Doomsday Simulator, I Use Swordsmanship to Prove Extraordinary

When reading this book, I always have the feeling that the author wants to teach me how to read. It seems that reading comprehension is also included in it. The more I read, the more excited I am. I really need you to teach me.

The author's early stages of this novel are all foreshadowing, and they are also a kind of screening for readers. Generally speaking, those who read later are more consistent with the author's thoughts and ideas, and it is easy to become a loyal fan of this novel (personal opinion, dog head saves life)

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Writing Hole Filling Festival Wishing Season"} I feel that Lao Yi is trying in Junlin and Zhutian, summarizing horizontally, and sorting out the swordsmanship. It gives me a feeling that it is much better than Junlin. Junlin and Zhutian looked a little confused, as if they were expounding their own opinions, but they couldn't summarize them completely. Horizontal push is relatively clear, but some realms cannot be written according to one's own ideas. Now in this book, I feel that Lao Yi's theory is slowly taking shape. Many Zhutianliu's descriptions of the realm are very vague and unsystematic, or some system authors cannot explain it clearly. Just writing it like this will make people feel powerful, but when it is actually applied, it feels inadequate, Laqua. I hope that Lao Yi can successfully improve his system, and the next step is to continue to add bricks and tiles to make the realm clear, so that others can copy it and it will be comfortable to watch😄. Speaking of whether there is a group, I also want to join a group to dive and eat melons. . .

Opening: The early stage is pretty good, the opening is smooth and the story characters are quite fascinating. Part 2: The pace of the story is inexplicably faster, the characters begin to scatter, and suddenly become invincible. It's really awkward to always force a wave of friendship and family affection into things, but it's okay to be more natural. Overall: It has been tried. If you are short of books, you can take a look. The writing is okay and the rhythm is smooth , no big problem I give it seven stars (out of ten)

Looks good, come on! Please update more, thank you, the author

This should be the best work since the beginning of online literature, and it is also the pinnacle of fantasy. First, the exploration, understanding, and discussion of the extraordinary have reached a new level, and second, the character Zhao Xiaoxiang has been created so well.

It's a pity that such a good setting can't be watched anymore

Enlightenment in the book How to change your mentality in an instant during career and emotional troughs Then we need to talk about two attitudes towards life One is to join the world, and the other is to leave the world The method of joining the world is probably a key From a person's isolated island to being closely connected with the world Connect Feel what others feel, and let others feel what you feel The method of being born is to separate from the desires of "I", look at the vast starry sky, and travel the endless river of history, all love and hatred, friendship, family affection, justice, evil, friendship, betrayal , all the seemingly warm feelings and heart-wrenching hurts are just a grain of sand and a touch of dust compared with them... ... Many people are obsessed with pursuing results and meanings, and are influenced by these two words. The so-called personal results and meanings are not so much results and meanings. Justice, rather, is an experience in a short life. What results we get, the feeling of stimulating or stabilizing the soul, is not the experience we pursue in a short period of less than a hundred years When people die, everything is in vain, love, hatred, power and wealth. Can you take your money to the next life to spend, or can you extend your love to the next life? You put so much effort into managing so many connections, yet you put down your dignity and beg to earn that five buckets of rice. This is the way to be born. Cao Cao once said, "I won't care about the flood after I die." In a news program, an old man was asked about the secret of longevity. The old man said four words - mind your own business. We also often hear the saying that children and grandchildren will have their own blessings. After reaching a certain age, the existence of the elderly is the greatest meaning. The meaning of life will be given by future generations, so there is no need to find meaning by oneself. Whether it is coming out of the world or entering the world, seeking inwardly or outwardly, it is an experience in life. I beg and seek but I can't live forever. I am just a mirror, a flower in the water and the moon. I envy the sun, moon and stars for countless billions of years, but I am sad that my life will only last a hundred years. So when others say it does or does not make sense, or it does or does not work, don't take it to heart. Don't be constrained by other people's words and pursue the experience you most desire. ... When we see these clearly, we will naturally reduce our own conflicts and internal friction, and we will become more relaxed as we go.

