Douluo Dalu: The Black Tortoise Guards the World

I would like to give the author a few suggestions. First, if a tortoise possessed by a martial spirit is really ugly, it would be better to have a summoning system like Yu Xiaogang. Anyway, the protagonist has the martial arts of the Nine Yin Scriptures to use, and wearing a turtle shell and using the spiral nine shadows is really not that cool! Second, the ultimate attribute can only be restrained by the ultimate attribute. If you are afraid of being restrained by the ultimate ice, you can find a suitable soul ring later to let the martial soul mutate twice to grow a snake tail, and then the snake tail will grow the ultimate ice. Third, during the soul saint period, you can consider setting the martial soul true body armor in the comics to make it look more attractive and not to wear a turtle shell. Fourth, the protagonist must have a soul bone attached to it, right? In particular, the best ones with soul bones attached to the back are definitely those with wings. In the original work, didn't Tang San's Eight Spider Spears evolve into the Eight Poseidon Wings? Therefore, if a turtle spirit possesses a turtle shell and then grows wings, it will definitely not be able to see directly, so the author can really consider the summoning system. Fifth, the soul skills can be tested later. Consider the gravity system. Gravity is not only found in the earth system, but also in the water system. Sixthly, the evolution of martial souls does not necessarily have to rely on the system. You can also absorb more good soul rings to allow the martial soul to mutate or evolve. Currently, I have only thought of these six points. The author can consider them as appropriate.

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The writing is okay. The protagonist is very loyal. A roommate who has only known him for a few days teaches martial arts. The parents who have raised the protagonist for several years have no hair. The protagonist is really a good eldest son of his parents. Awesome(/≧ω\)

It is suggested that after the protagonist becomes the God King, he can do the same as the Seven Original Sin Gods under the God King of Destruction, and create seven first-level gods of the stars to take away the authority of the starry sky.

Is there a Shennong? I flipped through it casually, and it seemed like a nanny article?

After reading it, I haven't watched any fights about Ultimate Water. It's about Xuanwu, so it doesn't matter. The defensive ability is not reflected at all. I thought it added group defense in the gravity field. Also, the author is a time traveler and is an adult. When he sees a little brat, he becomes his brother, recognizes his elder brother, and gives him skills. It's amazing.

Ma Hongjun belongs to Shrek, Dai Hu belongs to the Xingluo royal family, Ning Rongrong belongs to the Qibao Glazed Sect, Sausage also belongs to Qibao, and Zhu Zhuqing also has a family, the Zhu family, that relies on Xingluo. Not to mention Tang Shenwang. So, if the protagonist wants to develop his power, has he chosen the wrong place? Since he has spent so much time and effort cultivating talents for others, why not consider developing his grandfather's sect or finding some civilian geniuses. If you don't have the talent, you can go to the Wuhun Palace, which is at least a large force with a low threshold. The protagonist himself may become the Pope. Shrek is here to help cultivate talents. Can the protagonist become the master of Haotian Sect, the master of Qibao Glazed Sect, or the emperor of Star Luo Empire? Probably not

I specifically subscribed to a chapter just to express my opinion. Before I read the rest of the content, I saw where I met Lin Yanyang at the Junior Soul Master Academy, so I decided to go out and turn right and give up. There are several reasons. First, the previous emphasis was that if you don't have any strength in the early stage, you should keep a low profile, and if you are full of soul power, you should hide it from your uncle and grandpa's family, for fear of attracting prying eyes. Then he showed off his so-called self-created soul skills here. Second, we only knew each other for a few days, and after listening to someone else's story, we became so-called good brothers. Then pass on the martial arts skills and moves to others. The parents who have raised me for six years are not as good as someone else's story.

The front leg just concealed the news about the innate soul power, and then immediately told the three people in the mercenary group, the so-called life and death brothers? Just one first soul ring and two parents of the protagonist are completely enough. Three more people won't help much? Asphyxiation operation.

Kung Fu is nothing to the protagonist, after all, heaven, but it's a bit too much for you to teach your classmates directly regardless of your parents.