Shokuki Zero

I quit when I saw the competition with Mi Zuo. After the author posted that explanation, I personally felt that everything I wrote afterward was too deliberate. I suppressed it just for the sake of suppressing it, and forcibly climaxed for the sake of climax. It felt so embarrassing to watch, but it was not as good as it was at the beginning.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Well written, but a bit short and weak

The author's hard work is very solid, but can he write less routines? Why does the protagonist hand in the paper last every time? It's too deliberate. He hands in the paper in the middle and the paper at the earliest. Also why do other contestants laugh at the male protagonist as an idiot every time he is cooking? Don't they have anything to do themselves? Just waiting for the male protagonist to show off and get slapped in the face? Most people will wait and see what happens until the results come out. It's okay to say that the male protagonist is not well-known now. If in the future, when the male protagonist becomes one of the top ten and a passerby laughs at him while cooking, it will be really poisonous. Normal people will respect the masters of cooking and figure out their true meaning instead of mindless ridicule, right? In the future, we should avoid the kind of dishes where you feel average after eating half of them, and then eat the other half and it will explode. Since the combination of the two is delicious, then you should explain it directly before trying it. After people eat half of it and give a mediocre evaluation, you will remind them to eat the other half. Is this intentional? If I were a teacher, I wouldn't think you are very powerful. Instead, I would think you are deliberately teasing me, and I will call you out and teach you a lesson. MD feels as uncomfortable as eating fly droppings. What is the chef's true intention? Is it enjoyable to play with the emotions of diners? The reversal of polarity and slapping the instructor in the face was too deliberate. After all, Japanese comics and Chinese online novels are different. The routines in the animation are rarely brought into the work intact. Moreover, the routines in the original work are from many years ago. Wouldn't it be better to change the routines and write something fresh and refined? After all, a truly capable chef can crush those who are not good at learning without using any tricks.

Don't be like other Shouki fans who are all about falling in love

I thought The reality is

When will 1 come out?

I read it on the webpage and found that the author's mentality has collapsed, so I will tell you my opinion. 1. The emotional line problem is not big, but not small. Qidian is now the main site of Xiaobai Shuangwen, so it is very unreasonable for a woman to flirt with her and say that she will not date her even after she has developed a romantic relationship. In the early stage, Tanaka Megumi (is that what she is called) first met by chance, then interacted with each other, and then helped her through difficulties, and then fell in love with her, and finally confessed and was given a good person card... After that, she became a stranger. Author, don't you think it's strange? If they were ordinary friends, it would be enough to help her get into the dormitory (they shouldn't even meet by chance). The latter two should be prepared to be the heroine/part of the harem. It's very uncomfortable to write about being issued a good person card. After that, the girl who kills crocodiles is a normal way to write about ordinary friends. Then, if Erina Nakiri is not the heroine, why should she develop her emotional line? Those who like her are disgusted by your refusal to accept her, and those who don't like her are disgusted by being ambiguous with her (I know it's not ambiguous, it's a normal interaction). The tsundere has really withdrawn from the environment, and only a group of true loves are holding on. The evaluation is really polarized. If you don't accept her, don't be friends. Those who hate tsundere are really unhappy with her. Summary: What the author wrote is not unreasonable, but he could have written otherwise. The former seems to have suddenly changed his mind in the middle of writing, but he does not want to change the previous article. There is nothing wrong with the latter, but its writing method does not meet the taste of the novice audience. 2. Strange additional settings. This is not a big problem, the author has made a boring job. The key point is that the majority of readers don't like this kind of alive. I can roughly guess what the purpose is now. It is nothing more than resurrecting their king/god/lord/someone else, or gaining power for themselves/superiors, or else completing a mandatory task sent by their superiors. And take Japan's other world toilet paper as an example. They will put flowers on the main character's truck, but do you think that manga/light novel that buried the flowers in the main plot became a hit? Summary: If the author wants to finish this chore, he can quickly set it up, and there won't be much of a problem. As long as the main focus is on cooking, I will continue to read. (Before it is put on the shelves, 1 cent and 2,000 words are still too expensive for me) 3. In terms of cooking. Since I read real-life food masters and food reviews, I feel embarrassed by such exaggerated descriptions, but this does not affect my liking of the author's description of the cooking process, creativity and effects. There are no tricks when it comes to cooking. For me, bland dishes are worth extra points. I love eating meat, so if you give me a vegan dish that doesn't imitate meat, I won't give it the highest score if it tastes good. It's the chef's responsibility to study the tastes of the guests, but most chefs don't cook for just one person, so they can make what most people like to eat. Therefore, there is no problem with the protagonist's actions. The author does not need to care about the protagonists who are opportunistic. There is a high probability that they will run away as soon as they are published. Summary: Cooking is the best part of what the author has written so far, and there is no need to change it. 4. The author is not cruel, but now many people prefer to enjoy the story from beginning to end, and the male protagonist of the passionate novel is no longer popular. Therefore, it is best not to take revenge overnight. If you know that he is done today, he will have to do something in a few days. Summary of the full text: The author of the emotional line should sort it out. It really doesn't work like this now. Maybe you have a good idea as an author, but you really don't know that you can do it because of your writing skills. It's best to find a way to throw out the time-travel setting without being abrupt and see the impact; write it normally and don't change the most essential part of it. The other issues are mainly audience issues and there is no need to change them.

To be honest, this book can basically be declared dead, and it is considered a good source of food. However, with this kind of update progress, and asking for leave, it is wearing thin on patience, and this book will not last long.

