Papermaker: This Is the Late Ming Dynasty in Liaozhai

When Yi Sun-shin's battleship against Japan caught fire, veteran Deng Zilong died to rescue him, but Deng Zilong was Shen Yourong's man, okay?

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This book is still good, let me tell you about some of its failings The first progress is too fast. More than 300 chapters unify the Ming Dynasty, and many of the processes are skipping the 300 chapters and running to another world. Also, don't involve saints. This routine is too old. The system can explain it late or even not. When it comes to saints, the grade of this book has dropped a lot, and it is a bit fatalistic. The main reason is that the routine is too old. The second content does not have much connection with the title of the book. As soon as you look at the title, you can tell that the main point is origami, late Ming Dynasty, Liaozhai. Is the first origami well expressed? The answer is barely passing. The second Ming Dynasty, which should be the most important and attractive among the three, but the rebellion is in a hurry, there is no celebrity under his command, and the Ming Dynasty should be confiscated. Almost all of them are strangers, and it is not known what their abilities are for more than 300 chapters. They are all supported by the protagonist. So why do you, the emperor, think of him? Later, Li Dingguo and the others were mentioned in one stroke, and Li Zicheng and the others were mentioned in one stroke. This is really inexplicable in the late Ming Dynasty, because many people read this book because of the late Ming Dynasty. A bunch of unknown people like Tang Xiangjin can't see whether he is strong or not, and they rely solely on the protagonist to support him? Then how about you just write the invincible flow {"NickName":"Book Friends 20161229004641430","UserId":227453867}

This author is really stubborn The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is really bad 1. First of all, the protagonist can obviously use the skin painting spell to disguise himself and kill people without being discovered by his enemies. However, he just doesn't use it and just plays with it. When readers point it out, he doesn't listen and pretends not to see it. 2. The author insisted on using the background of the Ming Dynasty, but did not deal with the world view background system well, which caused many bugs in it. I can only skip reading because some parts are really unbearable. I suggest that if you can't stand it, you can completely ignore it. For example, the Ming Dynasty was replaced by the Daqian Dynasty, the Jinyiwei was replaced by the Embroidered Messenger, Taoist forces such as Longhu Mountain and Maoshan were used directly, and Buddhism was Kaysapa Temple, Landa Temple, White Horse Temple, Jinshan Temple, and Shaolin Temple. Aren't you going to skip a lot of bugs like this? It doesn't affect your insertion into the plot of Liaozhai. 3. I really want to complain about this setting of learning skills. There are no restrictions, such as Taoist oaths or inner demon prohibitions. Just say it verbally, don't pass it on. If you do, be careful and I will kill you. Then the skills you foreshadowed in front of you are so rare that they are of no use. If it is a world where Taoism is manifested, people will directly steal and abduct to get the skills. What's the use of you just saying a few indifferent bullshit. 4. Since it is about writing about paper craftsmen, don't rely on orthodox immortals, but on weird cultivators. Why are you writing about it? Practicing some bullshit Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu. You are killing yourself. You should use paper crafts to find a way out. If you succeed, you will receive heavenly fortune. 5. Another thing is that your description of the court is too childish. Of course, it is difficult for people who have not experienced the story to write this kind of thing. My suggestion is not to touch it, or just brush it off. As a result, the author is bumping up the frame. Of course, this has a problem with the author's background setting and cannot be changed. I can only say that the next book may be better.

How could an empire be destroyed by a tribe in the extraordinary world? ? ? ?

Let's change the skill levels. I don't know what level these messed up levels are at all. I don't know why they all use such nonsense as first glimpse, mastery, and slight success. It's better to change the skill level to a numerical level, Lv1, Lv2 or (1/8) current level/total level. It's so simple and clear, or how simple and clear it is with words (entry, small success, great success, perfect)

Isn't it a bit off topic? If you add it, it has no sense of existence. Pig's feet have no sense of existence. There are no spells or anything. They are all descriptions of other people. It's okay to write a story about Liaozhai. Why do you plunge into Zao Zhao? Or meet some monsters on the way, causing you trouble or helping you, so that the pig's feet have a sense of existence.

