Datang Town Magic Division

Such as the innate invisible body-breaking sword energy of the God of War Guan Qi, the thunderbolt of the Nine Heavens Thunder Ancestor, the Supreme Great Luotian of the Holy Emperor, the Nine Deaths Evil Art, the Ten Thousand Poisons Heart Sutra, the Sun and Moon Treasure Mirror, the Ascension Art of the invincible ancestor, Chi You's Seven Limits of Devouring the Sky and Destroying the Earth, Wang Ling's Nine Heavens Manual, Li Shimin's Six God Art, Nuwa's Huntian Treasure Mirror, and the Fire Cloud Evil God's Wu Jian. The Yi Jin Jing, the Eastern Nine-Yang Divine Art and the Ten-Yang Realm, Monk Qiao's Golden Code of the Demon Realm, Wang Fenglei's Seven Heavens of Dark Ice and Fire, Queen Yamatai's Golden Bell of Shinto, Xu Fu's Sacred Heart Art, Bu Jingyun's Wuqiu Yi Jue, King Zhou's Demonic Magic Art, Quan Gang Gang's Thirty-Six Ways of Strangeness, these are all very good themes, please learn more from them! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is quite good, but when it comes to the supporting actress Chen Wanying, the protagonist acts like a licking dog. Yes, it's disgusting.

You wrote the imperial court too weakly in the first two chapters. Of course, it would be fine if the court was controlled by a sect, but the title of your book obviously does not.

After reading more than ten chapters, the main plot line is okay, but I don't understand the protagonist's positioning. His behavior and speech always have a sense of running down. I don't understand the overall structure and height of the world. I always feel out of place when I rush in. I don't have enough understanding and specific reference to Goldfinger. The writing style is not mature enough and always seems weak.

Change your name! Don't call him the Demon Commander of the Tang Dynasty, change him to the Savior of the Tang Dynasty!

Can we stop writing about martial arts in the Jingu system and learn more about martial arts from Hong Kong comics? Nothing new at all.

Now a child, now a minister, we discuss important matters like this, and why do I feel that I am no longer the protagonist? Everyone else's IQ is not online

I have been writing the book for more than two years, but I am considered a newcomer at the beginning. If there are loopholes or illogical places in the book, book friends are welcome to correct them. As long as they are reasonable and reasonable, they will be humbly accepted and modified. But please be kind with your words, hate illogical trolls, and just troll for the sake of trolling.

Changsun Wuji was demoted one by one

I suggest authors be careful when writing female protagonists or female characters. I personally read many books and felt that they were obviously well written, but as soon as I wrote a female character, I would stop writing it. If the character is not well portrayed, write less or not at all, lest I become a human being inside and out.

It's okay in the front, but is the protagonist a bit too sinister in the back? It's a bit like doing whatever it takes to achieve the goal.

After watching the opening, I felt confused, but the prince's strength fell completely.

I won't read books with less than 600,000 words. 🙄

The characters seem a bit messy, making me feel a little unhappy and aggrieved.

It doesn't come early, it doesn't come late, but at the critical moment, the golden finger comes. There is no time for development at all, and there is no way to see it.

Detective Di Renjie? Mutated?