Hogwarts: Chasing the Storm

Author, I know writing a book is hard work, but could you please stop with the filler content? 😭 I know writing a book is a very personal matter, and I don't mean to criticize you, but I still have some feelings to share, so I'm just recording them here. I hope you won't be angry. When it comes to online writing, it really depends on your initial intention.

Lily Evans

Is the protagonist a transmigrator? I guess he's a Thunderbird in this life, transformed into human form. That dream is probably a memory from his previous life, which he only recently awakened and hasn't fully integrated yet, hence the dream-like quality. I don't know if my guess is correct.

It's well-written, keep it up, author! The only slightly odd thing is that the protagonist, a magical creature, received an acceptance letter to university; otherwise, it's great, no problems at all.

The writing is truly indescribable; skipping any chapter doesn't affect the reading experience at all—it's incredibly rambling.

The author's impressions of the various houses are too stereotypical. Take Ravenclaw, for example; not all Hawks are academic superstars. They only focus their efforts on areas that interest them. If they were all so exceptional, why are Ravenclaw's notable figures similar to those of other houses?

If I were in that era, I would definitely pursue Lily no matter what, it would be so exciting. And couldn't the main character have a romantic relationship with the male lead's mother?

It's been a long time since I've seen a non-human protagonist. There was one where a silver dragon transformed into a human, also using shapeshifting. I hope more Hogwarts fanfiction will feature magical creatures as protagonists.

Can we do without a female lead? 🌹

For the female lead, could we consider Kara Mok, or Kara Mok's mother? You see, Kara Mok's specialty is weather spells and lightning strikes, right?