Fairy Tail: the Heart of the Golem

How to put it, the female protagonist occupied Sheila's body as an outsider. Although the male protagonist did not save Sheila, I think she should at least feel a little guilty. Besides, she has a second life. This can be regarded as resurrecting the body. According to the traditional virtues of China, she must repay the favor. The result is a noisy, impersonal, and egotistical heroine. If you want to show the heroine's happiness and just want to divert the hero's attention and let the hero get out of his sadness, that's fine. In this way, the heroine will be a tsundere and quirky. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: Two people are preparing to join Fairy Tail, just give me such a mouthful, I really can't stand it anymore. Can Shen Nong tell me about the plot behind it?

It's really well written! Come on, update it well, don't be lazy

There are still people writing Fairy Tail in 2022😭😭I cried

I was very happy to read the Fairy Tail novel, but I didn't like the heroine very much, so I left first. Come on author, I hope you can succeed.

Question about the heroine: I posted it before but it seems that many people didn't see it The heroine = the female protagonist ≠ the cp of the male protagonist

Readers, stop raising books. If you keep books, you will raise them to death. Now the starting point is to look at the reading rate. If the reading rate is too low, it will affect your performance. Please give me some support. The new book needs to be read during the development period.

I don't really understand it. I like to write original female protagonists in fan fiction... Compared to the original female characters, they are too thin. I don't know who took the lead...

The heroine is a time traveler. I hope her IQ is not too low.

How to put it, it may be because of the newbie. The heroine of this time traveler is considered a heroine for the time being. The author's handling is not very good and has the opposite effect. Although I have only seen one clearly mentioned in the comments, there should be more that have not been mentioned. If it is not corrected in the later stage, the results are not promising. I have not continued to read the second one of Snake Tail. Based on the feelings of Fairy Tail, I have given daily recommendation votes. I hope it can help you gain some popularity. I wish the author's online writing career will become wider and wider.

Writing about Fairy Tail, the heroine is actually original, alas.

I was killed in the first twenty chapters. I hope that cute Sheila will be resurrected soon.

It can be seen that the author is a very thoughtful person, but unfortunately his writing skills are not enough, and the writing is too childish and messy.

It looks pretty good to me. I hope I don't become a eunuch.

🙂 Come on, author. No more eunuchs.

Aren't you talking about writing about daily life? Suddenly four years were skipped. Slowly write interactions little by little. We will soon reach the plot timeline. Most of it is fighting, and there is no feeling of love at all.

It would be better without a time traveler 1. The author is not a girl and cannot write about the feeling of a girl. The heroine is too masculine 2. The heroine before the time traveler is too idealistic and does not explain why the heroine takes care of the hero's stuff 3. The hero's life experience and the relationship between the two people at the beginning 4. The plot is good in terms of setting. It is better without a time traveler. Wouldn't it be better to have a male protagonist who wants to resurrect the sister he likes? 5! ! ! The time traveler is a failure

How to say it? I haven't read much yet, and from the first three chapters I can tell that the author's writing is very good, but this kind of daily warmth with a touch of sadness makes me a little panicked. After all, the experiences of Fairy Tail characters before they join the union are all tragedies. I'm a little afraid of knives. Later I came out to read the readers' reviews. I heard that the heroine is a bit unpleasant, so I'll look back first. I won't comment on it for now.

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