My Solo Travel Trip

I don't understand why I'm following the main plot. If I like the main plot, wouldn't it be better to just travel through time and become a white wolf? Watching the protagonist pretend to be in front of the white wolf, I always feel very 2

Now that we have come to the world of wizards, of course we must help the Nilfgaard Empire~ After all, referring to a large number of 3rd generation and other background stories, the empire respects law and order. And non-human races can also obtain very good living conditions as long as they have technology and value~ Moreover, the empire will conduct reasonable governance and recuperation after unifying the chaotic world... If it were not for various plot killings In order to cater to the international (Western) market, they have already unified the world. Some of the emperors of the empire are very similar to our Qin Shihuang and some other founding emperors, but they are more Western in behavior~ The Yankees will only complain about the empire being unkind or being too good to non-human races every day. They have completely failed to realize that the four northern countries are all rat shit... Every day they only eat, drink and have fun, and they are just plotting. And after plotting for a long time, nothing happened.

If this novel is just for your own hobbies and for self-pleasure, then go for it. If you want to achieve some results, it is recommended to make an outline before writing the game plot. It is strongly recommended that the various games be connected in series in the outline, rather than writing hundreds of pictures of one game until I vomit. Believe me, it is impossible for most readers to accept hundreds of consecutive pictures of a game world.

People talk about favors all day long and use them as transactions, but when they are spoken out, they are no longer favors.

Apart from anything else, don't be like the last book that only had one world that was stinky and hundreds of chapters long. Starting from Biochemistry, the number of readers dropped significantly! It can be said that I was tortured by you myself! The stand-alone category itself is niche! The hundreds of chapters in your world are purely in conflict with the title of the book! If the title of the previous book had been directly related to Resident Evil, I think some fans would come and read it! Well! Hope you can learn from it!

So far, it's a bit too fluid. I feel that the protagonist's ability can obviously do more, but he is still spinning around on the one-third of the original plot mission. In fact, there are many points that can be intervened. Reinvigorate the snake school witcher, study the magic that can be activated quickly through sigils, and in Toussaint Make a duke for fun, split the Wild Hunt into Autobots and Decepticons, and then let them kill each other. These are all points that can be written to make people shine. The main point of the fan fiction is the imagination, and the second is the writing. Now both of them are a bit lacking, so keep working hard. The griffin was sent casually, and it didn't play any role in promoting the plot at all. You could have written a plot about collecting genes from other monsters to enhance the griffin's strength. Otherwise, this griffin might as well have been punched to death from the beginning.

A suggestion, even if you like series games like Resident Evil, don't write hundreds of chapters in one go. After writing about the Raccoon City Incident and Veronica, I changed the game, wrote two more worlds, and then returned to Biochemical, so that the readers will not be tired of looking at the clothes. Otherwise, let alone reading novels, even playing games, no one would be willing to play a set of games for several months.

No? Are you making the same old mistakes again? The problem with old books is that they don't learn anything at all? The previous book was long and smelly, so why not this book too? It is recommended to contact the editor to change the name! Directly change it to a wizard's journey!

It felt like An Jie would smile with a cold disdain every time he passed by. The little monster who is running water, Anjie who is strong in iron, and disdainful in iron.

There are over a hundred chapters! More than a hundred chapters! Why are you still wandering around with wizards? It's already on the shelves. What is unlimited?

Are you sick? After finishing writing Pig's Feet, let's write about Pig's Feet's daughter playing house? I can't write anymore and I want to make money, so I write randomly here, right?

. . . It's better to put three books together, with the same Anjie protagonist and no return, just three copies. But this will confuse new readers, and old readers won't know that you have published a new book. . .

It's inexplicable. It doesn't say where the protagonist gets his power. The first few chapters don't explain anything about the identity of the protagonist. It's too unfriendly for people like me who haven't read the previous book.

Inexplicably, after watching it for a long time, I knew the name of the main character, but I didn't know the rest at all.

Six thousand degrees, equivalent to a grenade? I want to ask, is your grenade made of hydrogen bombs? Did you make this grenade for the Titan? Otherwise, people wouldn't be able to throw it away!

I feel that the author did not write clearly about a lot of things that should be written, such as the ability of the wizard to absorb the four major elements. What are they? If you can simply control the four major attributes, I think you should actually use it well after having been to the wasteland world. After all, there is so much knowledge, but the protagonist is a reckless man. The second point is that there is a child Cindy after the protagonist. Although the eldest brother is in the magical world, Cindy is only 5 to 6 years old. You would hand Cindy over to a man who is 20 years older. It is so disgusting. The book is very good, but these two points are a bit poisonous.

The more I watch, the more I hate the protagonist, who kills people at every turn and has no bottom line. Muscle-brained idiot

Although the plot in the second half is worse and the protagonist's character is becoming more and more unlikable, at least it is finished. It has a beginning and an end. It is much better than those authors whose writing is better but whose eunuchs are better. If I open a new book, I will order it 🤝

I have written five novels, but none of them have more than 50,000 fans. Have you never thought about the problem before starting a new book? You spend time coding every day, and you end up with a week's worth of money. You don't even know if you have enough money for cigarettes. What are you doing?

If I keep writing like this, I really don't want to read it anymore. The protagonist is the protagonist. What the hell are these several consecutive pictures? It's a snack.

It is recommended that those who are confused start reading his first book. This book is equivalent to the third volume. . . . . . .

I don't know what the author was thinking. He wrote so many things about Cindy, and it was obvious that she was used as a knife by someone else. She was taken over by another man when she was only a few years old.

I have played all the Fallout, Metro series, Resident Evil series, and The Witcher 3 written by the author, but I have only played the beginning of 2077. Reading your novel reminds me of the time when I used to play stand-alone games. Please subscribe and support them all.

What's the situation? When did the author publish a new book? It's been a year and I don't know?

Have you written Devil May Cry? I'll watch it if you have one

How come the protagonist has no money? Can't the space be used to store gold and jewelry?