I Trained My Sister to Level Eight in Boxing

Let me comment on my experience of reading the book: I feel that the author wanted to write a grand story, but the writing power was not strong enough. In many places, the grand feeling was not conveyed, and instead it made people feel petty. The style of this book is humorous and a bit nonsensical. It is true that many places will make people smile after reading it, but when it comes to the storyline of salvation, destiny, etc., There is no sense of faith or other heavy things in the humor. It makes people feel that the protagonist is just a naive child full of fantasy who has not grown up. You can write a protagonist in this style, but if you want to impress people, you must have a character core. Just like the movie Moonlight Box, there are many humorous and nonsensical parts, but when the lyrics "Sea of ​​Bitterness, Love and Hate" are played, it's hard not to be moved by Zixia Fairy. In the first part of the book, "Three Thousand Worlds," I only saw the author's intention to escape nonsense and write a great story background, but there was no such deeper thing as the transformation of the characters. It seems that changing the fate is just something the protagonist wants to do. It doesn't really matter whether he can do it or not. It is not something the protagonist must do at all. When facing many "tasks" given by Tianzun, there is no sense of mission or the feeling of facing destiny. There can be the feeling that the world kisses me with pain, but I reciprocate it with songs, which is the feeling of facing heavy things with optimism and humor, or that our heroes no longer have to suffer and hate, but it cannot be nothing but the superficial lightness and nonsensicalness. What the protagonist wants to do, how much he is willing to pay for it, what choices he will make when he is in a desperate situation, etc. I want to see a three-dimensional character. Perhaps the requirements I mentioned above are too high for the author, but I haven't encountered a novel that suits my taste in a long time. I really hope that the author can write it into a masterpiece that can be out of the circle. The background of the story is very large. Many old writers would not recommend writing such a large background because it is really difficult to control such a grand background. The author is a very ambitious writer. I very much hope that the author can write a masterpiece that readers will not forget for a long time after reading it. I also hope that the author can always have this ambition to show us one or more perfect stories.

The author's ability to describe characters is good. The book is good, but it feels weird and not suitable for a novel. Anyway, when I looked at it later, I just glanced at it, reading ten lines at a time. I also have a personal problem. When I don't like to gain fame and fortune, I wear someone else's identity and feel like being picked by others (although I know there will definitely be exposed plots later) And I don't like the various plots of the protagonist and the coquettish and willful heroine. Personally, I hate this kind of character The summary is a good book, but please change the author's introduction and screen the readers in advance. Otherwise, if you come in and encounter characters like the princess and Li Waner, you will definitely start to complain.

It doesn't matter if I say I have the money, but why don't you tell me what's so bad about this novel? The plot of Li Waner was said to be poorly written just because the heroine hesitated. She was a commoner girl, and she was bullied. Her cultivation was not outstanding before and she was treated as a loser. Her character was a virgin, but she hesitated because of her speaking skills. Isn't it unreasonable? I've only written half a chapter of the plot, and this group of glass-hearted people can't stand it anymore? This novel's writing style is not outstanding, its plot is not outstanding, and its characters are not outstanding, but when combined, it is an excellent novel. The male protagonist is not an orphan, he is a genius, the female character grows up with the male protagonist and is not a drag, the plot has laughs, and there are no clichés that will offend readers. Isn't this already very good? If you think the novel is poorly written, come up with a similar novel that you feel good about.

Could it be that the pig's trotters gave away my sister?

It's well written. With my twenty years of appreciation experience, this book has surpassed the starting point by more than 80%. The author has a great future. If he writes well, he will definitely become famous and make a fortune in the future!

The title of this book is a bad sentence! You trained your sister to level eight in boxing. Could this be a sentence made by a normal person? According to the sentence pattern of the book title, wouldn't it also be possible to form: I trained my younger brother to reach CET-4 in English. The problem is that my brother is an individual, and CET-4 is a concept and a level. Ah, how do you train a person to a certain level?

