The Black Bishop of Net King

To be honest, I think Coach Ryuzaki is really fierce. He single-handedly suppressed Seigaku, who had a chance to compete with Rikkai for the national championship, to the point where he couldn't even advance to the Kanto Tournament.

There was one film where everyone from Qinggaku transferred to Shanbuki, and it was very refreshing to watch. That old woman has a use for hair

How about poaching Qingxue? It's a rare waste of talent.

It's another casual essay written by a studio.

Among the coaches, Qingxue is really bad. Tezuka Kunimitsu, Kanto is invincible in singles, as long as he is not Atobe, he is a sure win, and Gan, the military advisor and intelligence expert, was slightly inferior to Liu at the beginning. However, in the second year, the others are the top players in the country. The Big Three, Eiji is also an athletic genius, and the other talents are not bad, but even Kanto can't get past this lineup. It is obvious that the coach has not trained the players at all, and the players' lack of exercise has delayed the growth of others.

This book originally had a good idea, but the author's writing was really poor and too confusing. Could you at least read the rules or respect the original work? There were actually three singles matches in a row... Too many bugs

Shouldn't Tachibana go to another dimension? Going without feeling is the same as Tachibana's disharmony. After all, Tachibana has always been walking in the flow of energy. Shouldn't this kind of different dimension be more harmonious?

It can guide the development of skills and the abilities of the template character. Otherwise, adding a template will just become an attribute point addition, without the characteristics of the character template. After all, the purpose of looking at the template is to see the ability.

I specially subscribed to a chapter to express my thoughts. Only read the first few dozen chapters. I'm really convinced. Hasn't the author, Internet King, even read it? Or Yunkanfan? You didn't even understand the basic rules of the competition and you came here to write them? The first game of the game is to be played to the end of 5 games, no matter whether you win or not. The subsequent games are a best-of-5 game. If you win 3-0, you will leave directly. Why do you want to play the whole game? ! Then doubles and singles in the competition system are reported before the game. You can't just play whoever you want. You can't just change players midway. The original Fudama uses the rules. Tachibana Yoshihei directly plays three singles and steals Hyotei's second team. You don't even understand the basic rules of the competition. Even if you write well, it still feels uncomfortable...

The reason why Qingxue can not develop is mainly due to the old woman Ryuzaki, but Tezuka is pitiful.

To be honest, it's not the moves that make me feel full of flaws in Prince of Tennis. I think the setting is more suitable for high school students, but it's too ridiculous for junior high school students.

The top 8 in Fudomine are not the top four in the country Tachibana is not suitable for taking the path of selflessness. He is more suitable for taking the path of breath and then turning to Asura Shinto, but this actually doesn't matter. Yukimura and Sanada also tried Wushu, but they gave up on it themselves. I think Tachibana here would just give up being selfless. In the original book, there is no need to play five games unless it is the first time. Qingxue went 3:0 several times, and did not play after 3:1. The appearance here refers to the first appearance in each stage, regional competition, all competitions, Kanto, and national competition.

I feel that the protagonists in all Internet King novels are too smooth and invincible. Including every game, the stronger one wins smoothly without any twists and turns. There is no sense of passionate sports competition at all, and there is no bond of explosive perseverance. Moreover, the protagonist is inexplicably strong and can easily win anyone he fights. It is not interesting anymore.

To be honest, it's really boring to cheat Fudo Feng. It's better to open a new school.

What is the role of the system? Has disappeared? What is the character of the protagonist as a bishop? There is basically no sense of existence

The main reason is that your gimmick is of no use for pretending to be x. To put it simply, it can only be said that your coach is indeed harmful, but those cards of yours are useless when used. The skills that I have worked hard on are of no use to others except for the coaches and readers. As a fellow netizen, if you can't pretend to be

Before entering V, the quality of this book was good, but after that the quality declined and it was still readable. The main reason is that there are too few Internet King fanfics. Overall, this article is okay. But there are a lot of typos and omissions. Author, please read it after you finish writing. Also, in some chapters, the same person's name appears three times in one sentence. Why does it read so distortedly?

It's still not refreshing enough. To put it bluntly, it's just not enough to pretend to be a good middle school student! There is almost no description of the function of your added character card. You have to write down the function! This is the King of Nets! Killer tennis! You have to shout out the moves! What about the audience's amazement? What about the expression? What about the off-field commentary? You have to light up! It doesn't matter if the daily part is bland, but you have to write well about the game. Isn't that what watching King of Tennis is all about? Be cool! Want to burn! Pretend! To let readers see the role of the protagonist's character card, rather than a description that someone's growth has significantly accelerated because of the addition of a character card, you have to describe the feelings of the person who has been added to the character card. For example, the one who added the Eagle's Eye, "During training, he suddenly found that the opponent's movements seemed to have slowed down. He could see the opponent's flaw. Although he didn't know what was going on, he decided to try to attack that flaw." You have to write down the functions and characteristics of the character card. "After defeating the opponent in doubt, he went to consult the coach. The protagonist knew that the character card had worked, and decided to guide him to develop the ability of the Eagle's Eye." Doesn't this reflect the role of the protagonist! Your current protagonist is like a passerby, watching the whole process of you being in Gan Gods and Demons? You are not a coach at all, you are simply an agent responsible for contacting the team for competitions!

There are a lot of typos, too many words, too few words, and wrong titles, but there are no problems with the plot. In my opinion, I also wrote my own story and the correct usage of the system. Some people want to poach the protagonist. I think it is really unnecessary. There is really no need to poach the protagonist's system. Besides, real geniuses have their own beliefs. After poaching, these plot geniuses have lost their personal charm. The protagonist uses character cards to strengthen a group of people who really like tennis to compete with those geniuses to show their own style. This is the way this book should go. I hope the author can write a better story, and by the way, I can review the typos after finishing it.

The final of the regional qualifiers is a best-of-five game. The protagonist's team has already won three games. Why does it have to play singles in the end? Give me an explanation?

Does the author never read book reviews?

Is this the end? Will the World Championship be released?

You're so helpless, why don't you post a single chapter to explain it?

There are so many typos in this article, are you worthy of the readers?

Are you going to work for the Grand Master?

Eunuch, if you haven't read it, don't read it.

What is the use of this system? Is there any benefit to the protagonist if he just plays tricks on others? That's not how you write a group portrait. The main character becomes a coach and throws money into it. I can't understand the logic of his actions.