With This Template, It's a Bit of a Loss to Be a Hero.

The protagonist is ignorant and is still growing up. He has the potential to be strong but has not found a goal and a path and taken action. Therefore, some of his words and deeds are stupid, which is understandable but not acceptable. There are too many readers selected here. As a reader, he does not want to see the protagonist Wen Qing getting sick and deficient. Try to determine the path as early as possible. The author has a complete story, but the reader does not, so people will run away. A terrorist attack incident has been written from 17 chapters to 47 chapters. It's okay to finish it all. I hope it will be more refined in the future. Refining refers to the amount of information and the advancement of the plot. In addition, do not write memories before a fight is about to happen. It will greatly affect the reading sense. I can probably understand that it is laying the groundwork for explaining your life experience, but you should not write it before the fight is about to start, while you are watching Naruto. Qidian really does not welcome this kind of male protagonist who has no path and persistence. Although the classification of this book is more suitable for light novels, even light novels do not like this kind of male protagonist. In addition, all the female characters appearing so far are not likable, especially the Lolita with tsundere tendencies (this is very poisonous). Characters of this type and label are difficult to write, and the profit after writing is not great. At present, it seems that the author does not have the writing ability, so it is not recommended to be thankless. The tsundere loli girl is not even as good as the ordinary squad leader and the love-minded female partner who hits people with chalk. It's just one family's opinion, whether you believe it or not, I recommend the author to write more after it is put on the shelf, and see if the subscription can be dropped and that's it. For the time being, I can continue to pursue it. These are minor problems that I can tolerate. I was also screened out at a few more difficult judgment points 🤐.

I only use one sentence to express my feelings after finishing the game: Eula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Oula Punch to the flesh, Wuhu.

This world view is too petty. It depicts that the entire world consists of two cities, one local and one foreign. The first superpower user Zhengqi to appear on the stage is in the protagonist's city, the top superpower user who can exchange information with hostile organizations is in this city, the rising star Xu Shaoyang is in this city, the granddaughter of the logistics scientist is in this city, and the planet incarnation is in this city.

Just like Mr. Saitama in One Strike Man, he is not bound by secular concepts and wants to do the right thing. Of course, it's like a one-hit man. What these people do is truly heroic. Even if it is "inequality" that is acquiesced to by most people, they will definitely resist it. But this will definitely harm the interests of certain classes, and it will also cause those who acquiesce in these things to have the idea of ​​"meddling in other people's own business," thus ostracizing the protagonist. But looking at the introduction, the protagonist wants to be a hero. The two parties that have appeared so far, whether they are the "Foundation" or the "Super Police", do not conform to the protagonist's own thoughts and actions. The former belongs to a party that does not even abide by "justice", while the latter is limited to "so-called justice" and must obey orders. Generally speaking, the protagonist is now in a period of confusion. He wants to be a hero, but he does not have such a strong will. If Mr. Saitama is a "hero driven by interest", he has a firm will and is not defined by outsiders. What he does is only to satisfy his own hero. Then the current protagonist wants to do "just" and "heroic" things, but he still cares about him. Even if he does something in a hurry, he will still panic and reflect afterward. Can the author handle these better so that the protagonist can grow while strengthening his will and belief? If this is the case, can the protagonist be "uncompromising", because once the protagonist makes a compromise, the entire book will collapse. This is a test of the author's own skills, especially this work with the "hero" label.

What, Lin Yiqi is not the protagonist. I started watching the threesome at the beginning from the second chapter. I always thought that the captain was the protagonist, and the one named Yin was just a little kid, a lucky guy. On the other hand, Captain Lin is calm, courageous, resourceful, mature and stable. Even if the warriors ridicule him, in the end he still wants to save him and find a way out in a desperate situation. He is really too strong. What he lacks is an opportunity.

I feel like everyone is the protagonist except the protagonist.

To sum up, the protagonist is half a loser

It's so long-winded that it has two tastes.

This is a bit like the useless male protagonist in Japan. The key is that even Japanese animations don't like this anymore.

Male protagonist

I looked at it and it didn't work, it didn't suit my taste. I thought this was 😁Please call me Superman 😁 This novel is a truly righteous person or a night-fighting urban magical girl. This is what I like. What does this novel say? I don't really like it. 😅A protagonist who is powerful yet so useless. This is not about looking at the Dragon Clan.

