One Piece Shadow Throne

Danzo: You will regret the day Sarutobi: I am the shadow

His name is Aatrox, what kind of abilities are we talking about?

It seems that I can't stand the first one. It's very poisonous. It's been more than ten years since time travel. My mother was a lieutenant general in the navy and an undercover pirate. The protagonist has been waiting for the system's free lottery draw for more than ten years. He never spent money to draw a prize again? And it's been more than ten years, I know it's the Pirate King, but I haven't trained yet. After six or seven pirate groups, it's still not as good as a single soldier pirate.

It seems that around Chapter 10, I feel that the author has not seriously understood the positions and settings of the original characters. For example, in the original work, Akainu is a kind of hard-blooded soldier who can do whatever it takes to eliminate pirates, while Sengoku's character is gentler than hardliners like Akainu and has his own stance and emotions. However, both Akainu and Sengoku's goal is to eliminate pirates.

The author's previous writing was a bit embarrassing, but it became more interesting later when he joined the Big Mom Pirates and married Big Mom. Big Mom also gave birth to 108 children to the protagonist, named the 108 Generals of All Nations. In the end, the protagonist, Luffy, Ace, and Sabo formed F4 and started a tour in the pirate world. It was really touching.

Ryan: I did this all for the Navy, you are too soft-hearted Sakaski! Akainu: Don't forget that I am the marshal. Ryan: You'll regret it, Sakaski! Door: Bang! Lian, who returned to the base: Jhin, get rid of xxx without leaving any traces. Jhin: Got it!

So, excluding the system plug-ins, the protagonist himself is a pure loser. He has traveled through the world of pirates for 18 years and has no combat power at all... This setting can drive away most readers. The protagonist is soul-transported but not clothed. How can the human body and talent of the pirate world be so weak? It makes no sense in FW to this extent.

Compelling strength. If this is the poisonous point, there is no need to come in.

Rosinandi applied to be an undercover agent on his own. I remember it was mentioned in this paragraph that the Warring States Period did not agree.

I have only read Chapter 15 so far, and I have no desire to continue reading. The author just suppressed the protagonist purely to suppress it, which is boring!

This is a great introduction Inform our people and kill Qing Pheasant

The weak ones work as undercover agents, but the pirates who work as undercover agents are all elites.

Just look at the introduction. You can kill Kuzan and you have a fight with Sakas Chicken Chop. Just kill him.

I feel like the author's outline is not well written. Now that I'm reading this article, I feel like it's a hammer here and a stick here and there. The characterization is very superficial and the writing is not good either. The biggest shortcoming is the characterization of the protagonist. The biggest characteristic of a good protagonist is that it cannot give the reader a feeling of "I can do whatever I want." As far as the protagonist's appearance is concerned, anyone with a little luck can do better than him. The only bright spot is the description of the protagonist's father, Akainu. Needless to say, the Warring States Period was described as a pure and innocent person. The justice of the Warring States Period was "the justice that reigns over the world", and he was also a naval marshal with an overbearing look.

Ito Makoto's talent card is worth a general 😏😏😏. Once the card is put up, the ability is released, and the love blossoms. Maybe he will change from son-in-law to father 😏😏😏

Sister-in-law, please don't let this slip. Don't let Brother Cheng get into trouble.

Garrett was really tricked to death. . . It feels really disgusting to be undercover, but Wang Daoliu looks more comfortable.

The base number of 30 billion is too big. If you make 3 billion, it will be almost acceptable. It is really meaningless to highlight the protagonist's bad luck like this.