Blue Star OL: I Am the Only Closed Beta Tester

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Personally, I felt that the more I wrote, the more boring I became. I had already officially started to take the main line of Shuifuzhong (it had been laid out for a long time), but in the end I ended up writing about a mansion. I think there is a reason for my poor grades. Every time one thing is not finished, another thing is inserted in the middle, and there are so many holes that are dug but not filled. If the updates weren't so good, I wouldn't bother to follow them. I guess some people would like to wait a little longer before watching. Otherwise, I really don't know how to read it, the plot is scattered.

This game is very sticky and has a high degree of freedom.

Violent rabies is too strong. Since any attack can be inflicted with rabies, the protagonist might as well get a slingshot. After a few hits, he will be poisoned and escape. Fly a kite to spawn monsters.

Recently I have been getting better and better at writing. After I added it to my bookshelf, at the beginning, I was interested in the subject matter and could keep reading. However, after more than 100 chapters, there were too many explanations and explanations, which made it difficult to read. In addition, X Mansion is really not consistent with the subject matter of this book. After getting through this period, it became more and more interesting to read. Come on.

It was fine before going to the river. . It's a pity that it's behind.

What about the mansion and the amusement park? To be honest, I didn't understand it. I didn't write it clearly after I wrote it. The main character in the writing understood its purpose and was like a Riddler. I was confused until the end. To be honest, the writing was good but it was very messy.

Everyone, reading is really important. If you like me, please use your little hands, turn to the latest chapter, and check that you have read it. Please🙏🏻

Written by The Riddler, a place, setting or person that he has never understood before suddenly pops up in the protagonist's mouth, and there is no sense of immersion at all.

There's really a lot of nonsense and the Riddler thing is going on. Thanks to the fact that I have read a lot of novels, I barely know what the author wants to say. Otherwise, as my book friend said in this chapter, I only know a little bit about what the author wants to say after reading it several times.

What's the meaning of women's clothing? Why don't you write more words every day from now on, save more manuscripts, and order 3,000 copies and release them together, how good it is. And even if you don't have 3,000 subscriptions for a while, you can still keep it as a deposit. Sometimes you can give yourself a vacation, rest and play.

I don't understand a little bit This talent, why don't you increase it to the extreme?

Hello author, I am a semen retrieval person. Please add some semen for me. Hi hi hi

The data-based system is better than the reincarnation paradise. Simple and clear. You don't have a system. All kinds of calculations, all kinds of confusion. Are you done with it now? Why should you count?

There are few police officers in game writing. Let's collect it first.

I still feel like it's a headache to read the large sections of the settings for this limited-edition thing.

Looking at the introduction, when the server war starts a few years later, it should be the finale of the book. I understand this routine very well

Author's trumpet number?

I feel so bad. I just finished the order and it's free.

Okay, free prostitution is over 😁

Have any novels like this been finished? They are all written by lousy eunuch authors.

Let me ask, what is the use of the talent in Chapter 7 It feels useless. If someone else has a career upgrade, they can directly add two points of free attributes to the secondary attributes (main career strength, upgrade strength, intelligence and agility plus 1, free attributes intelligence plus 1, agility plus 1). Isn't the effect the same as yours? And this is equivalent to a fixed bonus point for you. Or did you choose this talent just for expertise?

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

This article is relatively obscure. The author tries to use MMORPG games as an analogy and tries to analyze the interaction between immortality, spiritual energy and people based on scientific principles. If there is really a spiritual revival, this novel will be a programmatic work like the Tao Te Ching.