After reading more than 30 chapters, the protagonist defected to Sun Chuanting. He has the status of a scholar and went to be a head catcher. The protagonist also has a secret book of Yang Yuanjing and does not upgrade it. I feel like I have offended both historical novel readers and fairy tale readers at once 😅😅😅😅😅

If the protagonist reports the Fan family and uses the emperor's power to deal with them, it will be relatively simple, but he just doesn't know how strong the power in the other party's court is now. In addition, the Dragon Qi Crystal will inevitably be handed over. The most important thing is that the future harvest is difficult to determine, and the rewards for the central protagonist may be greedy. There is also a possibility of being beaten down. It is said that the protagonist is the one who steals the dragon energy. But if the protagonist does not report it, he will be constantly hunted by the Fan family and their allies, and they will not stop until death. How will the protagonist have time to find the fundamental method? It's half a dead end. I hope the author can write more exciting things.

Brothers, quit, really quit. We want to see a normal protagonist With all due respect, what does Que Gongfa do with the dragon energy in his hand? I don't see any uselessness in your hands. Doesn't our paper puppet exist? Do you want this puppet to go out and exchange dragon energy for something good? What nonsense is the Ming Dynasty talking about? If you really can't do it, why don't you go to Mongolia and change your career? You want to say that Mongolia doesn't have top-notch Kung Fu, how did Mongolia destroy the Ming Dynasty? I'm too lazy to complain about the Kung Fu you changed. What serious Kung Fu needs to maintain the body of a boy? People are talking about pure Yang Qi in a broad sense You practice Kung Fu to strengthen this Pure Yang Qi, and then you tell me, if this is missing, you can't practice it, so why practice it? Ah, if you add another setting and practice until you reach great heights, why will you be dead? You would have died if you ran out of energy. How can a dead person practice? Tell me I'm speechless with all the bugs. Just like what the brother said, we want to see the paper man become a Taoist He also joined the Jin Yiwei. That shit can't be passed on to outsiders. He doesn't even know who he passed it to. All the Jin Yiwei are prosperous and wealthy, and no one is down and out, right? The Ming Dynasty is heaven, the Ming Dynasty is God, no one dares to betray, right?

The plot arrangement of this dragon energy crystal really confused me! Isn't it better to just backhand a report than anything else? Why do you have to make a simple thing so complicated? You are a decent man, and you also know how to gain enlightenment. Whether it is practicing martial arts, taking imperial examinations, or cultivating immortality, what can't you do? Do you still care about Fuze Shisheng's stuff? And if you directly ask the county magistrate to report it, it doesn't mean you can't be greedy. The Fan family will have to peel off their skin even if they die, and they can distract you. And once this is done, your road to the imperial examination will be a bonus to be honest. I really don't understand the author's operation @_@

After reading fifty chapters in one breath, I found that it was a bit of a scam. The paper-tying technique is actually a kind of Taoism. The author can completely innovate. First, he can make the paper-tying technique to the top level and then add the concept of puppet technique into one. Wouldn't it be better to create a guardian god like Liu Ding Liujia? The same goes from the left to the right. Since you can't steal the master, you can create your own. There is a system. The author's previous foreshadowing does not match the background. Bandits were definitely rampant in the late Ming Dynasty, not to mention the late Ming Dynasty in the world of Liaozhai. The yamen basically beheaded anyone caught. If you want to obtain enlightenment points by killing people, you can rely on painted skin to disguise yourself as an executioner in each county or prefecture. You do not need to join the imperial guards. If you accumulate enough enlightenment points, you can directly deduce the Yangyuan Jue to the peerless magical skill to solve physical problems. Since it's a left-handed title, let's describe more of the fighting between left-right and side-sects and prove that right-handed people can also become immortals.

I saw three chapters on the shelves, how can I say, it's okay, not bad at all, but the author has stepped on a lot of bad points. I will briefly list a few 1. Overwhelm the protagonist. At the beginning, the author added some paper-tying skills, but I personally couldn't see where the ability would increase. Also, if you leave your Yang Yuan skill for nothing, even if you don't add lifespan or vitality, when you upgrade it later, it means that the absorption capacity will increase. You can add more points to improve the absorption capacity and take care of your body. 2. It's still a golden finger problem. You like to save enlightenment points, right? When you have more than 100 points, you encounter a few enemies. Do you want to add more points at the beginning to feel more comfortable when fighting? You said you want to add some martial arts, okay, I accept it, but you added some paper-tying skills to your backhand. I don't understand. Why didn't you add it before? 3. Martial arts issues. The title of your work is Paper Maker, but now that I see it, I feel that the Paper Maker is just a tool. Your focus is on martial arts. I wonder if you have dealt with it well in the future 4. Struggle for hegemony. You are a real show. It is not enough for a scholar to become a head catcher. He also went to be a royal guard. I looked at the back of the catalog and it seems that he proclaimed himself an emperor and founded a country. I can't say. Readers of historical novels will probably feel uncomfortable, and those who are talking about your subject matter will also feel uncomfortable.

