Immortal, I Can Transfer the Price

Well, this is the general image of the male protagonist in my heart.

It feels a bit overwhelming. It's boring to hang up and have to level up again. There are also monsters and ghosts in the article. If you don't improve your strength quickly, why bother with a flash bomb in this leveling up?

I am a person who always means what I say. So you can supervise me. If I fail to do it at a certain time, I will be abducted by aliens or taken away by demons.

Didn't read it, only read a few comments. Tell me two points of my opinion. If you don't accept it, you can delete the post. ======================== 1. Regarding cheats, once the rules are set, don't change them. Don't have the idea of ​​constantly adding rules to weaken cheats, especially the inferior ones! —————————————————— The rules of the cheat are constant. Through the use of the cheat, the protagonist continues to understand deeply and even gets stuck in the bug of the cheat. This shows that the protagonist has a high IQ and is not controlled by the author's will at any time. —————————————————— Try to use golden fingers to grow and don't add additional adventures! Getting a legacy by knocking off a cliff or saving a Taoist companion from a coma are considered poisonous points. ======================== 2. Regarding the protagonist's upgrade speed, the protagonist's level must match the development of the situation. ———————————————————— For example, the protagonist upgrades to an express and becomes an immortal in three days. However, on the fourth day, Heaven will liquidate the world. This is also a mismatch and an injustice. ———————————————————— Don't level up first and then the protagonist will inevitably encounter an invincible enemy (a situation that cannot be controlled), and then you can only temporarily trick the protagonist (to reduce the wisdom of the supporting characters) to get through the difficulties. Such "ups and downs" will not make the story exciting, but will only make the protagonist stupid and controlled by the author at any time. Especially inferior! —————————————————— If you want to level up slowly, write the timeline of the plot in a more detailed way, such as describing the story in units of days; if the writing is not good enough, you can also increase the difficulty for the protagonist to obtain the skills. If you want to upgrade quickly, extend the time span to a few months or a few years.

This picture expresses the bitterness of the young author. Although, I am not a light novelist, haha... But Xianxia is not popular at all. So, I laughed and cried.

Frankly speaking, I don't know why this book is so cold. I wrote it very carefully. The plot is not poisonous or bloody, and the characters are not intellectually depressing. I also keep updating, and I update it regularly every day. It's a pity that the results are not good. Maybe this is the fate of new authors. No matter what, I will write it carefully. Thank you for reading silently. Write more comments when you have time to make the comment area more lively.

This story, although there is a system, is for signing. The author knows it all. New authors like us have difficulty signing contracts with traditional writing. But actually I really want to write a fairy tale with love and justice. Xia is the subject and fairy is the attributive. Because of chivalry, one can soar in the daytime. To be honest, is it more interesting than the previous story?

The original version was quite good, but it's a pity it's gone.

Haha, Chen Jun is too miserable. Inexplicably, he lost his lifeblood.

I feel like this one is more interesting, and the first one is also good-looking, but the real world is too heavy. This book can be very interesting to write about fairy tales. I also really like the character design of this protagonist.

Can you understand what you wrote?

The biggest flaw of this book is that only the name of the other party is required for cost transfer! In this case, you are invincible! To see who is displeased, the price will change. What else does it mean?

Everything else is good, but in Chapter 18, I wrote a female supporting role for Ryuatori, and the protagonist immediately became a dog.

It feels like there is a big conspiracy. Although the plot is very light, there is a sense of crisis that is about to happen.

Is Liu Qu good or bad? ! ! ! ! ! I kind of like Chen Jun, what should I do? ! !

Let's complain about being fucked. My personal opinion is to be invincible and then save the world (Guang Ji Liang). The protagonist's character in this kind of world is best to be extremely rational and indifferent (these are the protagonist's protective colors). People who are cautious and distrustful of others who are stronger than themselves do not like emotional entanglements because they are too weak to protect themselves. However, the protagonist is a salted fish in a peaceful world who has good intentions in his heart and hopes for world peace and happiness. Pain (people at the bottom don't like oppressive power), but the protagonist is not a good old man who is afraid of death, selfish and hates trouble, so it is impossible to have a spirit of dedication and sacrifice. This will be more reasonable. The protagonist can become the strongest in a reasonable way, and the ending is also positive. It does not necessarily mean that you have to stand still when the road is rough. It is too much of a headache to be a soft-hearted protagonist every time. To achieve great things, you must be ruthless.

This golden finger is awesome. However, I still like the various characters in it, and I feel that each has its own story. Like a lot of threads, waiting to be pulled up.

Not upgrading for the sake of the plot is in line with the plot, but it is unreasonable. Why not upgrade after the first level of evil-proofing is full, and it is not the game upgrade to full health and mana. At that time, it was the only skill to save a negative state. If you are stuck in a level, you can accept it if you die immediately. But if you don't happen to encounter this weak light, it will not be a direct loss. Of course, the author has arranged it, and it will definitely not be a loss. However, this behavior is equivalent to giving up hard power (realm) and pursuing consumables, and it is the kind of one-time small power.

The name shouldn't be unique, right? How to identify to whom the consideration is transferred?