My Childhood Sweetheart, She Gradually Swelled

I would like to ask, is the author a girl? As a new author, the author's writing can be said to be very good, but the author forgot one very important point, that is, the male protagonist has no male friends, which means that there is no male partner in this book. It is very unreasonable for a man to live for more than ten years without a friend with whom he can talk (except for special cases). If the author sees it, he still hopes to add a male supporting character later. Of course, the above is purely personal opinion.

Let's give an overall evaluation first. This novel is good. Even if it really doesn't suit my personal taste, I can still give it about 6 points. 1. Writing style, the writing style of the novel is undoubtedly passable, and can even be considered excellent among many online articles. The writing style is delicate, the writing is smooth, and the narrative is organized. This alone can surpass more than 80% of the current novels, and it can be given 9 points. 2. Plot, the plot of the novel is mainly based on Japanese light novels and Japanese youth comics transplanted into local high school life (because I only insist on seeing the heroine's birthday here...), I will give it a score, 6 points is no problem. 3. Character creation, this is the main point for me to abandon the book. From the perspective of novel writing, the images of the male and female protagonists are indeed established, with distinct personalities and unique characteristics. But from the perspective of audience positioning, I think it is quite problematic and does not fit my positioning of male-oriented novels. The male protagonist is unable to love this kind of thing. After rebirth, he forcibly interacts with the female protagonist because of the female protagonist system and then makes a self-motivated contribution. The setting is not suitable for the development of the protagonist's perspective. There is no other problem, but it is not satisfying enough. The male protagonist's contribution is really visible to the readers, and the male protagonist's gains are really hard to say. The heroine's middle-class, confident, and dull setting is used as the main perspective to make the plot more likable. At least the heroine really has almost all her wishes come true. She gets everything she wants and can do whatever she wants. She has her own system plug-ins. If it really doesn't work, it's really cool to have the male protagonist as a tool to take care of everything. In this regard, I can only give 3 points from my personal perspective. The novel is indeed good, otherwise I wouldn't have to write such a long word review, but it really doesn't suit my taste, so I'll write a book review and mark it.

This book is rich in literary style and suitable for careful reading. It is also interesting to read at a glance. Therefore, this book has become the first book that I have read many times. Here are some suggestions: 1. The female protagonist should stick to the heroine line. 2. The male and female protagonists should keep a certain distance (have different experiences to share). 3. Supporting roles should increase. 4. The female protagonist should insist on being a star and be supported by the male protagonist.

It's not too much to add too much <(｀^´)>

I just saw 57 celebrating the heroine's birthday. I would like to call it a masterpiece The points added by the system are indeed a bit sloppy and the values ​​​​are a bit strange, but it does not affect the main content. After all, it's about writing about love, not about studying and pretending to be a master of literature.

The overall text is very light, fresh and sweet, which seems to be unburdensome, neither abusive nor heavy. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit simple and rushed, but I really like the character setting. Finished spreading flowers!

I suspect that the author is a college entrance examination student, or he has real skills The words and sentences are quite interesting.

Ho ho ho ho ho, it's so funny that the author writes it well

The author is great, great, and it's really good that he didn't follow the trend of having a harem. There are many harem articles on the market that are really hard to explain in one sentence. It's okay if everyone likes to read cool articles. The problem is that no matter how well-portrayed the heroine is, she will lose her personality and dignity when she shares a husband with other women. Can a girl who doesn't even love herself expect others to cherish you? No matter how good the relationship between the male protagonist is described, it will become a joke when the male protagonist is too busy. No matter how good the first description is, the more ironic it will be later. There is nothing wrong with pursuing pleasure. The point of pleasure in harem novels is to achieve a sense of pleasure that is not available in reality. The problem is that it is too false. Is it emotion? It is naked and twisted possessiveness. I can't even substitute it, let alone feel pleasure. Back to this article, it is rare to see a heroine who is so cute and naive that people can't help but love her. Moreover, the relationship between the two is equal and they naturally warm up to each other. This is very beautiful. It's not the kind of protagonist in the market who thinks the world revolves around him as soon as he gets a golden finger. If he takes the initiative with a woman, a group of people will shout "dog licking". I wonder, isn't it normal for boys to take the initiative without losing their dignity? How come they are licking dogs? It's such an overcorrection. I wish I could have a bunch of beauties surrounding you without any bottom line to have a sense of belonging. The golden finger in this article is just a bridge that gives both men and women a chance to communicate. It does not change the personalities of both parties too much, but gives people the foundation and gives them more opportunities to release their nature. The orange bird with its liberated nature is really super cute, and the interaction between the two is also very sweet. It makes me roll around in bed all day with a smile on my face. I don't agree with some people who say that daily life is too dull. The emotional fluctuations in the chapter "Meteor" are actually a bit undercurrent and thrilling. Speaking of shortcomings, it is not without them, that is the title of the article, the introduction, and the name of the heroine. I clicked in by accident. If I had read the introduction a little more, I would never have clicked in! The title of the article does not point out the advantages of this book, but it is not a merit. The introduction was just that, it was like Long Jiao Tian Wen. I really thought the heroine was an empress from some work who came to modern times or was reincarnated as the heroine. Such a book is too superficial. I would never open it at all. The name of the heroine is also too dramatic, Fu Chengque. This name is too similar to the name of a girl in an ancient reincarnation modern fantasy work! This is completely foggy. Although the heroine often calls herself the empress, she is actually very coquettish. Let alone the hero, I want to help her. In short, the introduction and name are completely opposite to the advantages of this book. Also, I think it is best for the author not to state in the introduction that it is a single heroine or a harem novel. Some factions will not read books that are not from the same faction at all, such as single heroines and harems, or singles or marriage changes in gender reversals. However, there are also many people who value this a little bit, but they are not incapable of being accommodating. As long as the work is excellent, they can completely ignore the faction. Author, you have stated a single female protagonist in your introduction. Readers who can accommodate the factions may not read it. If you had not written it, seeing how well you wrote it, these readers would have been retained. This is my immature opinion. I hope the author will not mistakenly think that I am gesticulating🙂

