American TV, 1999

Several suggestions for the author I've read parts of the author's first two books, though I haven't finished them, but I'd like to offer some suggestions! 1. The idea is good, but the writing style seems to fall short. The plot description is dry and not rich.

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Was the protagonist a eunuch? In America during that era, even in Hollywood, he didn't touch a single woman. Of the several female characters he appeared in, only one had a slightly ambiguous relationship with him. Or perhaps his family's secret technique was the path of eunuchs?

Part 2 of some suggestions and tips, including main character card. The character cards are designed to closely resemble the plot of the book, but are not strictly in accordance with D&D rules, only for the sake of easier understanding. Character cards, up to the end of Volume 1 Xie Zihao, male, unorthodox sorcerer, level 2 (2 times divine general feedback).

Having read the previous chapters, I can only say there's a reason for the poor performance. The subject matter is well-chosen, and the author's values ​​align with my taste; it's just too verbose. The author keeps repeating the same thing over and over, giving readers a headache. A single chapter barely advances the plot, so how can it retain readers? Most readers aren't here to suffer.

Too wordy Eighty percent of a chapter is background information. Moreover, this belief system is precisely enhanced through the most laborious method of ruthless exploitation. Too old There was an Ultraman book before, and the person who wrote it became a big star. Although it's over

The writing style is seriously problematic. The subject matter is excellent, but it reads like a rambling, disjointed account. It left me completely bewildered! You really need to find some help; otherwise, it would be a shame to ruin the book.

Although it's an American comic book series, I've watched Marvel and DC so many times, and their worldviews are too complex. I'm more looking forward to mainstream, mystery-themed dark horse comics like the Hellboy series, the Spawn series, the Ancient Artifacts series, the Constantine movies with their own independent worldviews, Buffy the Vampire Slayer world, the American Horror Story series, and so on.

Although the writing is decent, it still uses the familiar style, and to be honest, I'm a little hesitant to continue reading—it's just too padded out. And in her previous books, she always padded out hundreds of chapters. When she finally broke through that barrier, I always went in with high expectations, only to be met with, "That's all there is to it."

Unbelievable! In a society like America, the protagonist doesn't even carry a handgun or anything like that in the early stages. It's ridiculous! Is he that brainless? Did he get stupid from practicing martial arts? And he even robbed gang members before; shouldn't he have been carrying a gun even more?