Riding My Sword to Heaven’s Gate

Author, how many novel comment sections have you visited? I've seen it on several of your novels.

As a novice author, the overall work is quite good, with some minor flaws. For example, the word choice is a bit off; the phrase "little gem" feels out of place, like a line from a discussion about online game equipment. Also, some things don't need too much explanation; learn to be concise and to the point. Too much explanation can be verbose.

Suddenly I realized there was a female lead, so I decided to say goodbye.

My personal suggestion is not to write too long for the first few novels. Focus on practicing your writing style, identifying key conflicts to drive the plot, and just write a complete story. Then, come up with a good idea and gradually develop a longer novel.

Bro, with you constantly taking breaks from updating, advertising is a waste of your time.

My goodness, a Qi Refining Stage 9 character can unleash a full-force attack from a Foundation Establishment Peak character? Don't give me that nonsense about the protagonist losing half his life. Seriously, how can the power levels not collapse later on? This is ridiculous; the sheer number of ads makes it seem like a good book.

Dear lords and fellow Daoists, I'm still on the night shift tonight, but there's a bit more work to do, so I'll update around 2 PM tomorrow.

Why don't many people like reading this book? It seems alright. 🙂

The author supports you! The newspaper seller used to be a nobody, but now he's incredibly famous. His summary of online novel writing experience is very interesting, mainly emphasizing the word "exhilarating." However, everyone has their own style; you don't have to follow someone else's path.

I've only read thirty chapters so far, but the writing is excellent. Keep up the good work!