"Mediocre people are not worthy of enjoying youth love stories" This is an idea I had after reading the novel. In his previous life, Wen Yu couldn't draw or play the piano. He wasn't handsome enough, and his grades weren't particularly good. He basically didn't have any friends in high school. Even Qingmei, who had been close to him before, gradually became estranged from him for some inexplicable reason. Behind the light given to Wen Yu by the system, what we see is a mediocre and ordinary boy. Is there anything wrong with this kind of mediocrity? Of course not. But it really made Fu Chengque never pay attention to Wen Yu since high school, and successfully made Wen Yu mistake the hidden empress for an iceberg, creating this impression that only passers-by would have. Even though Fu Chengque had no system in his previous life and only took two exams, the brilliance of his identity as an actor and his own innate conditions still overwhelmed Wen Yu, unable to lift him up, so he could only hide his affection deeply in his heart. If the system still helps the male and female protagonists to enhance their relationship but does not give bonuses to the male protagonist, I will pessimistically think that even if Fu Chengque makes changes for the Empress Dream, the possible situation is that Wen Yu can only follow behind and the distance between the two people will still become farther and farther. Or maybe it's hard for Wen Yu to attract Fu Chengque, and the two of them are just childhood sweethearts after all. Admittedly, Wen Yu is by no means without his shining points. His gentleness, carefulness and wisdom in making money all make me like him very much. But the cruelty of reality is that you have no chance to show all this, or you do it but the other party doesn't care at all. The current sweet plot is fascinating to watch, but I have always been curious about why the friendship of many years was broken off, and why the loneliness of the male protagonist was so carelessly hidden? After reading it, I was filled with emotions and had a seizure.

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Orange bird!

In midsummer, the empress made an eastward tour, bringing with her Military Advisor Wen, First Assistant Gua Qing, Second Assistant Min Qing, and Ge Lao Lingqing. It's very beautiful to walk to the side of the ocean and among the coconut trees. The emperor sighed, called his military adviser, and retreated to the left and right, wanting to talk about family and state affairs. Unexpectedly, the military counselor was so ambitious that he wanted to get his hands on the throne and launched a surprise attack on the empress. The emperor was shocked and said: "If you dare to pout now, how dare you pout next time!" He pulled his knees and left. Return to the palace and summon the princes and officials to discuss matters. The order said: "Without permission, the military advisor cannot attack the emperor." The military advisor laughed when he heard this, and said: "This is a little trick, I will break it with a turn of my hand." That night, he called the first assistant, the second assistant, and the elders of the cabinet to come in to admonish and force the palace. When the emperor heard about this, he burst into tears and said: "I have defeated the whole world at the hands of the military advisor!" He shed tears and changed the order, saying: "The military advisor can be the empress." When the people of the world heard this, they said: "How can an order be changed overnight?" Excerpted from ----- "The Emperor's Inspection to the East"

In the villa On the sofa, Wen Yu smiled and held tea as he watched you and me playing around in front of him. This little girl, about 7 years old, stepped on a stool ten minutes ago and knocked over the cosmetics on her mother's dressing table. Fu Chengque was chasing after her with a feather duster, and the little girl was running around crying. Looking at the warm scene in front of him, Wen Yu couldn't help but sigh, ten years have passed since his rebirth. Buzz! Buzz! ! ! A violent tinnitus pulled him out of his memories. The indescribable feeling of weightlessness made Wen Yu collapse on the sofa. The heart is beating crazily, and every heartbeat is accompanied by throbbing and tingling. Thinking in the brain is like being stirred into paste by an invisible stick. The memories before and after rebirth are gradually mixed and blurred like being stuffed into a washing machine. At the last moment when he closed his eyes, he saw Fu Chengque pressing the little girl with one hand, smiling and waving to him... The picture was frozen. ...... ...... ...... Wen Yu struggled to open his eyes again. Beside the hospital bed, her mother's eyes were red from crying and she was holding her hand, while his father, holding back his tears, forced a smile to Wen Yu and told Wen Yu that he would be fine. Wen Yu struggled to look at Fu Chengque who was standing behind Fu Chengque's parents. Her eyes were still as iceberg-like as before. The look she looked at her couldn't be said to be sad, maybe... A pity? Mercy? Maybe something else. Next to her was a man holding her hand tightly. Wen Yu put his trembling hand on his mother's hand, patted it with difficulty, and smiled. Left quietly under a horizontal line between the instruments and electrocardiogram next to it. Yes, there is no rebirth and system, it is just the last fantasy of a poor, critically ill person.