I just don't understand. For a piece of land, it's not your own land and you have to risk your own store. After all, you have signed a land lease contract, and there must be liquidated damages. The worst case scenario is to take the liquidated damages and open a store somewhere else? ! Why would I bet on my own shop? According to the rules of Shokugeki, if I lose (not that I will definitely lose), I will no longer have this shop. I can't open it even if I want to. Plus, the knives are not my own. I don't see the equality of the bet. I don't understand, there is absolutely no need to eat halberds.

Shen Nong's Review This is the first time I have seen the plot of losing for the sake of losing. You can write that you are really not as good as Erina. First, have you read the original work carefully? There is someone who raises poultry in Jiexing Residence, but he actually buys eggs on the way? How can Erruisan be sure that he will just change the eggs at that place? The third cook doesn't want to taste it before it's ready? In the fourth and third year, he is just like Xiaobai, and has never been tricked?

The author handles the emotional line very well. Only the one that suits you is the best. Many people have the idea that they must be characters in the original work. In fact, in my opinion, it doesn't matter even if the protagonist ends up marrying a passerby who has never appeared in the original work, because love is a matter between two people.

After slipping away, the protagonist is just like a passerby. The first dozen or so photos were okay, but the later ones were a bit shabby.

Readers can come back, the author has started to update.

Shoji is a relatively hardcore food show, and its authenticity is higher than its magic. It's not like Chinese Little Master's food which is basically based on the author's imagination. The food in Shoji requires the author to have some understanding of chefs, so home-cooked food is easier to write about, because high-end food is generally out of reach of ordinary people. (If the author has contact, I will treat it as if I didn't say it) Home-cooked food doesn't mean it doesn't taste good. Often it just shows how universal the food is. The ingredients may be expensive or expensive, but the value of the food is the same. Since the author intends to write about the protagonist of home-cooked food, there is no need to focus on showing off his skills. Serious training and repeated experiments will make it true.

I just saw the training section and I have a question about the Shokuri with Mimasaku Subaru. The stakes are completely unequal. When the protagonist loses, he gives him the knife and the store. But when he wins, he only gets the knife that Misaku Subaru won. What is the use to the protagonist? He does not collect knives. On the contrary, if he loses, he has to pay the price. Why did the protagonist agree? It's a thankless task.

Personal suggestion: It goes without saying that you should update it first, and then slowly update it without monitoring. Secondly, I don't understand a bit. What is the protagonist's cooking path? Yaowang's cooking style is undoubtedly home-cooked with creativity. Is the protagonist also going to take this route? Yao Wang relies on solid basic skills, wild imagination and practical yet eclectic cooking techniques from various countries taught by his father. What is the protagonist? As a reader, I still don't understand how the protagonist's golden finger is judged. Earlier, I said that Ringtong's food was much better than mine, but it was only an A. Later, my own food got an A+. The appreciation evaluation was not very detailed like the evaluation of God's Tongue, and I didn't even write clearly how to evaluate it. How can I improve my cooking skills with this golden finger? And the cooking route chosen by the protagonist - the ordinary road? I really don't understand. Should I use everything I can to make other people's taste a part of the composition, or should I drag others into ordinary fields and use my rich experience to defeat them? Why use your golden fingers to weaken the taste of others, and use your mediocre mentality to turn two dishes into zero? I wonder if it can be written more clearly, or at least add some more narrations about the taste from others. Also, I always feel that the main character is too uncharacteristic and has no sense of existence. In a world with superpowers, I can more or less describe my own superpowers. Finally, please support the author. I am just making personal suggestions. If you don't agree, you can ignore them.

In a systematic way, there are still obvious weaknesses after three years of junior high school. I don't expect you to reach the top in the decathlon, but at least you can't hold back. After entering the high school, you won't rely on others when it's important. Otherwise, what's the point of barely passing the test?

After reading the latest chapter, I just want to say that there is no need to forcefully create a crisis. What I want to see is whimsical cooking and an upright victory, not the so-called exploiting loopholes in the rules. Even if you win like this, it will be uncomfortable to watch.

I was very excited to watch it at first, but after watching it for more than 12 o'clock, it turned out that first the cheat turned into a macho man, and then he said that Erina was not the heroine. I felt that I couldn't watch it anymore, and I felt really uncomfortable.

Let's put it this way, Shōji was not popular originally, and you stopped updating in the middle. It is difficult to become popular. The most popular ones are Thousand Turns + Gentleman East's fake books. If you want to make money by writing novels (whether full-time or sideline), I do not recommend choosing this subject. As you said, update slowly and keep the updates before they are released.

I'm a little disappointed that Erina is not the heroine, but it's still okay, but Goldfinger suddenly turned into a person, which is a bit outrageous and really a bit too imaginative.

Since you are not the male and female protagonists, you should not misunderstand the role of the female protagonist in writing and put it first. What are you doing? Will the novel score be good like this?

Alas, the emotional drama of this book is so poorly written, and then the label says it is relaxing. Ask the readers how many of them find it relaxing. After the addition of real people in the system, readers have a strong sense of rawness and separation. The cooking is in a shokuji style, and the details of the cooking are also good.

The main character is quite strong, but the description feels useless.

Goldfinger suddenly becomes a macho man, the author really has you. (#ﾟДﾟ)

Shokuki no Zero? The author is really a scheming zero.

The new cheat tool guy feels a bit noisy and flattering, so don't deviate from the focus of your writing...

Run, Nanone! When 1 came, I finally understood why this book was called 0

The author said that he would follow the original work in the early and middle stages and write his own story in the later stage. However, judging from the current performance of the protagonist, it would be difficult to follow the original work smoothly. If he followed the original work on his own, he would probably die miserably.