Martial Arts Brought Peace to the World During the Warring States Period

How to put it this way, I feel that the protagonist is very humble. He rushes to become a disciple and recognize him as his brother for the sake of a talent. It does not mean that he is a talent like Zhuge Liang, but he is just the eldest disciple of the leader of a branch of the Mohist family. As the heir of your country, you can recruit him as a guest and make him a friend. There is no need to consider him as your brother.

Spring and Autumn Map

After reading the previous article, it seems that the author did not use his vision in his previous life and rushed forward like a reckless man. He basically wrote like a native.

Everything else is okay, but the protagonist is too weak. He only reached the first level of martial arts at the age of 12. The author brags every day that the protagonist has amazing visions during training, but the result is always in the first level. Tiantian says that he must lay a good foundation, but he can't be worse than other people of the same age. Otherwise, what is the protagonist's golden finger for? With such strength as the protagonist, he would either fight on the battlefield or wander around the world every day. Without the halo of the protagonist, he would have died eight hundred years ago. A minion at the first level of martial arts hangs around in front of other generals at the third level of martial arts every day.

Before the Tang Dynasty, it was the eldest son inheritance system. There was no so-called fight for the right to inherit. Only the first one who died before the next one was eligible to inherit. In other words, only the protagonist's second uncle was eligible to inherit the throne if his father died when he was still a prince. There were many brilliant nobles in the Warring States Period, but the king was a There's nothing you can do about it, otherwise you think Ying Zheng has no qualifications to inherit the throne. He is the eldest son of Ying Yiren. Otherwise, how could a proton be taken back to inherit the throne? It's not like there are no sons in the Qin State. Even Hu Hai killed Fusu first before ascending the throne. He didn't ascend the throne first and killed Fusu. Li Shimin only had the ability to fight for the legitimate sons after Li Shimin. Before the Tang Dynasty, the common sons did not even have the qualifications. Even the legitimate sons had to die before they could get to you. Why did Li Yuanji help Li Jiancheng but not Li Shimin because he had no inheritance rights. He could only get his turn after the eldest son and the second son died. The right of inheritance is a constant eldest son inheritance system.

After reading part of it, I found a problem. There are some points that seem to make no sense and are very poisonous. They are made by the author from God's perspective. The author thinks there are no problems and makes sense, but he did not describe it clearly, which makes the readers feel awkward.

I feel that the protagonist's level is a bit low. If a 12-year-old has resources and talent, he should be trained internally. An 18-year-old is naturally gifted.

Well written, excellent work! Don't cut it! Keep up the good work! ! ! !

The book is excellent, but the title is not right! It's easy for passersby to miss it! You can consider changing the name of the ancient style spot!

Not getting married... That's my duty, I have nothing to show off

How can a Wangsun smile playfully every day?

It's a good introduction. Let's save it first.

When will the protagonist become King of Wu? Is it the end or the middle stage?

I have read more than 40 chapters, and I still don't know what state the protagonist is in. I don't believe that the innate spiritual treasure has just that kind of function.

Why isn't it updated? It's a very good book.

Monthly tickets are offered, stick with it, this quality, I will definitely order them all

You can't update this well, author, there are too few.

I have been pursuing this book. Although there were some bad points in the early stage, the author basically changed it when we proposed it. It can be seen that the author is very concerned about our suggestions. Now the book feels better and better. I hope the author can persist in the future and the results of the work will get better and better.

There are too few, and there are no updates when they are released. Let's keep them for now.

Let me mention a few shortcomings and hope the author can correct them: Sometimes the first person and the third person are not distinguished, there are typos, and the sentences are sometimes not fluent.

The writing is very good, but do you only update 2,000 words a day? What do you think? It must be at least 4,000, no matter what. During the new book period, it must be 6,7,000 to put on the shelves.