I felt so tired watching it (ಥ_ಥ). After reading forty-four chapters, I didn't know what I was reading, and the story didn't advance much. The author has something, but there are too many theories and repetitions, which makes it a bit watery. Forget it, just keep it up and look at it again after a while.

It's okay to start reading your book! When it comes to Goldfinger, it's nonsense! Is there such a complicated golden finger? There are also simulators, you are talking to yourself! Being strong is always 99% the result of sweat! %1'S luck!

The writing is very natural and realistic, and the setting is perfect. But it's just too watery. I kept skipping to watch it, but the plot couldn't connect like this. Really uncomfortable.

Where did Chapter 280 go? ? ? ?

To be honest, it doesn't matter if it's good or not. Please give me more updates. What kind of cultivation chat is that? No, the flooded chat group of the Paladin is more watery. Isn't it still good without grades? As long as the water is interesting and not boring, I quite like the philosophical theory.

Can you please change the title of the book? It sounds like a rubbish book and I don't even want to click on it.

You are the first one who asked me to reward you with a dollar to open a book forum, because you are not simply bad, on the contrary, you write quite well, and your writing style and description are quite excellent, at least in the online articles, you are relatively good. But, watch out, this comment is about to start firing. Your novel is really nonsense. The main content of the novel is completely submerged in the pile of settings you threw out and the explanations you seemingly spent so much time writing. Do you know how to write online articles? Brother, after I read dozens of chapters, it was just like reading a marketing account, and it was full of nonsense, and I also liked to divide it into paragraphs. A bunch of irrelevant things cover up the text that is really the main content. Do you not know how to write or are you trying to reduce the word count? Although your method of improving the word count seems more advanced than others, it is really annoying. The other problem is the writing problem. This is actually an extension of the nonsense problem I mentioned in the previous paragraph. Because it is filled with a lot of garbage words, your article segmentation and field arrangement look very 💩. Change it carefully, don't make so much nonsense or overload the settings. Everyone is not a three-year-old child who needs you to teach them, and the pile of garbage piled up there is really annoying. Reading an online novel will actually ruin your mood.

He is worthy of being the first hydrologist at Qidian. He has gained a lot of knowledge.

If I hadn't seen that it was your book, I wouldn't have clicked on this name at all. The name is too similar to the Liu Shui Wen produced by the studio.

My mother, this author is so talented. And the way of water is different from that of other authors. Other people's water is water and other things. This author is Luo Libasuo's water, just like the old lady talking about Che Zhuanlun, saying one sentence over and over again. The author wants to write about swordsmanship, martial arts, etc. He should read more books written by the author on this site and learn more. After writing so many books, he is still like this, completely immersed in self-movement, writing a bunch of words, all with various settings and insights.

When I first watched it, I asked for a reward of 100 for just saying something... Really, the sea, you are all water. Is this a little bit of plot mixed in the sea of ​​settings and random thoughts? To be honest, if the content after the subscription is still the same, then I can only watch it through another channel. It's not that I can't accept the slow start, but that I can't bear to spend money wasted, so I just listened to it, and then after more than ten chapters, the plot just faded away.

When I saw that all the comments in the comment section said that you repeated the water settings and mixed the plot with the settings, I suddenly felt refreshed and felt much more comfortable, so I stopped criticizing this book.

It's still an old problem. In the later stage, the progress of a lot of truth books is too fake and too empty. I often force level 6 and end up unfinished. Several times.

This one is pretty good.

The sister in this book is obviously not very likable, but the author likes to write about her. Yuan Zhikong must have left a deep impression on the author.