Give a sharp review. (^^^ Statement: These are all personal opinions and do not mean that they need to be forced to accept. I do not accept criticism. If you think there is something wrong with what I said, OK, then you are right. I am not offensive to anyone. Don't feel that you have been insulted. If you have to bring it in, please bring it in and let me give it to you. I kowtow and apologize. It does not contain any masculinity, feminism, racial discrimination, or zz elements. I am just expressing my opinions. If you have opinions that you want to share in good faith, you are welcome to leave your opinions.) How can I put it, this novel has written the world of Xianxia that I like the most. A kind of pyrotechnic fairy. The writing is also very comfortable. The protagonist is not abstract, and the female characters are not imbecile. Each character has its own characteristics, which at least allows me to remember who they are. The plot is not very awkward except for Yaowu, which is a bit abrupt and suddenly becomes messy. It's a fairy tale novel that I think is very well written. I feel that there is no need to push forward the main plot in a hurry. It is quite interesting to write about daily life and interact with so many female characters in 1v1 or 1v1+Zishu. Among the female characters, the only female character I dislike is Ms. Zhuo. She is very flashy, and she is portrayed as the ultimate composite of the dream girl and the tea girl. Her own IQ has been fluctuating, and she feels that she is not rational enough, and she is inconsistent with her character. But I have never been in love, so if this is considered love brain, then treat it as my fart and kowtow to apologize to her. My favorite plot is the one at the beginning with my sister Lu Zishu in the academy, and the one between Shenwumen and Li Zishu dating. I watched them all with a smile. Generally speaking, I hope the author can maintain the current level of writing and I wish the author success, above all.

After reading the introduction, your sister is one year old. You asked your sister to stop learning to walk and practice boxing with you. How old are you? Your sister is one year old, twelve months old, and she is pregnant for ten months. Give your mother one month to undergo confinement. One month later, your mother becomes pregnant again, and you are born ten months later. That is, you are just one month old and your sister is one year old.

Can anyone tell me about the ending of Sister? I just saw the prince pretending to be a dog. If the ending ends with my sister, I will give up first. Besides, if the moralist dies, I have a biological sister who is about to get married. If you like to read a novel and bring it into reality and then criticize others, please stay away. Thank you.

Looking at the title of this book, I thought I was going to use my sister to practice boxing and train myself to the eighth level of boxing. I also wondered why the boxing technique is so tricky that I need to use my sister to practice it.

Read it in one sitting. Nowadays, there are very few books that can make people want to finish them. The author is very capable, and he seems to be a new author. He can only write a book on this subject, but the writing is also very brilliant. This book will be at least level 5 after it is written (make a post to prove it!) I hope that the next book will see the author write his own book! I think it would look very nice. Looking forward to looking forward to it.

The unpleasant part of this book is that the protagonist is obviously a genius, but he cannot reveal it in various plots and is suppressed by his sister. However, the sister was obviously taught by the protagonist. After so many years of repeated teachings, it is normal for the sister to be suppressed by his younger brother. It gives people a perverse feeling.

The overlapping of time and space is also too poorly written. The protagonist travels into the game, and his identity is actually revealed by the game character. This time, the feeling of knowing that the plot controls the overall situation is gone. Also, the forces of righteousness cannot defeat the villains, but the forces of villains can defeat the righteous ones. The righteous ones can see clearly what the protagonist is doing. So, can the villains not see through? Where is the chance of survival? The good guys have the ability to overlap in time and space, but they are no match for the villains. Why don't the villains use time and space to overlap and kill all the good guys?

I think the Shenwu Sect is just a bunch of clowns. They obviously support their troops and respect themselves, and even formed a vassal town. They listen to the instructions but not the propaganda. In the end, they have to rely on the food and grass of the court. This is not a clown, what is it? Yan Zongze is also known as the God of War, which is ridiculous. Just look at the vassal towns at the end of the Tang Dynasty. The generals of the Ming Dynasty were also manipulated by the court. Although the Western Army of the Song Dynasty also had generals and had great autonomy, the court's control was still there. Look at the warlords of the Republic of China, who relied on the central government? Even the Gui faction who dared to challenge Lao Jiang did not rely on Lao Jiang. Even if they really needed to ask for Lao Jiang, they would still manipulate public opinion. In today's terms, they used political correctness to kidnap Lao Jiang and force Lao Jiang to submit. In the end, this is the level of the Shenwu Sect? No means at all? They are helpless, they are just a bunch of clowns.

The parallel world events at the beginning of Chapter 52 were a bit messy and ended hastily, and then fast forwarded to the arrival of the demon star and so on. I think the author might as well polish it up and see it for himself or ask friends to see it (also, when will Pig's Feet be able to do things with his true identity)

Let's say that word means armor, not armor stomach! I still feel sick after reading hundreds of chapters! Although it does not affect reading for Chinese people, they still have to pay a little attention 😥

After reading Chapter 55 I feel like there was nothing wrong with me before Why is it getting more and more confusing The protagonist's character setting said before that he wanted to be a cold man Later he became a scumbag, funny This game messed up a lot of things parallel space Ancestor He was also discovered by others that he is a reborn person There are too many things that I want to show, just mention it in one stroke and then talk about it slowly.