After taking some time to collect his emotions, Wen Yu opened the door. He planned to take a shower and end the day. But he didn't expect that Qingmei's playful eyes would come to him. "Wen Yu, my mother made chicken soup and brought some to you." Fu Chengque sat at the table, pointing at the pink food box, smiling sweetly. "I thought you might be in poor health. It would be best to drink some chicken soup to replenish your health." The man was silent and didn't know what to do. Fortunately, his mother patted his head gently, and he realized that he should say thank you. "Thank you." He sat down in front of the woman stiffly and slowly, and took a sip of the soup with the porcelain spoon she handed over. "It's a bit bland." It seemed that it was the influence of the dream. He expressed his evaluation without saying anything, and handed out the porcelain spoon and suggested that she take a bite, "Maybe it's because I have a strong taste, why don't you try it?" "Okay." Fu Chengque agreed without thinking too much, and stretched out his hand to take it. Neither of them noticed that Wen Yu's parents, who had returned to the kitchen and were peeking at her, had their eyes wide open, looking like they were in disbelief. Does our big pig that we have raised for thirty years know how to eat cabbage? What they didn't expect was that the neighbor's celebrity daughter actually tasted the soup seriously and said, "It's really a bit bland." "Then I'll add some salt." Wen Yu stood up and wanted to enter the kitchen, but at the door, a hand handed out the salt shaker, followed by his father's encouraging eyes. Good son, seize the opportunity—— Wen Yu didn't understand, but he still came back with the salt shaker. Then there was a period of silence that made his parents cover their faces. He took back the porcelain spoon from Fu Chengque and drank the soup silently. And what about Qingmei? She just sat like that, holding her chin with both hands, looking at the bamboo horse quietly, with an inexplicable warm smile in the corner of her eyes. ———————— After drinking the soup, Fu Chengque was not in a hurry to leave. She said, "I haven't walked into your sweetheart's room for a long time. Can you let me stay in there for a while?" Although the two are childhood sweethearts and have had the same dream recently, their relationship is actually barely even a friend. Moreover, Wen Yu was also subconsciously refusing to have contact with Fu Chengque at this moment, because... The medical certificate was still on the desk. "I just really want to see it." Perhaps it was because Wen Yu's parents were still there. Fu Chengque did not show off the appearance of a mature woman, but smoothly showed off the delicate style of a lovely woman. Wen Yu was somewhat resistant, but faced with the pressure from his parents who refused to surrender to the enemy, he had to quietly lead the way and opened the door to his own room. "The decoration hasn't changed much." Fu Chengque, who was following Wen Yu, walked through the door and said without warning, "Can I look through it casually?" "You really don't regard yourself as an outsider." Wen Yu was a little helpless. He looked at Qingmei's graceful figure lying on his bed, turned his head, and did not dare to look, "This is not a dream." "I just want to know if it was a dream." Fu Chengque propped himself up with both hands, began to recall some details of the dream, and tried to compare it with this room, and said as if unintentionally: "So, did you really buy that decryption book?" She left the bed, walked to Wen Yu, put away her smile, and looked into Wen Yu's eyes seriously. "Now, can you give me the book?" She stretched out her hand, "In exchange, I will let you become the assistant of a big star?" At this moment, no matter how slow and resistant Wen Yu was, he was aware of Fu Chengque's thoughts. Qingmei wants to start a two-person journey with him that can go very far. That should have been the future he dreamed of. But now, the man just shook his head, looking at the face that should only appear in dreams, as if waking up from a dream: "That can't be given to you." "Why?" The woman was puzzled, her beautiful big eyes blinked, as if she couldn't believe that the boy in the dream, her sweetheart, would reject her in reality. "I said, it's too late." Wen Yu didn't show any particularly intense emotions, just like a deep dead pool, "Fate seems to have played a very bad joke on us." He walked to the desk, picked up the medical certificate, and handed it to Fu Chengque. "I didn't tell my parents about the advanced stage of liver cancer. In fact, I don't have much time left." "..." Looking at Qingmei, who was holding the diagnosis certificate in her hand and looking down at her silently, her warm eyes were gentle. He said: "I'm sorry, I can't go to your future." If the overflowing feelings will hurt anyone, it's better to drink them all yourself. After that, Wen Yu sat on the bed and lowered his head. He didn't want to see Fu Chengque leave. But to his surprise, Qingmei did not leave, but instead threw the medical certificate in front of Wen Yu. "This reason is not enough to reject me." Fu Chengque, who realized what Zhu Ma was thinking, let go of her delicate disguise. She stroked her long hair, grabbed Wen Yu's hand handsomely, and pulled him up to walk out of the room. "Fu Chengque, what are you going to do?" Wen Yu did not resist, but he really didn't understand what Fu Chengque was thinking and what he was going to do. "Do what I want." Opening the door and saying hello to Wen Yu's parents, Fu Chengque got permission to take away the bamboo horse at will. The two figures side by side soon reappeared on the street under the moon. "Wen Yu, do you know?" She did not let go of Zhu Ma's hand, holding it from home to the street. "Actually, I have had a wish since I was in high school ten years ago, and that is to have fun in an amusement park late at night like the story in the TV series." "So... You want to take me to the amusement park now?" "Yes." Qingmei replied with a nasal voice. "You are a big star now. If you are caught playing in the amusement park late at night, you will become the headlines tomorrow." "Headlines are headlines, big stars don't care." Thinking about childhood wishes, it will come true. Now, Fu Chengque's mood seemed to be very high, "So let's walk faster." "Do you want to walk?" Wen Yu was even more surprised, "Although we have an amusement park here, it will take more than an hour to walk there. Your feet will definitely hurt when you get up tomorrow." "It doesn't matter, the present is everything to me. Today's happiness and joy will give people the courage to face the ups and downs of tomorrow." Wen Yu was speechless. He glanced at the hands of the two people connected, and then looked at Zheng Zheng, who was in high spirits. Bo, like a young and vigorous green plum, said with some regret: "I want to say, how about we buy two shared bicycles?" "Hey..." The woman stopped, and she followed the bamboo horse's gaze to look at a corner of the street, where there were more than ten bicycles of the same style lined up. Her cheeks turned red and she felt so stupid. But Wen Yu, who was paying attention to her, didn't want to blink, because such a cute Qingmei had only appeared in his dreams, but now she had come to reality.

