The Underworld Is Empty, I Enter the Thriller Game to Catch Ghosts

Two stars This novel tells the story of the protagonist who turns into a ghost and then suddenly jumps out into a ghost game. Where are the first two stars detained? First of all, weird games do not give readers a sense of horror. You say it is a daily comedy, but if you call a weird game, it should be scary, and horror can also highlight the characteristics of comedy. The settings of the weird game are incomplete. It does not say when to join the game. Joining the game has no characteristics and no sense of horror. You said that if it were an ordinary person in the book, it would be very scary! That also needs to be written by the author so that readers can understand it! This is an important dividing line between novels and anime TV series. The weird game starts by directly talking about what kind of threats there are, what should be paid attention to, and what else is there to feel scary about? American jump-scare horror? That also requires visual communication. Wouldn't this become a battle royale? You can remove things to pay attention to here, and then let the protagonist discover bit by bit what the horror is and what the rules are, and how to pass it, otherwise it will mean that chasing and escaping is very boring. Secondly, when writing about roads extending in all directions, the author also needs to write it out and write something in it to reflect it. Because the reader cannot see it, the author needs to work hard. There is another key to the protagonist. The protagonist's real life is the second line of the novel. The protagonist's life also needs a lot of fun, such as secretly helping friends and reflecting the other side of life. Also, the contrast between the funny things in it is too small, so a lot of the baggage is meaningless.

Shen Nong died and burned incense for some reason. Not to mention that they are exactly the same, but 80% similar, so let's not say that he plagiarized.

If I remember correctly, there was a novel called "A Ghost Servant Forced into a Strange Game", which was much earlier than this one. It feels like the difference between a horse and a lump. They feel pretty much the same.

Ksitigarbha: Is the underworld empty? Ok, get off work

If a creature looks like a ghost, sounds like a ghost, floats like a ghost, and can be dealt with by ghosts, then it is a ghost, not something special.

It feels like there is a book called "Twenty Years of Catch the Spooky", I entered the thriller game. That should be his name. It's quite similar. It starts in a restaurant and the protagonist packs up all the tricks and sells them.

It is strongly recommended to create a block function for authors. After blocking, you will not be able to see his books. This can avoid many father-in-laws. This author is no longer a young eunuch who just entered the palace. Now he is at least a high-class young eunuch.

Why is the protagonist obsessed with performance? To enter the underworld? For the little sister? I don't think this character was successfully established, because the first few chapters were clearly action-packed, but I just kept watching the show. Moreover, the non-explanation and pretense in the last chapter, although it does not conflict with the previous one, is really too tough.

There is probably a point, why doesn't the protagonist directly tell the underworld about this? From the setting point of view, if the underworld really knows about the existence of this copy, the underworld can at least get the impermanence to start farming. I still don't understand that the protagonist just pretends to be B here without reporting it.

Ksitigarbha looked at the title of the book and said: Hahaha Amitabha Buddha, I finally emptied the underworld, what do you want to do? ? ? Do you believe that you can't even become a ghost after I beat you? ? ? Are you still catching ghosts? ? ? Look at my mighty Heavenly Dragon, World Honored Ksitigarbha, Prajna Parma, coaxing me into destroying both your body and spirit.

Is there some kind of policy? Why are the new books released in the past few months about spooks, not ghosts? It feels baffling.

The FBI was too dramatic and gave up.

There are so many small bugs that I, a professional reader of cool literature, find it uncomfortable. For example, the corpse in the wall was obviously a performance, but the male protagonist pretended not to see it and refused to accept it. He didn't stop scratching his heart and liver until it was revealed later that the protagonist had forgotten it; Another example is the black man The part where Impermanence will suppress the Ghost King in the real world was also very abrupt, with a bit of foreshadowing but only a little bit. I went back and read it several times before I realized that it was a foreshadowing and the transition was too abrupt. Anyway, I was very confused after reading those chapters. Why did you suddenly become excited? Why isn't it over yet? Why is Hei Wuchang here at this time? What happened? For example, in the early stage, I didn't tell you about the underworld thriller game. Wouldn't it be nice if we all made money together to unlock the thighs as soon as possible? The situation of other countries in the global thriller game was not mentioned at all. Also, I remember which chapter ended with the paragraphs I have read so far. The description of passers-by's grandfather and grandson seems completely useless... The plot connection is inexplicable but there is no explanation at all. Most of them are just muddle through. This situation has happened many times. The way it is written is really uncomfortable. If you don't know how to write foreshadowing, don't write it! Either I patched it very late, or I forgot about the previous inconsistencies just by looking at it. In most cases, I find reasons for the author myself and make up my own mind before I can read them. These contradictions are really like choking in my throat. Come and correct me and convince me, otherwise I will feel uncomfortable.

I just want to say that this writing style has actually entered the top ten best-seller lists. Is this wrong? Is the starting point so stretched now?

If you continue writing like this, the underworld will become the background. You can write that the underworld is damaged and needs the soul to replenish it. I have captured so many souls in the early stage, and I will regain some strength and investigate why the ghosts do not come to the underworld or why they will investigate wherever they go. If you keep writing like this, you will not be able to write what you write. The protagonist will not only become a sinister, but also develop power. If you keep writing like this and write the underworld as the background, sooner or later this novel will be a eunuch.

The eighty-year-old novel was pretty good, but I couldn't read it at first. No, I feel like others are trying to take action against your performance every day. The problem is that you are the only one in this world who can't use your performance to make a difference. If someone wants flowers and you want Nian beast, why don't you just say so? Goubazhuang 13 must not say a word, and when the fight is over, just pretend. If it was said that the protagonist wanted to make money before, but now it is just against the will of heaven, which is ridiculous. It was quite interesting to write at the beginning, but after it was released, it was just for the sake of being rich, and the plot dreamed back to 2010. . .

If this book is still The Eunuch, I can only say that I have no connection with this author and it is a waste of money.

The author is ignorant, does not listen to honest advice, and regards updates like jackals, tigers, and leopards. He is ashamed of the readers and asks the author to issue an edict to express the anger of the readers.

I browsed through the comment section for a while, and I don't know why so many people are so angry and hate you, why don't you read it? It talks about rubbish and stuff, but I think it's quite interesting. I'm tired of reading traditional weird writing all the time. Speaking of what standards this novel does not meet, what is missing, isn't the most fundamental thing about a novel supposed to be whether it is interesting? Those points that the trolls spray, those that you like, please go to the corresponding novel and read it.

Both books have the same pattern, but yours is obviously too bad. What is the most important thing about weirdness? ? Did you even give up on the main thing? What else are you watching? The most important thing about weirdness is unknown abilities and things! You've told me everything, why is it weird? Speechless!

The author's writing is not good and wrong. The author should be insulted, insulted and punished. (This message rebounds all attacks, and the rebound is permanently effective)