High Martial: The Strongest Legend of the Gods

The difference in strength is too vast. Even with the protagonist's cheat codes, the gap is too wide. With this level of strength, it's not something the protagonist's elder brother should worry about. Sending a few pseudo-legendary figures and dozens of Heavenly-level experts would be overkill. The opponent has an incredibly favorable start, yet they foolishly send their subordinates to the protagonist to kill monsters, level up, and eventually become stronger to slay the Demon King.

I feel there's something wrong with what I've been writing lately. It's obvious who's suitable to be the emperor of this country, so why didn't the royal ancestors abolish that useless emperor? Why let other countries keep invading? Speechless.

Will the royal family legends also turn against the protagonist later? That would be too cruel. It would be more believable if a powerful family legend intervened; it's not like an outsider is trying to seize the throne. If the protagonist gets the throne, it's a win-win situation. Of course, I just think it's best to avoid such a plot.

That's too merciful. If it were me, I'd wipe out not only the emperor, but also the four great families, including the royal patriarch. Without a system, the protagonist would be long dead. Whoever wants my life, I'll take their entire family. Anyone who resists dies.

"This Palace?" Does the Emperor refer to himself as "This Emperor"? The writing is terrible, and the form of address is even more awkward.

This says that high-end combat power determines everything, so what's the point of having soldiers? Are they just there to clean up the battlefield?

Well, this book has a lot of problems. First of all, there are too many realms, but it's like writing nothing at all. Also, in the beginning, it says that the ninth level of the Heavenly Realm is very powerful, guarding the border and even destroying the barbarian royal court with the protagonist. Later, it summons a quasi-legendary and then there are quasi-legendary beings everywhere.

Does Bai Qi even realize how powerful he is? We might as well just make him the main character. He's supposedly more powerful than top-tier generals like Li Yuanba, Li Cunxiao, Lü Bu, and Ran Min? This is way too much of a fanboy/fangirl thing.

How long has Li Bai been invincible at the Quasi-Immortal realm? Back when Bai Qi was only at the first level of the Overlord realm, people were already talking about how invincible Li Bai was. Now Bai Qi is also Quasi-Immortal, having advanced five realms, while Li Bai is still stuck at Quasi-Immortal, unable to advance even a little.

The author is clearly a Bai Qi fan. Bai Qi is one of the four great commanders, and his combat power surpasses that of Tianwang, Lü Bu, Li Cunxiao, and Li Yuanba. The key point is that he doesn't even have an army to enhance him. Even if you're a true fan, you can't be this blatant. This is a novel for everyone, not just you; there needs to be some balance. A powerful commander has a military spirit that boosts their strength, while a fierce general is simply strong in individual combat.