Recommended online, let's talk about this book to help new entrants. First of all, this is a dog food article. The system is designed to reasonably increase the protagonist's learning ability and promote the relationship between the protagonists. If the female protagonist does system tasks, the male protagonist will receive double rewards, but the male protagonist does not realize that it is the female protagonist who is doing the system tasks due to the weak system existence. (The system can be treated as if it does not exist, and the pure red line will function) Then it is a pure dog food article without any knives. The sweetness is overwhelming. People who are not in a good mood recently can take a look. Finally, please don't lie on the bed and giggle like a maggot. 🙂

The author's psychological description is so vital, and the feeling of all things competing and full of vitality floats before your eyes.

Putting on their means of transportation, the two quickly came to an amusement park that was quite old. "We have arrived, but the door is closed. How are we going to get in?" Wen Yu leaned his bicycle under a tree and raised his hand to ask. "Hmph." There were no outsiders around, and Fu Chengque seemed to have no worries, "The mountain people have their own tricks." She ran to the wall of the amusement park and groped around, and soon a smile appeared on her face. "Wen Yu, come here quickly." Under Zhuma's surprised eyes, Fu Chengque, regardless of his status as a big star, grabbed the hole in the old wall with his hands and feet and climbed up. "Ten years ago, I noticed these holes and thought they could be used. Now, ten years later, they still haven't repaired them." Fu Chengque, who climbed up the wall a few times, smiled proudly in the moonlight. "God is really helping me." After saying that, she stretched out her hand and looked at her bamboo horse. "Come up quickly." I never knew you had such a personality... Wen Yu smiled in his heart, followed Qingmei's path, held hands again, and soon climbed up the wall. However, the two of them were not in a hurry. "Wen Yu, look, the scenery here is pretty good." Fu Chengque pointed to the various play spots in front of him, shrouded in hazy gauze under the moonlight. Roller coaster, pirate ship, carousel... The most eye-catching one is the Ferris wheel. Wen Yu noticed that what Qingmei paid most attention to was the Ferris wheel. There is longing in her eyes. "The scenery is very good, but the wind is not light. Be careful of catching a cold." Maybe it was because the wind was blowing more, but Wen Yu felt a little cold, so he expressed concern. "Your speech is very disgraceful." Fu Chengque squinted at his ignorant bamboo horse, shook his head, and then carefully grabbed the wall and slid down. "However, I forgive you." Fu Chengque, who had reached the ground, turned around and looked up at Wen Yu, "Who made you my sweetheart." She raised a smile, warm and bright. Wen Yu's heart kept beating unsatisfactorily, and it took several times to calm down. "I always feel like you are treating me like a girl." He responded casually, and then followed Qingmei's actions and slid down the wall. The two of them walked in tandem. Wen Yu carefully looked around, walking a little slowly. Not only was he worried about being discovered by the personnel on duty, but he was also afraid of the quiet environment. And his childhood sweetheart was worthy of being a big star. She walked struttingly in the quiet amusement park with such arrogance that Wen Yu felt that the two of them did not look like people who climbed over the wall late at night, but more like tourists who bought tickets during the day. The order is also very obvious. "Wen Yu, are you scared?" After a few steps, Fu Chengque noticed her sweetheart's reaction, and without giving him a chance to refute, she stretched out her hand and handed it to him. "Hurry up, I have already thought about what to play first." I think that no amount of words can be worth the hand handed over by the beloved woman. Wen Yu understood this very well. He silently grabbed Qingmei's soft hand, and the two of them walked all the way to the carousel. "You want to play with this?" Wen Yu looked at Qingmei, "But isn't the merry-go-round only for children?" "You are prejudiced." He reached out to touch Jing. Fu Chengque, who stopped the wooden horse, retorted, "As long as you are interested in playing, you will not care about your age even if you are playing tricks." She used the example of playing tricks, and with a confident look on her face, she subconsciously made Wen Yu nod. "This makes sense..." "That's right." The proud Fu Chengque took the bamboo horse's hand and looked around, and easily found the power switch. "But, do you really want to sit down?" Wen Yu looked hesitantly at the wooden horse that started to rotate, a rare blush appearing on his face that had been polished by society. "It's shameful." "But I want to play!" Fu Chengque chose a white wooden horse. She looked into the bamboo horse's eyes and extended an invitation to him. "You want to play too." "It's not that I don't want to..." Wen Yu couldn't match Qingmei's eyes and looked sideways at the merry-go-round, but when he also chose a wooden horse, Fu Chengque pulled him to sit on the white horse. "But you don't have to sit together!" "Of course you do. If you don't sit with me, how can we hold hands?" The bright moon shines brightly, and the woman raises their connected hands, and the moonlight radiates from her eyes, which makes the man intoxicated. "Come on, no one will know except the bright moon and the stars." They sat on the wooden horse together, the woman in front, humming softly, and the man behind, watching her quietly and listening to her singing. The moonlight carried the stars and painted them, leaving them under the night sky. ———————— After finishing the carousel, Fu Chengque also took Wen Yu to experience bumper cars, spinning tea cups... After a series of projects, the two walked to the Ferris wheel. "Want to try?" Fu Chengque pointed at the lowest cockpit, "You don't need to start the Ferris wheel this time, just go in and sit for a while." "I don't mind?" Wen Yu was a little moved, but he didn't understand why he didn't need to start the switch this time, "But as for the Ferris wheel, isn't the view at the highest point the best?" "Because..." The woman's face was a little rosy under the moonlight. This was the first time tonight that she did not dare to face the bamboo horse's eyes. "I want to be more romantic