The High-Risk Senior Sister

I finished it in one go and still stayed up late, so I decided to write a long review! But I'm not very good at writing standard long reviews, so I'll probably write about my feelings about reading the article! Let's talk about the character first, because what I focus on when reading a novel is the character. If the character is not what I like, I won't read it, especially the heroine's character. The heroine, as the villain senior sister who traveled through the book, is a modern person, and she comes to conquer the villain junior junior brother for the mission. From my perspective, the heroine was a bit heartless at the beginning. This is not a derogatory term, in my case, heartless is considered a compliment, because I prefer characters who are not very emotional. At the beginning, the heroine was only thinking about completing the mission, and at most she treated the little villain junior brother as a child. She was more distressed + the emotion of completing the mission, rather than the heart-pounding love. And the heroine also has a strong desire to return to modern times. I really fell in love with the male protagonist in the later stages, and it didn't feel awkward. Let's talk about the male protagonist. In the early stage, he was a little pitiful, and in the later stage, he was a little devil. In the middle, he was influenced by his senior sister, and his character is quite complete. And he doesn't have the desire to take anything by force. He is well-behaved and clever. He didn't trust the senior sister in the early stage and even lied to the senior sister. In the back, it actually feels like a self-defeat, but it doesn't have the greasy smell of "Woman, do you have to be me?" Later, when asked if he wanted to control the senior sister with love Gu, he refused directly. His life experience is indeed very pitiful, but he is not in a violent state of intense darkness and wanting to destroy the world. These two points appear to be well-behaved and refined in a plot in which Junior Brother Black Lotus takes something by force and then destroys the world. Other supporting roles. Watching the original heroine at the beginning is actually a bit uncomfortable, because she is described as too silly, like a pure NPC. Just because she is the female supporting character, she is stupid and bad. And she also hopes that everyone will like her, takes the initiative to find good-looking male cultivators, and hates people who don't like her. This kind of stupidity without any thought seems very disconnected. However, the original heroine also changed later on. She became close to the heroine and had a grateful heart. She was not the kind of three-dimensional character who was bad at all. At the same time, she also seemed to have enlightened and reflected on what was right and what was wrong. Reading the comments, it was said that at first I wanted to make the original heroine a little bit more bad, but then she got better and better. In fact, I think the character is more three-dimensional in this way. It is blindly bad. Although it promotes the development of the plot and there are various slaps in the face, most readers may enjoy watching it. But it seems to me that I feel uncomfortable. It's a kind of discomfort when I see the heroine and the supporting character antagonizing each other because of men. It's commonly known as female rivalry. Of course, if you are resentful because of competition for opportunities or good talent, that is normal, and it is even more three-dimensional than competing for a man's attention. In short, the role of the original heroine became gentler in the later period, and her plot in the later period was also quite interesting. There are other supporting actresses. For example, the pearl of the love brain is devoted to the original male protagonist, and she speaks unabashedly, and she is also devoted to the original male protagonist. It can be said that Mingzhu is like the love brain version of the original heroine Mo Yiyi, who regards herself as the fiancée of the original male protagonist, but unfortunately the original male protagonist does not like her, so Mingzhu is equivalent to a propeller that promotes the original male protagonist and the original female protagonist. But it seems that not much has been written about the plot of the original heroine and the original hero? The original heroine didn't show much concern for the original hero in the later stage. Maybe she did, but she didn't show it? But Mingzhu also changed later on, from brainless to innocent, and the whole character became more cute. I personally don't think it's a bad character design, but I think it's pretty good. There is also Xiao Yin, Yin Ziqi, she is very cute, loyal, and lively. Although she is a bit noisy sometimes, she is clear about love and hate, and has a very real feeling of flesh and blood. What surprised me was that DaDa actually wrote about the little bhikshuni, that is, the little nun. Maybe it's because I don't read many articles about Buddhist cultivation, but among the articles about Buddhist cultivation that I have read, they rarely mention female Buddhist practitioners. It can be said that there are almost none. They all default to male Buddhist practitioners. Although this little bhikshuni likes the original male protagonist and regards the female protagonist as a love rival, which is a bit impure, and the plot is very short, the female Buddhist cultivator can already make people shine. Supporting actor. What impressed me the most was actually not the original male protagonist, but Ji Ruxue, because he was very sinister, which is a neutral term here, haha. Every time he appears, he wears a white face and red clothes, speaks very schemingly, and loves to find trouble, but his deceptions for the benefit of the sect are very impressive. The original male protagonist. The original male protagonist must have turned a bit dark later on. He was swallowed by an ordinary person in order to save the female director, which gave rise to inner demons. He also wanted to use a love charm to trap the original female protagonist, and he was also very rigid. In the end, he was not as decent as the early one. The female protagonist also complained about whether Mo Yiyi could be replaced as the official partner hahaha. Ning Yan. This is the brother of the original heroine. The original heroine was very miserable. The family favored boys over girls, giving priority to Ning Yan over Ning Zhao. It greatly portrays him as a silly and sweet brother who wants to get close to his sister. In fact, this character is quite likable in a role of family harmony or an ordinary male supporting role, but I think it is because I am more gloomy. There is a strong preference for sons over daughters in the family, and the older brother will actually bully the younger sister more. Because they follow the same example, the parents do not pay attention to the younger sister. As the favored older brother, he will not pay attention to the younger sister, and may even bully and rob the younger sister of her things and resources, so a silly and sweet personality like Ning Yan is a bit inconsistent. Moreover, if the original heroine had not been in love with the original male protagonist, she would actually be very strong. It turns out that the original heroine was also a genius and very hard-working. She went down the mountain to practice in order to cultivate herself, which shows that she was trying to break away from her original family. The original heroine and her brother were cut off, which was also a struggle in reality. No matter how good and innocent the brother is, he is still a vested interest. It can be said that he is getting an advantage and behaves well. He enjoys the favor of his parents and wants to gain the affection of his sister. But this is a novel, and Ning Yan doesn't have too many roles, so it can be ignored. There are other male supporting actors, such as Xu Mingchao, Xuan Xiang, Shi Xian, etc. Now that I have written so long, it seems a bit cumbersome, so I won't write about it for the time being_(:3″∠ )_ Let's talk about the plot and writing style. In fact, I don't have high requirements for the writing style. As long as it can express the plot smoothly, not too many cumbersome adjectives, and use sentences and punctuation correctly, it will be good. The writing style is very good and it reads smoothly. In terms of plot, my requirements are actually not too high. There are no big mistakes in logic, and I can tolerate any plot that is not obviously insulting to women. And I personally feel that the plot is quite complete. I conquer the minor villains and then proceed with this as the main line. There are no other miscellaneous things. There are also some small climaxes and other things that are well written, and the handling of the plot does not feel abrupt. The character design at the beginning is a bit strange. The heroine seems to be lacking in love. The system asks the heroine to confess, and the heroine confesses. The system asks for intimate contact, and the heroine goes straight to it. The heroine does not consider the actual situation. But I don't think this is a big problem. It can be understood that the heroine is eager to go home, but she doesn't really like the little villain, and she won't be tempted by the little villain so early. As for the supporting characters, they are all a bit silly, but later on, both the heroine and the supporting characters are complete, so it is not a big problem. It seems like you want to write some slap-in-the-face literature? I'm guessing, hahaha, because the supporting characters were relatively silly at first, or maybe they were influenced by other novels of the same type? Fortunately, the characters later have their own psychological changes, which also makes the characters more three-dimensional. In short, Da Da is probably a very good person. The supporting characters gradually become better in the future. There are no supporting characters who are purely bad, except for the nameless cannon fodder, haha. In fact, I have always found the articles on cultivating immortals to be very strange. How come women are still the ones with lower status even though they can cultivate immortals, and why they are still so serious about love brain. This is basically the case with female romance novels on the market. The status of women cultivating immortals is still low. Even if there is no cp, the heroine is stronger alone, not all other women. At the same time, the plot will also be interspersed with various plots of women's low status and fights for men. Fortunately, some of the female characters in the story may have been silly and love-minded in the early stages, but they changed later on. It can also be seen that Dada Gang's writing was actually somewhat influenced by the worldview of other writers. For example, in most romance novels nowadays, the original heroine is very bad, all men like her, and the female supporting character fights with the heroine or other women for men, and she also has love brains and so on. If you continue to write similar articles about cultivating immortality, do you hope that you can create a new worldview? For example, the female Buddhist monks in the article, or the women in the world of immortality, are also very strong. Female monks do not need to be beautiful or for men, they just focus on practicing. I also hope that the number of female and male monks can be equal, or even more. Having said so much, I still want to exaggerate. I feel that Dada's article is already very good. It doesn't look like a newbie. I look forward to Dada's new articles. Come on ^0＾~