I can't complain, the author writes the novel in a prose way😅 and then it's really too ink-filled

Impressions 1. In fact, the protagonist does not need such a strong gold finger. He has a talent that transcends the rules and levels, as well as a panel and even a trait store. This is enough. There is no need to add the simulation part. The honest reward for hard work to become stronger and gain traits is enough to write about 2. There can be settings, but they cannot be written together. It's all written together, it's extremely boring, and it's a drama, and it doesn't require so many explanations. The author seems to hope that everything is reasonable, and requires readers to understand this reasonableness. It's really unnecessary To be honest, I was a bit tired and unhappy. The plot progressed slowly, so I didn't read further. These are just my feelings after reading 40 chapters. Just suggestions.

The realm is divided into three major realms and two major stages. The three major realms are divided into mortal realm (low dimension, high dimension _ Maharaja, multi-body sole _ creation), Tao realm (origin _ immortality, origin _ eternity, tracing back the timeline to the original convergence timeline to become the only _ Yuanshi), fruit realm (extra-dimensional existence is infinite _ God Lord, creation out of nothing _ Tianzun, smelting existence and the end of Tao _ Great Lord). The two major stages are divided into the material stage of cultivation and the conceptual stage of cultivation. The realms corresponding to the first stage are the mortal realm and the Tao realm. In the material stage of cultivation, rules, avenues, energy, spirit, and matter are cultivated. The sea of ​​latitude where this book is located is summarized by the ten pillars. No matter how strong the cultivators at this stage are, they are within the latitude and cannot compare with the latitude itself. The second stage is the stage of practicing concepts. Concepts refer to illogical things such as making something out of nothing. The realms corresponding to this stage are the realm of fruition and the realm of tribulation (the realm of tribulation is not a realm). The Tribulation Realm (the three small realms of the Fruit Realm = the first three steps of the Tribulation Realm. The Tribulation Realm is not a realm, but the path that practitioners take towards transcendence. To achieve transcendence, nine steps are needed, so the Tribulation Realm can be divided into nine steps. There is no way to go in the last six steps of this realm, and there is no law to follow, so you have to open it up yourself, so what everyone cultivates is different, so the Fruit Realm is the end of the road).

Is this another book? It's good not to learn. It's very annoying. After the writing collapses, the writing method of restarting with a lot of pressure is better than this.

I didn't look too carefully, I just looked a little bit. What should I say? In the era of Shuangwen, it's really not me who can comment on what you wrote. It's not that I'm not qualified to write novels, but all readers who read them are qualified to comment. It's just that I don't understand! I can't say I don't understand it at all, but I can also say it's not very clear. In the early days, I read some slow ones, but in the middle period, I read some cool articles or slow-burning cool ones. I will never be the kind of person who gives you the artistic conception. I saw the sixth one, and I don't have the patience to read it anymore. You haven't told me about these six pictures, or you haven't given me the desire to read them. This is too slow. I have read a lot of novels, some popular and some not, but as long as I can keep reading, they always start to capture the reader's interest from the beginning. I didn't read yours, so I don't know whether it is good or bad, but anyway? It's all too slow. Even if your book is a classic that can enshrine gods, it is like when I go to a restaurant to eat, I am starving to death, and the food has not been served yet. I am almost starving to death. I will definitely not sit there waiting for the food. I will go directly to the next restaurant. Every restaurant cannot serve food so slowly, right?

I found that the most speechless thing about this book is that there is no strongest, only stronger. Every time I talk about reaching the top, there are peaks of peaks, peaks of peaks, extreme limits, black hands of black hands, and black hands, just like an infinite Russian matryoshka doll. As long as the author still wants to write about transcendence, it is only the starting point. There is a greater transcendence above the transcendence. This feeling of looking into the bottomless abyss is really disappointing, because there is no plot and it is all empty.

I think the author's biggest problem is the proportion of setting and plot. As we get to the later stages, the plot becomes more and more lacking. Many times there are several chapters in a row, all filled with settings, various metaphysics, and various analogies and metaphors. The plot is finally about to develop, and it turns out to be a cycle. Cut off a section of time and go back to the past and future, or to a parallel time and space. The key is that many of them haven't traveled through time themselves. I understand that the author wants to enrich the main line with side descriptions, but there is too much of this kind of content, right? It looked a little confusing to me. . .