I Modify History in a Strange World

It's very interesting to watch, and the way the protagonist Goldfinger "revises history" is also very interesting. Even if I knew how to cut the book, I couldn't help but read it. There are some conflicts that are written inexplicably. It's a pity. I hope the author can make an outline and start a new book.

After reading the introduction, there was an inexplicable voice in my ear, followed by "Giant beasts from the Stone Age..." Which was also amazing.

You can modify the extraordinary system so that you can keep harvesting

This book is good, the setting is already top-notch, and the plot is quite interesting. As long as it maintains this level, it should be fully booked. By the way, is there a female protagonist?

Good news: Discover a good novel Bad news: Discover it too early

The writing is very good, but the plot feels very twisted. When I went to the tavern, it happened to be Pig's Foot's hometown. The probability, and then the conflict, and being framed were all inexplicable. Later, I helped the church catch the thief, but the church was also incompetent. One dared to speak, and the other dared to agree. The enemy's situation was unclear, and Pig's Foot agreed without any brain. The risk was not proportional to the benefit. Help the church find the relics of others who stole the corpse, and others have to find ways to kill you.

This result is not bad at all. There are 22 monthly passes for seven days. Considering that the more monthly passes you get, the more monthly passes you have, you have to have hundreds of monthly passes in a month. Why did you cut it?

Why do we always have this kind of plot where we look down on the protagonist and then get slapped in the face?

? ? ? It looks great, but the book is gone

The idea is good, the writing is okay, but the outline is lacking, the routines are old-fashioned, there are too many wits, not enough foreshadowing, not enough pretense, serious flow, the main line is unclear, are there any branch lines? It is recommended that the protagonist use the relics to go back to the past and do crazy things to advance the current main plot line. Originally, Nemo, as the pirate king, was the best to stir up troubles, but he was too hasty and did not show the style, strength and means of the pirate king at all, and felt that he was not worthy of the name.

Atmosphere, B box, big event, cutting leeks, proper boss behind the scenes, this writing is getting more and more dull and boring, this second identity brings things together, the pirates should put together the big event, good guy, I want to delete the book, the ghost ship pirates rob him, rob him, rob him.

The handling of the last two chapters has been flawed. I didn't see the protagonist's trump card, which can be used against the security forces. What will the protagonist do if William cannot call the navy boss?

The first one was very poisonous, it took ten seconds. The protagonist analyzed it, and the change probably took more than ten seconds.

The story is okay, but the protagonist is too tool-humanized. As long as the plot requires it, he can become a gangster who doesn't care about his life at all and treats life and death crises as a game. But every time the life and death crisis is treated as a child's play, the protagonist's potential to explode between life and death is intermittently emphasized. He is completely plasticine, and he will be whatever you need him to be.

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The subject matter is fine, but can the author revise it? The logic in many places is not smooth at all, and the writing is inexplicable, and it suddenly appears without knowing why.

Although the title of the book sounds like a novice, it is surprisingly good 😏

So far, it seems that the writing is quite good. The protagonist and heroine (is it the heroine, right?) Have normal personalities, and there is no intelligence. The plot is also quite interesting. As a newcomer, I can also listen to advice. Come on, keep it up! I believe you will get good results!

I feel like this book doesn't match the introduction at all, and I always have a very strange feeling after reading it. It's probably that the plot is forced for the sake of plot, and it feels very stiff.

You can read the comments. I look forward to getting it first and saving up. It's too little.

I almost finished the order and found out that the latest chapter is finished

Be poor and strong, and have the ambition not to fall into the clouds

The beginning is tedious, the protagonist has no memory or attempts, and then it is okay to be pushed away by the characters arranged by the plot. It arranges a plot on some soldiers who must die to let the protagonist think about who I am, where I am, and who will hit me again, and then lets go of the soldiers, and plays the plot of beating the young until they grow old.

Does this update require eunuchs?

It's such a pity that a good book has gone out of fashion like this.

6. Add a bookshelf to keep it. If you keep it to death, this is

Once spring comes, flowers bloom in String Pavilion

Do you have any recommendations for similar novels? , Dear gentlemen, I prefer this kind of relaxing novel.