I feel like the harem is a bit too much. I only have one wife, Li Waner (the real wife in the game), and I keep my sister there, and that's it. The Shura field is really difficult. It's okay to add the princess and his maid later, but don't add more. The relationship between the girls is not handled well and it will affect the perception.

To be honest, the heroine Li Waner is really useless. I don't know what the author is thinking. This is the first time she has posted a book to criticize people.

My sister is one year old, how old are you? 0 Years old? Don't tell me the protagonist is still a fertilized egg😅

The question is, my sister is just one year old, how old is my brother, and he is still doing boxing? ? What about IQ? ?

The writing is very good, the character setting is very unique, I hope the author can maintain the quality and quantity ps: I wanted to find a novel to read at 11 o'clock, and then went to bed after reading it, but it ended up reading at 3 o'clock

The comedy-style daily life is a joy to watch. The battle writing is a bit forcefully passionate and embarrassing. What can I say, the flaws are not to be concealed.

After reading Chapter 29, I feel that the main operations are a bit fragmented. I wonder if I will realize it later. She wanted to take advantage but also didn't want to take responsibility, so she pushed it all to Li Waner. Have you dealt with it later?

The writing style is light and humorous. I read more than two hundred chapters in one go. The writing style is light and joyful. I like the author's novel very much. I saw some people scolding me in the comment area, so I came out to support the author.

The author is Zhen Ji, right? 😓

Do you want to see how you wrote about the Xiaoyun Sect fifteen years ago? Because he was possessed by a monster, his mistakes were brushed aside. Did anyone pay any price? It's no problem that so many people from each faction died due to the rebellion provoking a war. Even according to the setting that the future cannot be changed, can I understand that the Tianhai Double Sword and the Xiaoyun Sect have still trapped and killed many people from the Hongxiao Sect in the past fifteen years? To be honest, the shaping of Xiaoyun Sect so far gives me the feeling that it is a failure. It is understandable that the direction of cultivation has side effects, and Kuang is not a purely negative character. As long as he is on the right side, he will be fine, and many people will even like him. But the problem is that they are wrong every time, which is very annoying, but they are not villains yet, so why can such a big thing just go away without any solution? Under such circumstances, it is really embarrassing to write about studying in Xiaoyun.

Want the essence

I've seen almost half of the progress. The whole text is readable. , I feel that the writing is quite good, at least it doesn't feel like a no-brainer. Except for Miss Zhuo, the other female characters actually look pretty good so far. The only thing that is not very neat is the handling of Zhuo. I don't know how it will develop in the future. As for the first half, it feels like a failure, and it is not very accurate. It just shows the snobbish and bullying image very well, which makes people uncomfortable. She is lovable, and she basically has no development with the protagonist, and the plot describes her as too good-looking. She fell in love at first sight with the handsome face of the protagonist, which is not bad. Everyone has a love for beauty, but then she ignored Dugu (pseudonym) who pretended to be an ugly face and made bad remarks to her. The key is that Dugu was always with her before. After many events, even if they are friends, it is not like this. For a person who met for the first time (although he is also the protagonist), he made her fall in love and quickly cut off from the protagonist's Dugu identity (although they reconciled), but it is really hard to like. It is just not worth it. The protagonist is busy dealing with secrets and has to accept some instructions from her. Maybe I can't express it comprehensively in a few words, but it is really fascinating. I don't feel the significance of Miss Zhuo, and it seems that excluding her won't affect anything. The protagonist has a lot of interactions with other heroines, but she doesn't have any, because the protagonist has never liked her at all. I don't know if Miss Zhuo will have many plots in the future. A thousand pieces of money really doesn't have much of her role. If there is an independent foreshadowing in the future, let me see what use she is.

Halfway through, I felt like the progress was so slow. Moreover, the plot mode is all about playing in dungeons, which makes me feel tired. The plot of the sister turning into an iron-blooded person also makes people feel complicated, and it feels like a daughter suddenly growing up. After reading the remaining chapters, there are thousands of chapters, I am a little dizzy and want to know if the progress has reached the later stage. If so many chapters are still in the middle, I might faint 😵