Xianwu Datang: Start with the Rich Woman and Add Points

I came here from the "Survival Guide to the Wasteland Cultivation World" and originally wanted to raise it, but today I saw the author's pigeon. I really like this subject matter, so I would like to make some suggestions: First of all, let's talk about the mainstream elements of online writing: "Fast pace", "Emotional ups and downs", "Refreshing feeling" And how does this book conflict with these elements? 1. A sense of wasteland. In the era of the epidemic, the post-apocalyptic survival genre has become very popular. This also means that most readers are not survival enthusiasts and do not pay much attention to the creation of a "wasteland feeling". Too much of it will make them disgusted. This book is full of "wasteland feeling" from beginning to end, such as a large number of descriptions of the environment, barbecue, the source of salt and other details. For enthusiasts, this can bring a "feeling of pleasure", but for most ordinary readers, this slows down the pace of the plot, and the readers' emotions tend to be flat for a long time, that is, "slow pace" and "no emotional ups and downs" Here is an excerpt from the original text, you can see what it feels like br>"In autumn, the ears of the spiritual valley are heading. It is not that the spiritual valley will begin to ear when autumn comes, but it is called autumn when the spiritual valley is earing." Suggestion: Reduce unnecessary descriptions in the first few chapters to attract readers first, and then slowly increase them later, and the "wasteland feeling" also needs to be used in key points. What are the key points? Use the "wasteland feeling" to create a depressing atmosphere, and the protagonist Goldfinger will get a "feeling of relief", or describe the tragic plot in the later stage, causing "emotional ups and downs" 2. Human interaction Don't worry about scarcity but inequality. Most of human emotions come from fellow humans, not other creatures. In other words, is it more fulfilling for a pig factory owner to control the life and death of pigs, or to control the promotion of employees? As for this book, let alone human interaction at the beginning, there are no people at all, only animals, so the "refreshment" is naturally not that strong. After leaving home, several short plots and several years passed, and it immediately became "slow-paced" (of course, as an enthusiast, I actually prefer to start with no one at all) After that, the protagonist met two people, both of whom he could not beat. Although he was not bullied, he was still aggrieved. "Emotional ups and downs", the purpose of falling is to get up, there is no need to simply fall down. The 345th person has a decent relationship with the protagonist, but they are also mediocre and have no "emotional ups and downs" The 678th person finally has a conflict. What is the result? I kept grinding for a long time, adding a lot of analysis halfway through the typing, and then continued typing. The emotions that the reader finally evoked were immediately extinguished midway, and the fight was too long, and the "fast pace" was gone. Suggestion: If you are born in a town at the beginning, or just one step away from the town, and then there is a conflict, use the golden finger to counterattack and you will have the first pot of gold.

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I see that this book is the best one the author has written so far. Especially in the first few chapters, the world view is set up, some cheats are added, and the LSP's cool points are set up very well. It also understands the readers' preferences very well. The subsequent plot development is basically expected and looked forward to by LSPs. The key is that the author's writing style has improved again, and the rhythm is also quite well controlled. I hope this book can be written to be more than 2 million words. The world view of this book can be extremely grand, and it is too easy to write all kinds of interesting plots. I hope this book will be the work of the author who will become a god.

Half a month and a thousand votes are returned to the eunuch. How can you tolerate those dozens and hundreds of people who still insist on updating?

It's not a bad thing, I just want to ask when did so many protagonists like widows? I want to know who started this trend. Does anyone know? I still like the original.

The author actually said that we Cao thieves are a minority. Can everyone agree? Where is our army of Cao thieves? Where are the people who inherited Wei Wu's legacy? Let's build a building for the author to see🐶

The author was sanctioned. Two new books were released in a row. "My Ladder Game" and "Cultivation World Awakener" were all removed from the shelves. He is the worst author known to all.

The first thing that comes to mind is this

Ever since Nasha Association came out. I can't write anything, and there are not many people who can read books nowadays.

What the hell, it doesn't matter that a certain male god is even hotter than you even if you have a car, have you offended someone? Still didn't show filial piety to the imperial army?

Can you beat the pigeon to death? 🤭🤭🤭🤭

Qidian is too deeply involved now. Several of the old authors I follow have become eunuchs. 99% Of them are reported by peers. There are also various trolls mingling among readers, subscribing, spraying and reporting at the same time. It's difficult 🤫

Let's go to a certain land next door. There's a highway there.

This book is a rare novel that I personally feel is very comfortable at the beginning and has a very stable performance. Only the first 50 chapters describe the entire world view quite fully. The plot is relatively continuous but does not feel too compact. The character creation is very good. I like it very much. If I hadn't read the word "complete", I think this book could have written at least 1,000 chapters or more. Anyway, I am paying attention.

I'm really convinced. I feel that this book is the author's pinnacle work. I originally planned to fatten it up before slaughtering it, but ended up censoring it. It's the same as filial piety.

Li Chan fanart

This is an old eunuch. His works are basically all about eunuchs. I don't know where this wronged person actually rewarded me. . . .

Fortunately, I quit and took a look at the chapters of Dead Eunuch.

How long has this book been discontinued? Is there any recommendation?

It's boring to force someone. . . Even if you force it, don't exaggerate the openness and tolerance of the Tang Dynasty at the beginning. The protagonist is also not clean, so marrying a widow is nothing, on the contrary, it is very profitable π_π

It's a pity that the car didn't start, eunuch. Does anyone know which platform the author has developed on? {"NickName":"beat it to death","UserId":339012448}

Why is the book I just opened taken off the shelves again? Is it still a name?

S13 programmers, how did this book get into the category with the most monthly votes?

Isn't the cover of this book featuring a general from Three Kingdoms?

I thought it was a fairy tale, but I didn't expect it to be a romance. It was so soft that I couldn't read it.

It's too messy, Golden Finger is unclear, whether I can add more points is completely my own opinion.

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I've watched almost 40% of the time and haven't purchased it yet. Are you serious?