1. There are two options for rating, five stars/no rating. I am more cautious. There is no charge for this book. If you feel bad, you can go out and turn right. There is no need to look for presence in the comment area (in two weeks, the rating dropped from 9.5 To 7.8. The key is that I haven't seen any negative reviews in the comment area, which is very annoying) 2. If after reading it, you feel that the article is terrible and has problems, you can complain in the comment area, but please do not rate it (I have a lot of classes this semester, so the quality of the chapters updated on weekends is better, but it is really impossible to maintain it) 3. I hope everyone is happy, healthy, and everything goes well, learn, progress, get promoted, get a salary, and make a fortune ~

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It's not a cool article, so I didn't tag it as a cool article. It's free and free of charge. If you don't like reading it, you can just go out and turn right. There's no need to look for presence in the comment area. The author has a bad temper and will be banned directly if he sees excessive remarks. This article is written for love. I just want to work hard to write an article that I like. I may not handle it well in many places due to lack of writing skills. I will study hard and strive to make the next one satisfying me and everyone else.

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Dear friends, I have been busy the past few days. Sometimes I haven't finished coding at midnight, so I will copy a section of settings and publish them, and then change them after midnight. So if you encounter repeated plots, you can refresh it and the latest content will be displayed~ I was really stuck coding a few nights ago. Some sentences may not make sense/there are a lot of typos. If you see it, you can post a chapter comment. I will change it when I see it in the background [well-behaved. Jpg] There is also a rating issue, because this book is completely free of charge for love. If you don't like it, please leave it out (negative reviews are very sad, woo woo) I check the backend 800 times a day, and I have seen most of the recommendation votes/messages/rewards voted by Fullman~ Hehe, thank you ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з However, the background sometimes convulses and does not prompt new comments. I may not have found new comments. You can post them again. I will reply when I see them. ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Love you all ❤❤

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