until it snows and the ground is all white." "At that time, shall we watch together?" Her eyes flickered, as if expecting. Wen Yu felt his breathing become heavy. He looked up at the sky. The bright moon seemed to be blessing him, and the stars seemed to be cheering him on. Looking at his Qingmei again, her eyes were talking. There was no doubt that she was inviting him to that future promise. "Okay." At this moment, he forgot about the medical certificate and only saw his childhood sweetheart. "But I will invite you then." "Oh... I have become bolder." "I just figured it out." He said. "Sometimes you can get on the bus if you work hard, but you will miss it because of a little hesitation." They looked at each other and smiled, and the two held hands and entered the Ferris wheel. ... The Ferris wheel was the last stop on this dream-chasing journey. The two of them walked towards the direction they came from, and then stopped on top of the wall. "Wen Yu..." "What's wrong?" "Actually, I hated the sudden appearance of Meng and you at first, but gradually, I became very fond of it." Wen Yu looked at her quietly. "I want to be a big star, but the path I chose is really hard, and it seems that I can't find even a trace of sincerity in it. It was you in the dream who found it for me and supported my sincerity." She gave up a lot in pursuit of her dreams and missed a lot. Now, she doesn't want to miss it anymore. "So, I want to have a love relationship with you, a love between a man and woman in their thirties that is like youth, like a love in student days." "Are you willing?" The sky was dark, but the stars were bright. He looked into her eyes on the wall with a gentle expression. "I'm happy, as long as you don't dislike me." "I'm not the kind of annoying woman in TV dramas." "But I am not the kind of lovable man in TV dramas." "Then we are a perfect match." Fu Chengque couldn't help but smile, her eyebrows arched like crescent moons. How could Wen Yu not be moved by such a woman? He slid down the wall, raised his head and shouted from below. "Big star, jump down quickly, I will catch you well." "Wen Yu, I believe you!" At the same time as the words fell to the ground, Fu Chengque also jumped down, and then was caught steadily by Wen Yu together with Yueguang. ... Back home, Wen Yu opened the curtains and happened to see Qingmei doing the same thing. The two of them seemed to have returned to the past, when they were young, with comets in the night sky and young people in the sea of ​​clouds. "Hi, Wen Yu." The girl's smile by the window was as bright as the stars, and her satin-like hair swayed in the wind. She looked like a celestial being, but every word she spoke had the warmth of human fireworks. "Thank you for today, I want you to play around with me." "I should be the one thanking you." Wen Yu looked at her and said with a smile, "You gave me the reality of a beautiful dream. That is hope and what I face. Courage for the future. " "I am going to fight against the disease." There was a look in his eyes, "I don't want to die yet." In Fu Chengque's eyes, the bamboo horse that had always been boring and dull became very handsome now. "That's good." Her smile grew stronger, "I also want to be a guest in your bright future." When this person smiles, the docile deer will jump, the soft evening breeze will caress you, and the distant stars will twinkle. He... Will also be moved, but more than once. The moon should be brighter than you, but I don't want to look up at the moon. ———————— Postscript. Seven years later A young and beautiful mother and daughter were playing with a decrypted book called "The Ship of Theseus". "Qing Ning, do you know?" Fu Chengque held her lovely daughter in one hand, and picked up a piece from the potato chip bag with the other hand and put it in her mouth. The sound of clicking. "The doctor who made the diagnosis at the time said there was something wrong with the hospital's equipment, and more than forty cases of late-stage liver cancer were diagnosed in two days. The last check showed that the diagnosis was wrong. Your father looked so embarrassed when he cried." "Is it more embarrassing than when I cried?" "More embarrassing than you, I laughed for a long time." "Huh, stinky dad, he made fun of me for crying, I will make fun of him next time." "Yeah, mom supports you." Click, the handle was turned. ——The sound of pushing the door. "What are you two doing in the room, eating?" "Here... Come here." Fu Chengque, who was conditioned to react, quickly turned around and hid the bag of potato chips at hand, but the potato chips held in the girl's hand could not be hidden. "Wen Qingning, you are eating potato chips in bed again." The pleasant-looking man was wearing an apron, holding a spatula in one hand, and pursed his lips. "I have told you that you can't eat too many snacks like potato chips, let alone in bed." "Assistant Wen, what are you doing! Are you reprimanding my daughter?" Fu Chengque felt sorry for her daughter and immediately protected her in front of Wen Qingning, "Believe it or not, I won't let you go to bed tonight." "But... The habit of eating potato chips in bed is really bad. Wen Yu felt a little aggrieved, "Did you forget that there were potato chip crumbs in your hair last time?" "I don't care about such trivial matters." Fu Chengque pretended to be grand, "I even forgot about it." But who wants to directly destroy the aggrieved daughter? "Dad, mom ate the potato chips, you can't blame me." "Um... This." Fu Chengque glanced at his daughter in surprise, and then met Wen Yu's original gaze, feeling a little embarrassed for a moment. "I was wrong." Fu Chengque, who suddenly became better behaved, pinched his ears with both hands and let go of the potato chips beside him. "If you don't eat it, you won't eat it again." "It's not that I won't let you eat it." Facing his wife's pitiful appearance, Wen Yu sighed, put down the shovel, sat on the bed, hugged his wife into his arms, and reached out to pick up a slice from the potato chip bag. He smiled softly: "You are always so careless when eating, let me feed you." "Xiao Yu..." Fu Chengque showed a sweet smile, and took one gulp of the potato chips into his mouth, adding her husband's finger to it. "Little Queer..." The daughter on the side looked at the two of them with big eyes, thought for a while, and hugged them. "Mom, Dad, I want it too." "Haha, okay, I'll give it to you too." ———————— I would like to write this article to wish that all stories can move towards a better future.

