Honey, It's Time to Take Your Medicine!

It's not interesting. The writing style, the main plot, and the characters all look like shit. Only the pornographic accent is a little interesting. It's considered a relatively hard-hitting piece of writing on the internet. It's a pity that Yuantong pushed the book, and now Yuantong is also questioning it.

I originally thought this book was just a traditional rebirth of a hero's revenge harem story, but after a closer look, I realized how big the layout is. From the former brave team to the Void Evil God, the battles in the kingdom and the conspiracy hidden in the light, all the foreshadowings are very exciting.

By the way, speaking of other things, according to my personal personality, when the object of my revenge is a puppet, I will most likely lose interest. I will find a way to expose the evil god. If you are not a human being, I will not be a human being.

The protagonist gives people the impression that she is not very smart and has an external brain (a witch) but does not use it and uses her brain forcefully. It is obviously a revenge drama, but the protagonist also gives people a sense of contradiction (the character is separated from the plot).

I think we can add some elements of jobless reincarnation into it

The layout is very good and the writing is very good. I can give some suggestions based on the chapters I have seen so far. The author can occasionally read the previous content. Because I have found several places where details are missing, and I have to finish the book. This greatly affects the overall look and feel, as if the pig's feet and a row of them were forcibly NC-enabled. It's too boring to read, and it's very enjoyable to read. But it's a very poor experience to lose details. Because we read a lot at once, it is normal for the author to update every day, but I still hope that the author can review the previous content.

I like this kind of Western fantasy time travel novel with such a refreshing plot, and I also like the straightforwardness of the protagonist.

Although what you wrote is not to my taste, I still wish you success.

A guess about the world view, which is most likely wrong The actual summoner of the protagonist is the Eighth Evil God, who comes to a different world as the eighth Evil God's agent. Therefore, the protagonist Zhoumu's death method is the same as that of the Eighth Evil God. The protagonist is divided into seven pieces, and the Eighth Evil God is divided into eight pieces, with one more heart than the protagonist. It is speculated that the power of the Eighth Evil God, except for the heart, turned into the Seven Deadly Sins and was inherited by the Seven Deadly Sins Witch. The heart is Saya. Because the Eighth Evil God died a thousand years ago, Saya was also born in darkness after the death of the Eighth Evil God. This can be established in terms of time. Why can't the blood of the Eighth Evil God mentally contaminate the protagonist's blood? Because the protagonist no longer needs mental pollution. He has already completed the mental pollution. The method of mental pollution is very covert, and it is indirect within indirection. Therefore, the Holy Light was not able to clearly detect it, or in other words, there was nothing she could do if she noticed it. No one could use it. The eight parts of the Eighth Evil God were sealed in various parts of the other world, which prevented him from being reunited as one, but also allowed his footprints and influence to spread throughout the other world. He first mentally polluted all the residents of the other world, so the girl in stockings said that the souls of most people in the other world were hopeless. Then he completed the alienation of the protagonist through all the residents of the other world's contact with the protagonist and their betrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist Zhou Mu, like the Eighth Evil God, experienced the betrayal of the Seven Evil Gods and was divided into divisions. This process is to walk the path of God again, experience the seven deadly sins, and become a god-like person. On the surface, the protagonist has one less share than the Eighth Evil God, but in fact he also has eight shares, because before he was betrayed, he established a connection with Saya and became one, but they are two separate individuals, so one share has been separated here in advance, making up eight shares. Then, time flows backwards, Erzhoumu hangs Saya as the incarnation of the heart, and completes the eight parts. Then he can take back the seven deadly sins and the seven pieces of the body for the Eighth Evil God. This is His inheritance, which is reproduction and rebirth at the same time. Why does the successor of the Seven Evil Gods, the saint whose name cannot be remembered, sacrifice the protagonist to resurrect the second-generation Jero, the agent of the Seven Evil Gods? Because this is essentially a usurpation of the power and authority of the Eighth Evil God by the Seven Evil Gods.

It's a pity that the author doesn't go to Japan to develop, after all, Japan has the ability to animate.

