now? As for the background, they are nothing in the world of immortality. Even the protagonist can kill them randomly. You think it's okay to just keep growing, just find a deep mountain and old forest, leave a token and run away, just go out and look for opportunities. To put it bluntly, she was forced to give first blood to such a disgusting character, a murderous maniac, neither a virgin nor a mature woman, so why should she?

If you are good enough, you always post a lot of talent introductions. Do you think that readers don't read your plot, but only look at how you draw cards?

Is the master, the male protagonist, just having shit in his head? Let a foundation builder seduce the golden elixir, and not give him a life-saving talisman but a magical sword. I don't know how the male protagonist should live. It's really just relying on the protagonist's halo!

I would like to ask, is it treasonous for a disciple to accept a disciple on behalf of his master? Making decisions for his master before he is dead?