Working as a Detective in America

The golden finger is too weak. You want depth but don't have a good grasp of it. The enemy is too strong and your little arms and legs are not involved at all.

Pretending to be mysterious! The note-taking skills are not strong enough and the whole story looks awkward.

The original works of various plots have clues to investigate, so just write down the answers in the original works!

The writing is very messy and a bit hard to understand. I suggest the author be more sophisticated and work on the layout.

Fib is too awkward, not as good as Fobol

Author, your table of contents is too confusing, and the problem of sentence fragmentation is too obvious. My personal suggestion is to find someone to proofread the manuscript, otherwise the reading experience will not be good. Example "After calming down, Michael opened his mouth and said "I'm sorry, I don't want to" This is much better, I hope the author will consider it.

The writing is very unfriendly to readers. The Silence of the Lambs has been going on for so long that I have forgotten the plot, and it was so confusing to read. Everyone has seen movies and American TV series. It's different. When writing an American TV series, you need to explain the plot clearly. It's difficult for a protagonist who can't control the situation to attract people.

Please point out any loopholes. I hope readers will support me. What I wrote above is boring but it will definitely become more and more exciting. Thank you again 🌹 If you have good ideas, comments are welcome.

Okay, I think it's pretty good. I'll give you a few recommendation votes.

. . . . If you want to be curious about a case, the prerequisite is that you have status. If you want to say that this is a completely different world, you can understand it~ But it doesn't make sense.

I read the first chapter and there were typos and wrong names. How did you change them? Haha