I think there is something wrong with the writing? In the previous life, when the protagonist became a loner and was betrayed by everyone, was there really nothing wrong with his behavior? The betrayal of the team is understandable, and the empire of the divine religion is also understandable. I can't understand being betrayed by the soldiers and the people. They go to the battlefield together with their comrades. They don't need to resurrect some first-generation warriors, right? There's no one I'm close to, so I'm a bit doubtful about the moral character of the protagonist? Are you a noble who traveled through some world? A little rumor can actually make the whole city betray. Was the protagonist so ignorant that he didn't cultivate some of his own confidants during his lifetime? Well, maybe those who were washed by the saint can't find Bei, so it's time to wake up in the second life, right? Instead of reflecting on your own mistakes, you don't trust the world? Are you the male protagonist of some Japanese light novel? Shouldn't the flower grower find out why this happened? Then they started to take revenge. Don't you want to know why they resurrected the original generation? If they die, there won't be a second group of people like this? Don't you understand the subjective issue? Are you sure you won't be used as a gun again?

You can't count on those civilians. If you want to take revenge on the civilians, lead them to revolution, and then let them fail when they are about to succeed. For those civilians, it's okay if they don't see the light. What if they fall into darkness again after seeing the light! For those nobles, priests, etc., It is necessary to use revolutionary means to completely reject the meaning of their existence.

Revenge is not acceptable either 🤫 I suggest you watch some Japanese comics to learn, this potion is really good at lifting the crotch Just play the game with me, just open the modifier and operate it for a while, it is boring Cheating on the previous tasks will greatly affect the experience. Lao Tie If it is made public directly in this way, many exciting and actionable chapters will be lost in the future For example: humiliation in public places, committing crimes under the table with friends, committing crimes behind friends in front of others clothing in turtle armor in public places, transfiguration and animalization, etc. These are difficult to write clearly, but can be written more obscurely. After the foreshadowing: First the loss of dignity, then the loss of emotion, then the loss of personality Then resurrecting their beloved, giving them a second awakening of emotion and personality Using their beloved: Destroying their resurrected emotions, personality and reason Finally, it can be the ending of prostitutes, or the ending of becoming a domestic pet But it depends on how you plot the story line of the Seven Gods. Is the second episode a battle between gods?

Once upon a time, I firmly believed that I was a pure love warrior and looked down on all tauren. Until I came into contact with this novel, damn it, it has completely become what this novel is. It turns out that I don't hate tauren, I just hate being bullied. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's a garbage test of poison. It's disgusting for the male protagonist to be betrayed like this. Instead of just killing these bitches and taking over the harem, I'm really not afraid of stabbing you in the back one day.

Xiao Feitu is here

No, don't you know how much you borrowed from this plot? You're still so slow in updating, right?

One thing to say, you all say that this book is set by Gun Yong, but after reading the first thirty chapters, I feel more like another revenge manga I have read - "The Strongest Hero Who Desires Revenge, Invincible with the Power of Darkness". This comic is the real villain. The princess wants to train the hero to be her own toy, and the mage is the companion who has grown up with the hero since childhood. But in fact, it is the same from the beginning to the end. The self-interested person who took advantage of the brave and finally stabbed him in the back. The general who taught the brave martial arts was an ogre and personally slaughtered the brave's hometown. Saint Geng Niu was a complete pleasure criminal. Her ability was to liberate the repressed desires in people's hearts. She was known as God's salvation. Suicide and self-immolation were just trivial cases. Several of the main figures who persecuted the brave were basically instigated by her. The most important point is that the protagonist in Stick Brave is mainly persecuted by the characters in the Brave Team, and the world reset begins when he fights the Demon King. The Dark Brave is the same as in this book. After the brave saves the world, he is persecuted by the whole world, and his reputation is ruined after being assassinated. However, the Dark Hero is a hero who is directly resurrected and takes revenge on those who betrayed him. There is no world reset setting, but if I say it, resetting the world is mainly to make up for regrets. In terms of the satisfaction of revenge, it is more satisfying when those betrayers are complacent and think everything is fine when you come back and throw them into hell one by one.

I feel like the hole I dug is a bit big. First of all, it's Jero, who is said to be very strange and has a strange attraction. He looks a bit like a villain in this way, and then he legitimately rescues the heroine (who is in the brave team) and makes her join the team. The author seems to be trying to explain why he likes the first generation so much, and then it feels like the second generation is really a loser? Then my guess is that the first and second generations are the same person. Enn is purely a personal guess. He committed suicide because he knew that he could not defeat the opponent in the void, and then restarted. The seven soul fragments, enn, are either memory fragments or fake. The mysterious person deliberately misled.

