Supernatural Revival: I'm Just a Writer

When the eunuch is at night, a ghost comes to his door

How to say it? The subject matter is good, but the plot feels confusing. The protagonist has no sense of existence

Why don't you teach the ghost-hunting team how to slay demons in a large formation? It only takes 8 ordinary people. It's a life-saving skill.

Emmm Is the villain in the latest chapter too smart and dares to rob, kill and rob treasures that the whole country knows the use of? Isn't this tantamount to going against the country, all the practitioners, and the people of the whole country? Does this count as getting the life flower? Author, wouldn't you consider revising it?

Did I not see clearly? I started writing background stories about ghosts, myths and legends that had been discontinued for hundreds of years. The Taoist priest appeared again in Chapter 8, but I didn't read the rest of it. But, the backgrounds are all conflicting, you said it would be fine if a few soldiers came to save people. If there is a Taoist inheritance, why should the state monitor teaching assistants?

This protagonist is not good. When it came to 91 photos, I just said I would keep it a secret, and then I told others directly. He also swore that he was struck by lightning. Sure enough, with the blessing of Dao Ancestor, I am not afraid of lightning at all. No wonder he dared to swear.

It's okay, but I felt really uncomfortable when I saw the first thirty pictures. I didn't even use such a big vest. Then, didn't the protagonist think that the strange things happening in the world have a lot to do with the books written by the protagonist? If you've thought about it, why don't you think about writing a book based on yourself with a very powerful protagonist? I don't try or experiment, and the main character has no golden fingers at all. There is only one Sanqing Taoist, which is too uncomfortable. There are so many lolita, and I don't see what the characteristics of each of these lolita are. Childlike face and big breasts? Or grumpy but thoughtful? You can write more monsters, such as the small monsters in the Classic of Mountains and Seas. I also feel that the protagonist's IQ is slightly lower, maybe that's my feeling. But the writing is pretty good, at least I can understand it.

I just read Chapter 40, so that's it for today. The plot is somewhat interesting, but the dialogue between the characters is a bit messy. You can ignore it when you read it, but after you stop it, it feels messy. It feels like I've read Chapter 40 but haven't read anything at all. It's okay to pass the time in Shu Huang, the plot is quite enjoyable.

I have a lot of imagination. The last time I used my imagination, I provoked the group game novel "Guipao Martyrs Cemetery", "Good Guy Lao Dao" and "Gui Online PK"! ?

Yes, there are several girls who need to be dealt with clearly. According to the current development, we can't send out the ones we already have a good impression of. They can't be Wu Dan heroines. If there is a Shan Wu later in the plot, let's talk about it earlier. If you leave in a hurry, you will be in the world indefinitely.