Brother Tang Taizong

Refined

At first when I read the poem "Where is the emperor's son in the pavilion now?" I thought it was written by a prince from the previous dynasty, but later I found out that it was actually Li Shimin's brother 😥😥😥

It's obviously quite fun, but adding some fantasy about cultivating immortals is very low-level. In a historical text, adding these feudal superstitions to a historical text will lower the rating of the novel. At least I can't stand this kind of thing, so why not use illusions? It's too fake and unnecessary. Is it necessary to rely on this thing to advance the plot?

Reading the author's book is like eating a plate of salty and sweet pot-roasted pork. You eat it, but regret it after eating it. After reading it, you feel a sense of confusion. No offense, the author used gorgeous prose and clever imitation to stitch together a fragmented world of the Tang Dynasty. No offense, the author can delete it after seeing it. The world you create is chaotic and broken, just like a second-rate chef who uses first-rate ingredients to make third-rate dishes. As a taster, I really can't complain.

Let's change it to full vernacular. As long as some Internet slang doesn't appear, it's fine. The main body is vernacular, but the language is very strange. To put it bluntly, if you want to read classical Chinese, just read the classical Chinese version of the Four Great Classics. Also, is there a possibility that what you wrote is not accurate? At first glance, I felt strange that this kind of language is suitable, and you are the only one in the history literature. It feels like it was written by AI.

Similar to The style of my father, Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty, is shown in daily life in the early Tang Dynasty, the description of royal family affection, the personality characteristics of various historical figures, the protagonist is also a good at flirting with girls 😏😏😏, there is nothing he cannot do (except fishing 😏), like beauties, so far if the follow-up plot is to become an emperor, it will be inferior, but it will not highlight the characteristics of the book, which is free and wanton, indulgent and sensual, happy life, eclectic 🪖

I feel that the clan of the Tang Dynasty is really wonderful. Each generation of emperors is very fertile, but every time the emperor changes, a large number of people will die, just like cutting leeks. What is outrageous is that most of those who were killed will be rehabilitated and inherited many years later. Even the descendants of Li Chengqian can become prime ministers. This tolerance and chaos are not generally high. It should be no problem to say that this is the most chaotic in the long-term unified dynasty.

The Ming Dynasty clan expenses were really more than a little bit

Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty also had brothers 😏😏😏. Aren't they all buried? His sister-in-law also took them away.

Come on, the writing is great. I really like this style of writing. It doesn't have to be so heavy. Through laughter and play, I can witness that the Zhenguan rule was a prosperous era. The Tian family will also have a warm side. The emperors, generals and ministers are all human beings, and everyone is outstanding.

My father, Emperor Gaozu of Han Dynasty, wrote many novels after it became popular. If you look at the selection of characters, it would be best if the father and brother themselves are the kind of characters who are the protagonists of cool novels, and they also have to protect their weaknesses. Li Shimin is okay, but not as good as Zhu Yuanzhang. I look forward to an author writing the latter.

The historical novel is written like a comedy novel, and the first few chapters are very uncomfortable to read.

I feel confused. Are you writing history or fantasy?

My brother, Tang Taizong? Then you are so unlucky, this is a sad story

So, is it true that Gaowu and Xianxia cats can talk?

I keep showing allusions, but the problem is that I still don't directly point out the source. I have to make people guess in a roundabout way. Do you think you are humorous?

The author should write official history and not harm the novel circle 😐

After my father, Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty, there was another new writer, Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty. Who else is there? !

Author, I have a big problem. Your writing is too out-of-the-box and needs continuity.

My writing skills are so bad, little brother. If you want to succeed in writing, you need to practice more. Middle school compositions are more fluent than yours.

The only problem is time. Everything feels like it was made within half a year or one year. Even in the age of mythology, there were not so many possibilities. It's too crazy, the main character is still 11 years old.

To be honest, it was very comfortable to read. The water flowed and everything came naturally. There was no forced pursuit of anything. To be honest, it was more relevant to the life of an ordinary prince than those novels that have the title of "Xiaoyao" but are actually busy from the beginning to the end. You should do things at your age. That's right, author, do you think there is a possibility that updating twice a day is not enough?

Li Yuanying, do you want to become an immortal? It's just that the layout is a bit small, and Li Dacheng must be included! Ascension kind of thing. 🐥

I've read Chapter 3 and I still don't know who the protagonist is. Can someone introduce me to it?

The sentence segmentation is so bad. I was so tired after reading it, and then I wrote half in vernacular and half in classical Chinese...