I slipped away when I saw Chapter 38, saying that practicing the evil arts of paper-tying is harmful to longevity. There is a Yangyuan Sutra that you will not touch until life or death. Why don't the Fan family dare to deal with Zhang Jiatao, who is just a county magistrate? The protagonist has to sell his property and run away. Isn't it because he is a second-class Jinshi? You are bullshit. The first thing you do when you join Sun Chuanting is to abandon your identity as a scholar and become a head catcher. I can only say talent! With more than thirty chapters written like this, it's no wonder that it ended in about three hundred chapters. I don't know how many poisonous points it must have.

The protagonist will definitely die early. He never practices the basic skills. They all went to practice the heretical ways that cost their lives. It's really hard to watch. I don't know what the author was thinking.

It's off topic! I thought the focus of this book was Liaozhai and papermakers, but unexpectedly it was about the struggle for hegemony in the late Ming Dynasty. I vomited.

In order to save 500 taels of silver, the protagonist would rather cut his hand and bleed it every time, which would make him weak for a while. He was unwilling to spend 500 taels of money to buy firecrackers, rather than spend 500 taels of gunpowder to make explosive bags~~~~The protagonist would rather give it to the waiter if he had money~~~~Isn't this force-feeding readers dichlorvos?

The writing is also quite strange. One of the foundations of any practice is mana. The protagonist does not even have basic magic beans. How can he practice the Paper Man Art without mana? The art is a art and the law is a law. The two cannot be confused. You can't do it at all because you only know the art but not the law. Moreover, it is outrageous that you have succeeded.

Please read the author. You wrote Paper Man to distinguish swordsmen from the usual mainstream of cultivation. This is a good selling point, but when you consider why Paper Man was a side sect in ancient times, it is not because paper man has low strength and weak combat power. If it is really strong, it is not a side sect. In fact, Paper Man is considered a low-level cultivation side sect. You have joined the Jinyi Guards and can choose better training and fighting. Why do you still stick to Paper Man?

It's inexplicable to see that you don't use the skill points and don't improve your energy, for fear that you will die slowly, right? It's a medicine that is only three parts poisonous. Do you really think tiger bone wine is enough? The auxiliary exercises are no worse than the main exercises. If you abandon them, you will be like an idiot.

While saying that ghosts are rare, I haven't encountered one in two years of traveling. While going to a mass grave, I casually recruited more than 100 ghosts to guard my father's grave. Author, do you think it is reasonable?

I don't know what's going on with this novel😲. I read it and deleted it, deleted it and read it again, but I just can't stand it. What's the problem? 😳

The previous ones can still be said to be at least about the left way. When you see about chapter 220, it is all about fighting for hegemony. What about the evil magic of the left way? What about paper figures? Dissuaded.

Once the fight for hegemony begins, I can no longer stand it.

The title of the book is so evil and the content is like shit

At the beginning, I thought it would be different. The main character's father runs a business in several counties, so he thought he would carry it forward and come up with a different routine. Unexpectedly, I kept seeing the fees, let alone inheriting it. This has nothing to do with the paper-making industry!

Emm... I can only say that a monthly ticket of 1 million words makes sense. It's really like selling dog meat with a sheep's head 😓 The whole text seems like the villain has no IQ, so don't ask about unreasonable parts, it's just the author's setting

Act on behalf of heaven? You can only use plug-ins to kill people who have committed serious crimes. So wouldn't it be better to kill corrupt officials? After all, if you commit evil, you will harm thousands of people. The sin is big enough, so you don't need to kill those scumbags.

As mentioned before, you are already a proficient person. If you open up one meridian, you are a first-rate person. But later on, you are still one step away from a third-rate person. How do you calculate this level?

The train came out, but it didn't have a rifle, and it used a machete and a spear.