I've finished reading it, and the evaluation is okay, but the biggest poisonous point is the saint and the twin thieves. You have to be good at it, whether it's mind control, or body control to retain thoughts, you can be tortured like this for a lifetime. If you get a blood directly from Goblin, you will be speechless! It is a similar work in itself, and when you do it this way, it gives people a feeling of being both authentic and upright! Just post this chapter and say that you are ambitious and won't accept everyone, just let others know!

After reading the first five chapters, I feel that the friends of the first-generation hero, including the saint, hate the protagonist, the second-generation hero, a little gratuitously and deliberately. The other heroes who have abused the protagonist in Gun Yong can only be said to be scum and deserve it. However, in this book, since these saints and fellow heroes can recognize and admire the beautiful qualities of the first-generation hero, it means that they are not so scum and cannot hate the protagonist, the second-generation hero, for no reason, right? It feels like the logic is a little unreasonable and far-fetched, or maybe the first generation of brave men have the ability to confuse people's minds. Then I read some other posts in the book review area, and it seemed that they were influenced by some reason for the later writing. If there is another reason later, I suggest you write a story at the beginning about the protagonist's instinct feeling that something is not right, or give a foreshadowing hint that there is a hidden secret in this situation. Otherwise, the beginning will be all about some people who are supercilious and their partners are all evil, which will give people a feeling of deliberately arousing the readers' anger and stirring up emotions, because there have been many works that imitate similar styles since Gun Yong became popular. If you read too much of this kind of violent plot that deliberately stirs up emotions, you will feel tired and disgusted, and it is indeed easy for some people to be persuaded to quit. However, this is all my personal feeling. The author's writing skills are still very strong. I also know this book from the recommendation of other book review sections. I hope the author's achievements will continue to flourish.

It's a bit strange. The four powers that the protagonist currently possesses after his rebirth are brought by the witch. Where are his own God's rewards and righteous partners? It stands to reason that there is a conflict between the righteous partner and his current ideas, but God rewards those who work hard, so there should be no problem! And judging from the current appearance of the protagonist and the plot of the seven evil gods in the void, it is estimated that it will not be so dark that it will destroy the world in the later stage. It is recommended that you find an opportunity to write back those two powers. The righteous partner can mark "the fallen state cannot take effect"!

The protagonist probably didn't travel through time from today's society. It doesn't feel like the performance. After all, after traveling from today's society to the past, he can't stand the feudal society, even if he is a vested interest. Personally, I feel sad when I see some tragic news, even with only words and pictures. If you travel back in time and see a society like that, you may have used your personal prestige and force to force reforms while killing monsters.

But when only one or two people hate you, it may be normal, but when everyone hates you, you should reflect on it. The protagonist of this book is the second type, and everyone hates him! Outrageous!

There have been a lot of strange things coming to the book circle recently. I thought I would start posting about the classics, and I started posting the entire first few chapters of the classics. Did you know that the books of the same period were only a few hundred thousand words, and this one is the end of it. When I was reading, 5 chapters a day, 10,000 words, it was so valuable. It was really fun to read. I believe this book is a good starting point for the harem. I will not talk about the subsequent plot or spoilers. You will know whether it is good or not after reading the free chapter. I support the original version. Such a hard-working author recommends full subscription support.

Does anyone see this Sabi stuff? Douluo is better looking than this thing

It looked okay at first, but after more than 20 chapters, the character design started to sound like a wise, holy mother, and diaosi. You were reborn as a der, weren't you just copying that Japanese anime? Even if you don't understand, at least they are still strong enough to go directly to the demon camp.

A new book club has been created, and anyone who wants to can come! Group number 782914656

I haven't finished reading yet. Is Santa Monica's personality gone? Did he ask the witch to take his place in the end? Moreover, the Holy Maiden couldn't hold back so much that her mother's writing was obviously broken. She even gave the first blood to the Goblin, even if the two assassins had less scenes, did the Holy Maiden feel comfortable with such an arrangement? After all, I enjoyed myself once and this is the result?

Virus fragments Four-dimensional space-time: indiscriminate attacks on the two-dimensional plane to harvest two-dimensional civilization/parasitize on three-dimensional creatures to plunder nutrients. Five-dimensional time and space: Indiscriminate attacks in three-dimensional space to harvest three-dimensional civilization/parasitize on four-dimensional creatures to plunder nutrients. Functions possessed by virus fragments: spread of evil thoughts, attack with thoughts, infection with thoughts, malicious harvesting, spread of evil energy