What does it feel like to dream about meeting the girl you loved again when you were a teenager? Wen Yu may be able to tell you something. It was... A long-lost wonderful dream. Being immersed in the secular life, he returned to his youth. There was no oil and greasy smell of the late subway, only the green years when the grass was growing and the orioles were flying. ——That was the time when I was still unfamiliar with the girl. There was no wind in the autumn day. In the dream, I was crouching in front of the desk and doing the questions seriously. After a while, the green plum girl excitedly opened the door of his bedroom with the key, turned around and sat on the bed. The two of them chatted, sounded emotional, noisy, and jumped around. They seemed to dislike each other, but they always cared about each other and never separated. The scroll turned... And a long time passed in the dream. Their lives were intertwined. They started dating after graduating from high school. In college, they made sweet dog food, which was sweeter than grapefruit water. Soon, it was time to talk about marriage... In the small room, the man who was already over thirty opened his eyes, and he was still recalling his previous dream. The content has been blurred, and, was it really a dream? Looking around, I realized again the embarrassment of reality. Wen Yu stood up silently, took out a coat, and out of the corner of his eye saw the white medical certificate on the desk. Sigh... Sighing silently, he opened the door and walked into the bathroom. The towel soaked in hot water was quickly attached to the face, bringing warmth and calmness to the man. He remembered that after graduation, she seemed to disappear from his life. He only vaguely heard that she followed her dream to become a star and finally succeeded. Pretty good. Excellent people will always gather together and welcome their own partners, while ordinary people will return to the mediocre crowd and live their own lives. This is the destiny's arrangement for everyone. Perhaps, time will dilute all this. At that time, Wen Yu thought optimistically. However, this does not seem to be the case. ..... The bright moon hangs high in the sky, and I have no intention of taking a rest after taking a full nap. I put on a solid dark black coat and stroll on the bright street. My hometown is affluent and the night market never sleeps. You can see open shops everywhere and young people who come out late at night looking for joy. Occasionally, you can see a few old couples walking. Alone in the crowd, Wen Yu was like a sparrow among a flock of wild geese, inconspicuous and out of place. A feeling of loneliness, as if he was the only one left in the world, surged into his throat, almost suffocating him. Unconsciously speeding up his steps, he staggered around a corner. In front of him was a towering building with a star poster hanging on it. There is a beautiful woman on that huge poster. The surname is a rare symbol, and the name is very cute, called Chengque. It was my childhood sweetheart. Seeing this person, Wen Yu's body seemed to be injected with a brand new firepower. My heart immediately feels soothed and even relaxed. Just like a long-sick person getting the special medicine he dreams of, the whole person is cured. Probably, it started when I was a teenager. He likes this girl - when he really realizes this, her figure and her name are all there in his dreams. People say that when you like someone, you will become humble. Wen Yu agrees with this view. Since the relationship between the two became cold, he has become afraid to talk to her. At most, he nods normally and doesn't even dare to say hello in a low voice. After the flower called secret love bloomed, it stayed far away. Even making eye contact would be so tense that I couldn't breathe. When I toss and turn and can't sleep, I will worry about things that may not happen at all, as if I were worried about something unfounded. Can I match a girl who is like the sun? Do you have the ability to give this young and lively girl happiness? At that time, the boy was living in pain and low self-esteem. At the last art performance, the girl in the aqua blue dance skirt gave him a stunning performance that made him come to a negative conclusion. He ran away, like a shameless little sparrow in front of Huangniao, and since then turned into a silent puppet. Just like now - he turned around silently and ran towards the nearby park. He liked it there, there was no one there, and he could easily hide himself there, as if he no longer had to face reality. But fate seemed to have played a joke on him... In Wen Yu's favorite corner and favorite bench, a woman he was familiar with sat on it. "Charm... Orange Bird!?" The man's voice sounded loud and clear in this silent park. The quiet woman raised her head and looked at the person who made the sound. She hesitated for a moment and then said from memory: "Wen Yu?" The man in front of him looked haggard, as if he hadn't slept well for a long time. Fu Chengque thought and smiled: "Long time no see, I was thinking of