Steam Manual

I stopped reading when I saw Chapter 5. What should I say? Not to mention the world with extraordinary power, it is the real world with big events hanging around. When faced with the summons of a big shot, you should think about how to respond, rather than thinking about rejection. Can you refuse? If the author is not logical, otherwise the author is logical. The word count is low.

Nice writing, keep up the good work and update soon

There is a sister, Goldfinger will issue missions, and the protagonist's father probably has a plot. These three points made me not want to watch it.

You're the one who keeps writing fire patterns for free. Perseverance 666

The subject matter is very good, and the plot is also very good. The only shortcoming is that the character's intelligence is extremely serious. To be precise, it is extremely serious on issues involving the protagonist. The protagonist himself gives people the impression that he can't do anything with his brains, whatever he thinks comes to him, and he really feels like he is the center of the world (I can see that the author does not mean to express this, but it does give people the impression. Anyway, I think it is quite a pity, such a good subject is in vain

After reading more than 30 chapters, I was persuaded to quit. A time traveler with a golden finger was said to the emperor in a few words that made him lose his soul. This kind of cowardice and cowardice revealed from the bottom of his heart was simply unbelievable. You can be afraid and awed when facing a strong person, but you have to be bloody. Besides, if you have a golden finger, you won't be able to beat him when you develop later. The subject matter is good, but the content is too poisonous, bye bye

A very familiar feeling, Jiangnan's Tianzhichi?

The background story is pretty good, but there are still a lot of logical flaws, and the reasoning plot is too naive to read with your brain.

The concept and behavioral framework of this work are quite good, and it's worth reading! There are some flaws. The protagonist's personality is young and his ideas are not mature enough. You can write more maturely slowly! How to save yourself based on the laziness of wolves, relying on the system is not enough!

As soon as I suspected the protagonist, the protagonist seemed to have changed. A weak chicken turned into a powerful person. He was not arrested immediately. It can only be said that the halo of mental retardation was turned on.

After reading the first ten chapters, it felt too abrupt. The person who was threatened did not realize how a cowardly person could suddenly break a steel pipe. Later, the protagonist forcibly repaired the machine without considering other factors. It felt like it was just to advance the plot. And if you have this ability, why didn't it show up before the time travel, and then it showed up after the explosion? It's too suspicious. In this case, it was lucky that he was only used as bait instead of being captured and detained for research. The protagonist still looked disappointed and did not consider the risks of appearing in public.

I saw it on the shelves and counted the problems I saw. The first is the character problem of the protagonist, who is very immature. The author often uses words such as "frightened" and "trembling" when describing the protagonist. The protagonist has experienced many big events, but he trembles when he meets the emperor, trembles when he meets the major, trembles when he meets the mechanic who makes armor, and is horrified when he learns that the girl he picked up is a princess. In addition, meeting my father was like being enlightened. This character is so immature, it makes me feel uncomfortable and I always want to complain. The second problem is the golden finger. The protagonist's golden finger is almost invisible now and has not been used much. Then the most important times it was used were when the protagonist strengthened his right hand, and then the protagonist showed off and bent the iron rod. The Art of Restoration That uncontrolled repair of mechas. The developing potion was tracked using a crappy interface like dreaming again... It's outrageous The third problem is the institute's problem. It is clearly said to be the highest scientific research institution, but the researchers there look like clowns. Then, as the highest scientific research institution on the surface, his voice is infinitely weakened in the book. The protagonist, as the deputy director, does not seem to have much voice. And then there it is. At first, I thought that the protagonist could develop himself by taking advantage of the favorable position of the Academy of Sciences. As a mechanical genius, he should be allowed to concentrate on research. However, it turned out that he was asked to be a secret agent. There was almost no description of the protagonist being in the Academy of Sciences. Instead, he has been doing some work that everyone else can do, such as finding people. The fourth is the issue of the Eastern Empire. My feeling is that it is better to make up a big country. Because in this kind of article, when you write about the Eastern Empire, it is completely related to China, and then you write about it. If you write it as strong, it does not match your setting. If you write it as weak, it will make people feel very awkward. Then you wrote that the emperor gave the Frank Empire land mining rights in order to deal with the aristocratic family. It makes people feel as if they are selling out national interests... Why not just write about an established Western power... Besides, the aristocratic family flourished in ancient China in the Jin Dynasty. The Sui and Tang Dynasties began to restrict it, and the chaos of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms completely destroyed the aristocratic family. From now on, it is difficult to say that China has the kind of aristocratic family that can control the imperial power. You write as if this emperor is like Shi Jingtang. How can one betray national interests in order to deal with internal affairs... That's about it, these are the questions I saw listed. I'm obviously very interested in this type of novel, but these problems make it difficult for me to read... It's very uncomfortable.

The Feilengcui militiamen are less than a hundred, but more than a hundred are invincible.

The Kamen Rider persuaded me to quit, thank you!

Why does this introduction look so similar to Heaven's Blaze and Return of the Red Dragon?

I have read Chapter 198 and found a setting that is very frustrating, that is, the identity of the time traveler is written as a local person. Just like when you go to play a VR game and you just entered the game, will you be angry at the father of an NPC? As an author, when you write a story, you should at least consider the thinking logic of the characters in your story. You have already written the characters in this world.

Many readers have mentioned that the protagonist behaved differently from ordinary people when he was first summoned by Augustus. I have made relevant modifications, thank you readers for pointing out, and thank you for your follow-up reading and support.

If you have any opinions, you can raise them directly. Readers who are capable can invest a little bit. Thank you 😁

Question, where is this work with one million words

There is something wrong with the logic of this book, and it will dissuade you in just ten chapters.

There are fewer and fewer steampunk novels these days. I finally found one and I hope the author won't stop updating it. Judging from the subject matter, it is my favorite type. I was attracted by the introduction and title of the book.

Come on, the author, it seems that the pacing is pretty good so far, and the character creation is getting better and better later on. It is a novel worth reading.

I feel like the writing is very good and there are no major problems. Why are so few people watching?

I have finished reading it now, and it is really a book that suits my taste. But very few people read it, so we have to understand the author, after all, the author also has to live. I hope the author can give me a happy ending. I don't ask for anything else. Just give me a good finale.

Very strange, currently 42 chapters. The protagonist's character is very strange. He has obviously experienced many big events, but he always behaves too cowardly in some places. It feels like the protagonist is very divided

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Steam machinery is so powerful, has no one thought of using high-energy fuel to propel it? The mechanical technology level can be improved by at least two levels.

Well written, the protagonist's IQ is online

It took me two days to read it, but it ended up being unfinished, which is a pity.