The Global Age of Divine Cards

It's really okay, it doesn't have any bad points, and it's much better than most of the recommended books. I really don't know why Qidian always recommends some books that even Shen Nong can't bear. All in all, thank you to the author, it's rare that I've ordered the entire book several times! It would be better if there were more

I'll go, I know why it's called the Spark Alliance 😍

Let me complain, judging from the latest plot, the protagonist's character design is not good, and the author failed to understand the essence of the refreshing article. Now, let the readers be happy first. This is the key point. In the early stage, unless it is a rebirth story, there is no need to write about conflicts between forces. Single-player development is the most perfect.

The first major drawback is that the protagonist's team is too powerful in leveling up. The protagonist's team has five times the experience and often jumps to fight monsters. The level is similar to that of the same city, but the protagonist is one level higher. The map opened later was lower than others.

Seeing the setting of card points makes me feel a little uncomfortable and difficult to introduce. I can't imagine that one day I will be killed because I can't use my skills because I don't have enough card points. Too uncomfortable

I really don't understand that the protagonist has no secrets in front of his subordinates. If you don't keep secrets from your subordinates, it's a sign of disaster.

The protagonist is now a powerful person who commands hundreds of thousands of people. It is time for him to have some unknown trump cards. He has no secrets or palaces and is no different from a child playing house. His favorability does not mean that he will not leak some things for profit. The human heart is something that all powerful people have been exploring throughout their lives since ancient times. In addition, the protagonist's power should also be transformed! Of course, if the protagonist doesn't want the power he created to inherit his bloodline, then it's okay not to transform. You can also strengthen the description of the protagonist's desire for power, wealth, beauty, etc., So that it feels more real.

Dear readers, thank you! ! !

It's so hard to be short of books. Do you have any recommendations for novels about beast control, lords, apocalypse, farming, etc.? Don't talk about the starting point that is too conspicuous. It is best not to have a system.

It is obvious that he is a novice author, and there are no major poisonous points. However, some of the immaturity in the writing may make it look a bit uncomfortable, and there are actually quite a lot of small poisonous points. It is normal for a new author to be unable to cover everything, but it is a pity. The subject matter is good. If you improve it a little, you can easily publish it, and it will not be difficult to get even better.