Riding My Sword to Heaven’s Gate

Author, how many novel comment sections have you visited? I've seen it on several novels.

As a novice author, the overall story is pretty good. There are some minor flaws, such as the wording. A small sentence is too dramatic, and it looks like a line discussing online game equipment. Also, there are some things that don't need to be explained too much. You have to learn to just go to the point. Too much is easy to be verbose. When you have time, you can read Wangyu's new book Immortal. The genre is very similar. The refinement of language, word choice and atmosphere are worthy of reference.

I suddenly found out that there is a female protagonist, forget it, bye bye

Personally, I suggest that the first few novels should not be too long. You should focus on practicing sentences, focusing on contradictions to push the plot, and writing a complete story. I'll think of a good idea later and write a long story slowly.

Brother, you are constantly updating. Advertising is a waste.

Oh my god, if you practice Qi at the ninth level, you can hit a full-strength blow at the peak of foundation building. Don't talk about the protagonist losing half his life. 🉐, Can this combat power not collapse in the later stage? Funny, there are so many ads that I actually thought it was a good book.

Dear masters and brothers, we are still working the night shift today, but there are relatively many things to do. We will update at around 14:00 tomorrow afternoon.

Why don't many people like to read this book? It feels okay🙂

The author supports you. The newspaper seller used to be a street kid and is now very popular. The experience he summarized in writing online articles is very interesting. He mainly highlights the word "cool", but everyone has his own style, and you don't have to follow the path of others.

I have only read thirty chapters so far. The writing is very good. Keep up the good work.