China Entertainment Film and Television Practitioners

The writing is very good, but the male protagonist you described has a long face and a bitter melon face. I immediately assumed that he was Xu Damao, and I couldn't stand it.

It's not like a novel, it's like a prose. The story is written so loosely that I don't even know what year the male protagonist is in. There is no main plot either, it's too empty.

The writing is very good! 🙂

Literature and art are good, but you cannot pretend to be literature and art. It is a spiritual pursuit, not a nagging illness. The writing is too scattered, the background is not clearly explained, and it is not as refreshing as it should be. To put it simply, the time is not explained clearly, I don't know the specific era background, and the characters are not clearly written. Is the protagonist an indigenous person or a time traveler?

The novel is quite good, but too literary.

He Qing

The writing is good, but the content is not attractive.

Wang Lan

It feels a bit like the literary and artistic era, up there! 🤓

Isn't the update so intense before it's released? 🙂

Awesome

The timeline is messed up. Is it 90 years or how many years? He also said it was six years or more. There will still be Hatano Yui in the next six or so years, which is ridiculous.