visiting your house later. I miss my aunt a little." Wen Yu didn't answer, just stood there in a daze, the beautiful pictures in the dream flashed away, and then the moonlight fell in reality again. She is still beautiful, even if she becomes a big star, her eyes still have the clear and flawless luster of a deer. Her long eyelashes are like cherry blossoms in full bloom, and the color is hazy, just like the girl's appearance back then. "Wen Yu, you look very bad. Have you not rested?" The woman stood up and approached her. Her gentle voice brought Wen Yu back to his senses. Faced with Fu Chengque's approach, Wen Yu retreated unconsciously. He lowered his gaze, not daring to look, and said in as calm a voice as possible: Just go catch up on some sleep." Fu Chengque was surprised when he heard this: "Are you dreaming too?" Hearing her words, Wen Yu subconsciously raised his head and saw the woman's face clearly through the light of the street lamp. Even though she was wearing makeup, she could not hide her fatigue. It turns out that you also dreamed about me... "Do you still remember the content of your... Dream?" "Yes." The woman replied softly, her cheeks flushed. She still remembered that in that villa, the gentle young man nodded and looked away, with crescent-shaped eyebrows and a face lined with the evening stars. "Wen Yu..." She hesitated to speak, but soon made a decision in her heart. At this time, she was no longer the teenager she was ten years ago. She was mature and courageous enough to become a big star. Fu Chengque stretched out his hand, grabbed Wen Yu's shoulder, and forced him to look at him. "Did you like me a long time ago?" The woman's face was full of seriousness. She wanted to know the answer. In the so-called entertainment industry, she had seen enough falsehoods, but in the past, she seemed to have missed a piece of reality. But what about Wen Yu? He was a little absent-minded, not only because of Fu Chengque's unexpected words, but also because it was the first time that he could see himself so clearly in a woman's eyes. For a while, he did not give an answer, but the woman was not in a hurry. She just waited until she heard the answer she already knew from his mouth. "Well, I like you, Fu Chengque." Wen Yu did not smile, he just answered plainly: "Not just before, even now." "I like you." He repeated again. After hearing Wen Yu's confession, the woman's cheeks turned a beautiful color. She subconsciously let go of her hand, stepped back and looked away, not wanting the man to notice her shame. "Why did you never talk to me, even when I graduated from high school." Graduation... What a gentle word, it is both an end and a new beginning. "Because I am a sensible child." A smile appeared on Wen Yu's lips, but it looked a little bitter in the woman's eyes. "Both my own parents and your parents said this about me." "Sensible children have always been rational and calm. They have no youth, only junior high school, high school and college." The closer you get to society, the more you can understand the things you carry and the cost of pursuing love. And how dazzling Fu Chengque was at that time, Wen Yu felt how ordinary he was. How could he dare to expect her favor? "You know? You are the dazzling sun to me, but to you, I am just one of the countless people under the warm light." The sun does not know that her light is dazzling, and she does not even know that she is the sun. Looking into Wen Yu's eyes, Fu Chengque felt like he was reading a book full of regrets. A meteor of regret also flashed through her heart. The reason why people feel that the love in the book is vigorous, but the reality is dull, is probably because they can easily see the inner turmoil of the characters in the book, but they cannot feel the hesitation of the people around them. ... On the way home, the two walked side by side and talked to each other many things that were buried in their hearts. There is the current story of Wen Yu quitting his job, and there is also the past story of Fu Chengque struggling to survive in the entertainment industry. At the door of the two houses, Wen Yu finally said: "Although I don't know what you think, Fu Chengque, I still want to tell you." "You have been an independent person since you were a child, and you are the protagonist of an era. I really like you, but I don't necessarily want to be with you. I just hope that in the future, when you meet people, Don't be discouraged when you are at a low point, at least there are people who have been attracted by your charm, and they will be in the future. " "Thank you, Wen Yu." The woman smiled softly, "Besides, do you really not consider being my life assistant?" "It's too late." Wen Yu shook his head, took out the key, and returned home. Fu Chengque looked at his back, feeling a little desolate and a little painful in her heart. She didn't like this feeling, and an idea appeared in her mind. When Wen Yu returned home, he briefly spoke to his parents and then returned to his room, where he put down all pretense. He didn't cry, his face was full of tears.

