Ten Years of Bloodshed

Thanks for the compliment, let me share my thoughts. I have seen three chapters so far. I have always been quite outspoken and may have a bit of a venomous tongue, please forgive me. You should have a certain foundation, no more clichés. The character design is pretty good so far, and the characters have distinct characteristics. My writing skills are very deep, or in other words, I can hardly feel too many traces of AI. I don't know if you write purely by hand. The next step is to start talking about shortcomings. First of all, after reading three chapters, my first feeling was confusion The first point of confusion is, what is the power system of your book? The message you gave me was about martial arts. Although I do know that there is basically no pure martial arts in the starting point, it is obvious that the extraordinary power presented in the book makes me feel uncomfortable. Then the first impression your book gave me was a Zhuxian-like worldview. A world without hierarchy, with Taoism, Buddhism and Taoism swords? I don't think it's feasible to write it this way. Zhu Xian's success is characteristic of his times. If you really want to imitate his writing, you must bear his weight. If there is no clear realm of martial arts, then this novel will be a great test for your screenwriting ability. No matter what kind of novel it is, readers come in to enjoy it. If you don't have the realm of martial arts, you can't write about breakthroughs in battle, treasure hunting in secret realms, killing people and selling goods. I can see that what you can write about now is mainly revenge, strategizing, and pleasure in the world, these difficult things to write about. Second major question. To put it bluntly, there is still a lot of nonsense. What I can't understand the most is why you changed the perspective in the second chapter to write about how the protagonist's parents resisted. From a reader's perspective, it doesn't have any unique and valid information and it's not what I wanted to read. The change in perspective just made me feel like it broke the continuity and made me want to skip ahead and watch. So much for now. There are some more details, I'll tell you later after reading them.