The Rise of the True Spirit of Mortals Cultivating Immortality

What I wrote before: Answer a few questions, because many people will say it, so I will explain it statistically. First, if your protagonist doesn't know the plot, what kind of fanfic is this? Because that's how my outline was set. I want the protagonist to follow his own path, instead of deliberately using, trapping or pleasing Han Li. In this way, the subsequent love-hate relationship with Han Li would change. Moreover, there are all the classic plots in the original work. Of course, the protagonist Han Li giving a role to the bearded man must be included in it. Of course the protagonist will go to the classic dungeon, the Bloody Forbidden Land, Xutian Temple, etc. In the end, there were so many fans who knew the plot, and I got tired of eating the big fish. Second, why do you, a monster like you, still transform? Why did you transform so early? How do I put this question? Can I write it without changing it into form? Have! I just casually thought that at most it would become a fairy's mount spirit beast, but what would happen next? We can't just think about the beginning and ignore the rest. What if it's fun at the beginning but collapses later? What do you do with the subsequent plots of the Bloody Forbidden Land, the Black Evil Sect, and the Xutian Palace? Let the fairy take you there? Wouldn't that become the practice of a fairy? Who do you look down on? My wild son brother only deserves to be ridden? Because this fanfic follows the settings of the original work, you can wait for the carvings later. Of course, you can try the next one. Third, update? To be honest, I would also like to update more, but it is not realistic at the moment. Because I am an older graduate student at Beijing Normal University, the same school where great writers such as Mo Yan, Yu Hua, and Su Tong studied. But I'm not a literature major, I'm a pure science guy. I want to find a teacher, civil servant, or something like that when I graduate next year. My mentor is a great person in the industry. Every group meeting puts me under great pressure and I understand everything, because I am too restless and just want to graduate. So now that I am facing multiple pressures such as writing papers and finding a job, I can only say that I try to keep it updated. I hope you understand. When the job is finalized next year, if I really want to be a teacher, I will work hard to write it down if I have more time. Just think of it as a hobby to replace drinking games. Let's stop here.

🙂 In the early stage, I got a chance to transform, can transform, have more than one gifted magical power, enter a sect to practice, do not follow Han Li but have intersections from time to time, mortal flow, rich side plots... Interested friends can vote and read more 😁

Awesome, the first author to write about spiritual beasts.

I remember that the minimum requirement for transformation in the original work is a level 7 monster + transformation grass, and there seems to be a thunder tribulation for transformation. The protagonist takes the form by chance = is it the period of Qi training? ? ? I broke my guard.

Fake corpse again? The first time I studied was as a sophomore, then as a junior, and now as a senior 😄

I dare not read this. There are more than 100 chapters. It started in 2022.

Just one thing, if you can still fake a corpse after a year, you will be admired!

There is a problem with the author's way of thinking. The success of the book you write depends on the readers. Readers have read mortal novels. If the protagonist in the book does not know the plot, how can you make the readers feel uncomfortable? If you don't have a sense of immersion, what's the point of reading it?

I don't like fanfics where the protagonist doesn't know the plot

One of the important reasons why so many alien beasts are underperforming is that the alien beasts that carry the brand name are actually transformed into humans and mixed in with others. The so-called identity has an impact and the story is a trivial difference. It is no different from watching human beings cultivating immortals. The good thing is that this book is still relatively new. I can write more original monster plots in the future. I can say that this book has no advantages if I have been living in the human world. First, the reaction to the description of the pig horns is a typical student mentality with a lack of social experience. Second, Zhujiao's behavior and understanding of society are not like those of a time traveler. Even if he has never read Mortals or heard of novels about cultivating immortals, he will always have a rough idea of ​​his psychology and can relate to many things. However, his ideas are too restrictive and not open enough, let alone unrestrained. The third is the creation of scenes and characters. I personally feel that this aspect is relatively good, at least it has a sense of imagery. Fourth, the plot is really a bit out of context. It feels like a cheerful version of Mortal but not so cheerful. I don't quite understand the theme. My humble opinion, hope it helps the author

When I saw the white deer, I immediately thought of the old deer in Wulonghai.

Changed to time travel, originally aboriginal 😂

The idea is very good, but the transformations in more than ten pictures are incomprehensible and I don't understand them.

To be honest, it's really hard to write about the true spirit flow of mortals. Thinking about it, it's okay to think about Lao Mo's failure. He has been cultivating immortals for thousands of years and has ascended. As for true spirit beasts and the like, they may not have matured after thousands of years (haha), and the plot is difficult to grasp.

I've seen Jing Keshou Fast Food Restaurant and Ben Weilong's Way, both of which are monthly updates.

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author!

After reading a few chapters, I can only say that the early stages were not to my liking, so I can't comment on it overall. Post, mainly, comment, update time! Update time! Update time! Say important things three times This article has been updated since 2022, and will be updated for half a month to a month every August until August 25. Exciting, very exciting. My guess is that the author is still studying, most likely in high school, and has just graduated from high school this year and resumed writing. No matter how you say it, no matter how it is written, I still admire you for being able to persist in pretending to be a corpse for three years and finally succeeding in reincarnation.

I said it looks familiar, a book written in 22 years

For reference: The ancient giant bear that lives in the world of immortality. Look at what others have written