I Can Enter the Mythical and Strange Game

You must have learned the writing method of "passing by". There are a lot of detailed settings. Although the writing is not bad, the situation after your book is put on the shelves is probably similar to his. I can only say that those who write like this are awesome.

Do you know why it is not popular? You name it, he is stupid. From time to time, he will create a villain. You say it is a cool story. The protagonist is not very strong and has sloppy combat power. He still thinks that he is low-key and does not want to think about why there are so many enemies for being low-key. You think of skills, and does not equip the protagonist with a few powerful skills that can be quickly upgraded or skills that can be called trump cards. In this way, you will not become a eunuch immediately.

After reading Chapter 28, I didn't realize how stubborn the protagonist is. He's trying to sell someone else's meat, right?

This protagonist has incorrect views and has no bottom line in doing things.

The plot is bifurcated and there are too many private goods. It feels confusing. After watching it, I still don't understand what the protagonist is doing, except for liver games.

That author, you said this is your trumpet, right? When you picked up a book, you seemed to have said that your book followed some kind of traditional cultivation of immortality. It didn't seem to be that it was the path of breathing spiritual energy, refining energy, building foundation pills, and Yuan Ying. But you said that it was called a weapon refiner, right? So where did the alchemist get the golden elixir? It seems that this golden elixir has been mentioned many times, right?

Explanations and supplements can be placed in the description of this chapter or the author's summary...

How did more than one hundred chapters become more than sixty?

Finished 5 books in one day or cut a few...

As we all know, if a villain appears in the early stage, he will definitely be unkillable and will cause trouble later

The writing is pretty good, but I can't stand it, I don't know why. Let's raise it first.

There could be more dialogue and less introduction.

It's not enough. I feel like the writing is really good and it's not like it was produced on an assembly line.

This is a fanfic of the TV series Ivy Capital Gao Family

When I saw Thunder Knife, I immediately clicked in. How did you know that I had singled out Wolf Lord?

New book seedlings, Borrow a building to ask for support

The writing is okay, but the plot routine is a bit old

Under a different person, similar ones can be found everywhere

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