I had read this book before. When I read the introduction, I thought it was about an urban immortal cultivator. But after reading it on a whim, I realized it was about a middle school girl. Although I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, I still ordered it all. It's very beautiful. The author must have had a childhood sweetheart like this, right? There must be some, right?

A sweet story that is terrifying to think about. I have just watched half of it. This kind of system acts as a wingman and gradually brings the male and female protagonists into a relationship. It looks so sweet, fragrant and joyful. But after thinking about it carefully today, I feel more and more that this system is a curse of despair. This system directly binds Qiaoer's life to Wen Yu through tasks without any reason. Her future depends entirely on how the other party treats her. If Wen Yu is a scumbag, then after completing the mission, Wen Yu will give her double rewards to eat up all the bones and dregs, or give up the mission and accept the punishment, and gradually be destroyed under the constant deduction of attributes. And it's not fair to Wen Yu. After all, forcing a red line will not bring any good results. However, the military advisor can choose to refuse and escape, but the empress has no choice. I don't know if Qiao'er, who was a little silly and cute, had any fear when the system first appeared. Maybe she was too big-hearted and didn't think about it that much. Maybe she was optimistic and believed that she would not go into the darkest future. The more you read this book, the more you can't help but feel sorry for this cute and cheerful girl. Fortunately, Wen Yu liked Qiaoer from the beginning, so this story should be a bowl of sweet dog food. I hope there won't be any trouble in the second half that I haven't seen yet. Military Advisor Wen won't turn into a scumbag after his attributes are greatly increased. After all, Empress Fu exchanged her life and future for your splendor. You must be her unparalleled hero and lead your beloved girl to the happiest future. Will the author publish a new book? I wonder what I will read after reading this one. Do any book friends recommend similar books? It has delicate emotions, a single heroine, not abusive, not scumbag.

The more I read, the better it gets. Before chapter 150, it was very ordinary, and some of it was average. Maybe this reason is somewhat buried. But after my heart was revealed, the touching description and excellent writing attracted me to keep reading. Especially the sweet love after the college entrance examination and the richness of the characters finally made the characters deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Since I just finished chasing Rebirth, it was so uncomfortable, so it's great to see such a sweet book! It healed me hard and kept showing my aunt's smile. You will have living expenses when school starts in a few days. Please make up for your subscription immediately. Come on, author! I will keep subscribing.

Which of these two looks like the heroine

It looks like a female channel, and the perspective is not biased towards the male protagonist. After reading dozens of chapters, the heroine is too arrogant. I really can't like her if she's just arrogant but not coquettish. Maybe this article will be more marketable if you contribute female videos¿

From where does Jasmine come from? I almost finished reading it in two or three days. I felt very good, especially the part before the college entrance examination. I felt that the story from the end of the college entrance examination to the trip was not that attractive to me. Too pure a love story seems to easily lose readers?

Found this book from Jasmine's recommendation. Now I finally caught up with the latest chapter. When I first saw it, it was not on the high-quality channel, which almost made me doubt my appreciation. Now that the Empress has entered university, this book has also been on the high-quality channel, which is gratifying. However, I still have to make some suggestions regarding the plot direction after college. As a story about a single female protagonist, it will be easy to get bored if it is too sweet. It is necessary to add some career lines and adjust the academic lines appropriately, and it is easy to create some excitement.

The biggest poisonous point in this book is the past life and the system. I can see that I am trying my best to make things right in the future.

Really well written! The sweetness is here, and so is the art. The few lines of poetry that occasionally come in are really the finishing touch, directly striking the heartstrings.

The writing style doesn't look like a newcomer's, so whose vest is this🤔

I found that there are very few female protagonists with this kind of personality. Most of them are cold, quiet, arrogant, and tired of aesthetics.