Little Amy

So far, a bunch of weird things have been produced. It can be said that this little broken ball has taken the jujube pill now. The first system that is visible to the naked eye is the Immortal system. It should be a bunch of gods who each select their own apostles and give them power. The ones that have already appeared are Qinglong and Suzaku among the four holy beasts, Qiongqi and Chaos among the four evil beasts, and Shi Tianqian and Tai A kind of God of the Year Among them, Suzaku's special ability is that his consciousness is immortal and he can be resurrected continuously (in fact, I am very curious about how the previous generation of Suzaku envoys died, I guess he was tired of living) Qiongqi's special ability is to use evil thoughts to gain power. There are also the Four Saints weaving rules, and the Ten Heavenly Stem itself is a rule-type setting. If nothing else, the upper limit of this group of gods should be the universe level. I don't know if the apostles have such high growth potential The second type is honey, small spirits, Vitas, etc., Which are probably cosmic creatures, aliens and the like. It is inferred that Honey's ability should be conceptual interference. The concept of shield given to Lin Yiqi, the flying arrow cannot move, and the three concepts taken away later all prove this And Little Spirits is a planet Vitas said that Honey is an old acquaintance, Big They are probably of this type However, there is a high probability that they do not have the cosmic level. Lin Yiqi said that Shinra's ability can only cover the earth in terms of eliminating cognition. Combined with the laws of the Four Saints' weaving mentioned above, the scope of Shinra's abilities is limited to the earth. It is probably because of the Four Saints' Law. Finally, there is Lin Yiqi, a relatively special existence, with top-notch growth potential, at least at the universe level. Such a mess of outrageous gadgets are concentrated on the earth, and it feels modest to say that you take jujube pills

After seeing the setting of the hero mechanism in the latest chapter, I thought that the protagonist could absorb the enemy's negative emotions to strengthen himself. I didn't expect that he could only produce and sell the hero himself. That's too far. If the protagonist can absorb the enemy's negative emotions to become stronger, then the protagonist must be talking trash to provoke the enemy's negative emotions while using negative emotions to strengthen himself. Isn't that cool?

Justice is not wrong, but your kind makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I like Justice in Soul of Burning Steel. This is one of my favorite protagonists in Qidian over the years.

Please improve the protagonist's superpower to the point where it is unreasonable that no matter who comes first, he will be the best in the world. The protagonist's quality is constantly declining.

If you choose to be upright and upright (uprightness is not a derogatory term), you have to accept the rejection of the world In a society with perfect rules, if you choose to fight against the rules, you will either stand at the top and re-write the rules, or you will be beaten to death by vested interest groups under the existing rules In reality, there are many people who choose uprightness and uprightness, but none of them have been able to go to the point of re-making the rules since ancient times. They are destined to become a tragic hero, or even There is only sadness left... This subject matter is too heavy, and it may not be suitable for writing online novels.

I absolutely loved reading it when I was 13 or 14 years old, but when I was 18, I experienced severe beatings from society, family, and school, and I just felt a little bit off. However, this kind of book is a bit rare. Come on, author, keep pursuing your dream, although I don't know if it will succeed.

The writing is good, but not good enough. The protagonist is not pure enough. It describes the complexity of human beings, but it lacks depth. The protagonist's sense of justice is not very righteous, and he knows the gap between ideal and reality but lives within it. You can neither be an implementer nor a mediocre person, neither good nor bad. Overall it's really good, just a little bit worse. This point would push the book higher, either as a pure idealist, or as a villain who carries himself out.

Fast forward to: Goodbye, mother, and my cowardice

Similar to Lu Mingfei of the Dragon Clan, this is all. Those who like to read can stay.

It's suitable for children aged 17 or 18. It's well written, but it's not suitable for people like me who have been worn down by life.

Learning from Jiangnan is really praised. Jiangnan literary youth are well-founded. The dozens of chapters written by this author are indescribable. He uses second-rate or even first-rate writing to write third-rate or even... How can he write such an awkward feeling? Farewell, I can only say it's a pity the writing style

If the protagonist were a junior high school student, this character would be understandable. Junior high school students are the most sensitive, and high school students are still sentimental. The basic three views should have been stable long ago. Those super powers have been with you for ten years, making you look like a useless boy who just got super powers. The sense of separation is too serious.

The author cannot learn from Jiangnan!

The protagonist reacts passively and is hesitant, thinking about this and that Killing people and whining.

How should I put it? Seeing 158 feels a bit like the old Madonna-style shounen comics! It's behind the times!

Is this how it was written twenty years ago?

My stomach hurts when I see it, it's true

It was over when I woke up... How about I go back and sleep for a while? In short, let's finish spreading flowers🌸!