Supernatural Revival: I'm Just a Writer

A vengeful ghost came to the eunuch's door at night.

Well, the premise is good, but the plot feels very messy. The main character doesn't really stand out.

Why not teach them the Demon-Subduing Formation set up by the ghost-catching squad? Eight ordinary people are enough for it; it's a life-saving technique!

Hmm, isn't the villain in this latest chapter a bit too stupid? Daring to rob and kill for treasure known throughout the country—isn't that tantamount to going against the nation, all cultivators, and the entire population? Does he even have the life to enjoy it after obtaining it? Author, don't you consider revising this?

Am I missing something? The background story starts by saying that ghost and mythology had been interrupted for hundreds of years. Then, a Taoist priest appears in Chapter 8, and I didn't read the rest. But honestly, the backgrounds are all contradictory. You could say that it would be fine if some soldiers came to rescue people. If there's a Taoist lineage, why would the government need to monitor the teaching assistants?

This protagonist is hopeless. At 91 pages, he said he'd keep it a secret, then immediately told everyone else. He even swore he'd be struck by lightning. He must be protected by the Daoist Ancestor; he's not afraid of being struck by lightning at all. No wonder he dared to swear such an oath.

It's alright, but the first thirty chapters were particularly difficult to read. Having such a powerful backstory and not utilizing it effectively, and the protagonist's lack of any real connection to the strange events happening in the world—didn't he consider the potential link between his own writing and the world's strange occurrences?

I've only read up to chapter 40, that's all for today. The plot is somewhat interesting, but the dialogue is a bit messy. You can ignore it while reading, but once you stop, it feels disjointed. It's like I've read forty chapters, but also like I haven't read anything at all. It's okay for killing time when you're looking for something to read, the plot is quite entertaining.

My imagination runs wild! The last time I had such a wild idea was when I provoked a tabletop RPG novel about ghosts running martyrs' cemeteries. Good heavens, is this an online battle between an old Taoist priest and a ghost?!

That's good, but we need to handle these girls properly. Given the current development, we can't just send them away since we already have feelings for them, right? And we can't let them all be single heroines. If the plot is going to develop and one of them is going to be single, we should say so soon. I'm leaving now, goodbye forever.