Started by Turning into a Dragon Egg, Shocking the Country!

Are you interested in writing children's books?

This first chapter is so poisonous. It's just a novice. You have to say that it is better for a group of archaeologists to visit an ancient dragon cave than to suddenly appear in a deep forest. Plus a girl? Why do you want to feed poison? Do you still want a female protagonist in the alien beast genre? Then the protagonist died and was reborn as a soldier on the front line of Third Brother? What does this background do? Isn't it good for ordinary people to be reborn? Such a novice soldier touches a soldier from a black family.

I was attracted by the subject matter! As a result, I felt lonely after watching it! Has been poisoned! Not a single chapter was satisfying to read. I just read the novel to kill time, but it made me uncomfortable. Can you believe it (т⌣̀_⌣́), but the discomfort was not caused by the highlights in the book, but by the poison. The author is practicing! The writing style needs to be improved.

I read through the comments and found that the author's writing is not good enough for readers to say. I can only say that the road is narrow.

I was attracted by the subject matter, but almost 40 chapters in, it's still a mess. It's understandable that the new author's writing is not good, but the plot is so delayed and never unfolds, it really makes people feel like what on earth am I reading? There is really no need to write out all the trivial matters. Only by advancing the main plot can you attract follow-up readers. The pattern is opened up, and the reader does not care at all about the messy thoughts of these old men and little girls, and does not want to read them. Showing off quickly is the only way this book can survive. Check again in a few days. If it's still an egg, discard it. Come on, author

A little suggestion, if you are a newcomer, avoid the female protagonist (it seems that not many authors can write well). The main point of the alien beast flow is to think from the perspective of the beast, look at the problem from the perspective of the beast, and solve the problem with human wisdom. You can pave the way for yourself as the center, and develop with the help of the country. Most of the people who clicked in were prompted by the introduction, and half of them were dismissed at the beginning. The beginning should be logical. What are you talking about? "A human girl collects medicine in the mountains and encounters unknown eggs" and "Reporting to the instructor shocks the whole country"... In addition, the Western dragon egg makes an Eastern dragon (this is the first time I have seen it after reading the book for so long, maybe because the dragon mother is too popular), you must not be criticized later 😜. The creativity is good, but the routine is too old. Readers don't hate the routine, but what they hate is that they use the past routine to disgust it. In addition, just read the book reviews. If you can form a group, form a group. Most of the people who join the group are the ones who really want to be good. It's difficult to reconcile everyone's opinions. Decide on the target audience. This book is finished. Only then will the next book be popular and create a virtuous cycle 🤓

Not to attack the author. If you want to make money at the starting point, you must abandon your novice ideas and the plot must be reasonable. At present, it seems that the author still needs to read more basic good novels to practice. If you really want to make money, go there. As long as the plot is not too exaggerated and 10,000 words are updated on time every day, you can make money by writing randomly.

I would like to give a suggestion, if you want to make money by writing a book, you can learn from other people's books in the early stage, imitate good writing styles and slowly improve as a stitch monster. Your book is really bad.

It's boring. It's more than fifty chapters and it's still a piece of cake. It's too slow.

A 10,000-word chapter costs 50 points? Other authors only charge 25 points for 10,000 chapters. You are still writing nonsense just to make up for the numbers, right? Who gave you the courage? Liang Jingru?

If there really is such a creature, send it directly to the operating table

The name of this book is, To tease you.

Mythical creatures are nurtured by heaven and earth. There is nothing wrong with picking them up in the forest, but they are just too careless and placed on the ground casually.

I think it won't be hatched until the console is put on the shelves, and I can guarantee that it will turn into a human being. Anyway, this type of thing has the same routine.

Nb has been written for so long but it's still a piece of cake. Please take your time and read it.

I feel like the author's writing is very nonsense! I have absolutely no motivation to read on! Real research experts are very rigorous in their research! A real egg that can be seen quickly, people will only think about what kind of creature it is, instead of watching the video and discussing whether it is a model! Since it will be seen soon, is it necessary to discuss whether it is a model?