The Green Luan Bird of Nuwa Family

It is recommended to add a refined, easy-going, and Fengqishan reckless man to Fuxi's character list

One of the best prehistoric novels in my personal opinion The writing style is more everyday, relaxed and joyful; The writing style is also maturing step by step, without so much conspiracy and calculation; The characters are not stereotyped and are not the product of an assembly line; The description of the combat power is not ambiguous; The setting is still quite novel. Disadvantages: The protagonist only has the Earth-level Dzogchen at the beginning. Maybe the author did set this a bit low at the time, but it doesn't hurt. After all, the way of heaven did not control everything from the beginning, it also developed slowly! After all, the protagonist's soul traveled through time in later generations. Even if there was inheritance, he was probably confused at first. With his steady progress and experience and the guidance of Nuwa Fuxi, the protagonist has caught up with most of the Lords of the Cave Heaven. Most of the other Lords of the Cave Heaven take the form of Jinxian and Taiyi (the settings of this article are probably Dijie, Tianjie, Jinxian, Taiyi, and Daluo) There are about ten chapters in the middle where the author failed to control and rewrite the supporting characters. The protagonist has a low sense of presence, but it is definitely not the protagonist's role of less than 10,000 words as some comments said (? I don't know how this conclusion came about) Some chapters are not attractive, most of them are quite good-looking There are too few updates for a few days! This is the reason why some chapters are boring (Originally, the same content can be finished in one day if there are three or four updates a day, but since there is only one update in those days, the time span is long, giving people a long-winded and superfluous feeling) Generally speaking, it is very good for a new author to do this. Personally, I think

Everyone, let me tell you a password. In fact, you are all Daluo Immortals who have fallen into the calamity of losing self and have reincarnated with a little bit of innate immortal light. As long as you reply to 0, you can understand the self and see the nature and return to Daluo Heaven!

Complaint Part Two. The human race is destined to be the protagonist. This statement is one of the most disgusting settings for me. This statement simply ignores the efforts of all the sages. No matter how great their achievements are, the phrase "Destined Protagonist" turns their actions into a joke, just like a clown performing on the stage. Everyone is saying that the ending is predetermined, so don't watch it. How sad! The human race may be favored by Heaven, but if the human race fails to live up to its expectations and cannot stand up, will such a human race be helpful to Heaven and those powerful people? No, why should the useless human race be favored by those powerful people, and why should it be favored by heaven? The protagonist of the human race never relies on favoritism, but relies on step-by-step growth, the right time (the favor of heaven and the powerful), the right location (the foundation laid by the empress for the human race, blessing the growth of the human race), and the human harmony (the fierceness of the lich shakes the character of the protagonist of the world, and the human race also strives for success and develops rapidly). If one of these three is missing, the ending will be different. This cannot be explained by the phrase "Destined Protagonist" at all. Well, maybe someone needs to refute the novel. Since you have said so, what are you going to study in detail? After all, in your opinion, this is all determined by the author, so why should you look carefully and just look at it?

Nuwa should be the number one among the Six Saints and the strongest. A person who practices Taoism and a wealthy couple in Dharma and land are indispensable for their good fortune. He was the first to become a saint, ahead of the other five who were tens of millions of yuan. The five of them became saints because they all borrowed the light of Nuwa and owed others karma. The cave is in Buzhou Mountain, and the treasure has the innate treasure of the Qiankun Ding. There is no shortage of magic weapons, and there is no shortage of spiritual roots to build the Dao of Transformation. His own Taoist companion is Fuxi (in the ancient times, he was powerful and had a good reputation. The only black material was to eat soft rice, like a white lotus. Is it possible?). In terms of luck, first there was the luck of the demon race, and then there was the luck of the human race. There was no shortage of luck at all, so the progress was rapid and the strength was definitely first-rate. I haven't done anything about it, and I usually don't show off anything. Because Nuwa is a woman and she is alone, it is too childish to treat her as the last among the saints. She didn't take action because it wasn't worth it, and no one was worthy of her. After all, she was the boss of the demon clan and the mother of the human race. The boss (mother-in-law) has something to do, so I have to do her job. The other saints owe her cause and effect, and before she takes action, she has to think about whether it's worth it? Can I beat her?

This book can be said to be the most surprising book for me this year. It has no system, and the settings are new (such as recruiting people to join the star formation to guide and transform the power of chaos). Although the writing is still very immature, and some of it is quite awkward (such as the pile of organs when alone with Nuwa... And the girl who beats the phoenix...) Because I am personally pursuing articles, some of them did not mention it when I read it. Now I mention it, such as the recent crape myrtle. I just saw the crape myrtle trend that I don't know when it started. . . But the ones pointing to the stars should be Ziwei stars, and the ones pointing to flowers are the crape myrtle flowers, and then the previous merits. In fact, I personally think that some merit rewards are too clichéd in the ancient world. Why does heaven have to reward you with merits if you are the first to do something? It should be promoted and implemented before it is released (for example, writing, this thing is very useful, racial continuation and so on, if the protagonist wants to feel like it, he can also make a wave? This is the case with tea sets, it is quite... Is it to encourage invention... Maybe the author can give some spoilers about The idea of the arrival of the prehistoric merits?) Then regarding the current merits, there will definitely be the merits of the stars (in fact, I feel that this is a big plot, the star clan may even appear in the world because of this), have you considered the entire formation of the prehistoric land to attract star power, and at the same time It is necessary to stabilize the earth's veins and prevent them from being torn apart by fights. The underworld can only depend on the author's ideas. I feel that with the power of Fengqi Mountain, we can actually hold a market. The currency thing does not seem to have much merit, but it will have a lot of luck, promote the circulation of the ancient world, and maybe even get some treasure money.

I feel that some of the jokes in the article are good in moderation. If they are too much, they will become boring if you read them too much. Let's just stick to the plot.

The male protagonist and the others

It feels like the author is a woman, and the writing style is too much like a female channel

Write down the character you want to make a cameo (the rank should be slightly lower but not too high) Name, race, gender, avenue, spirit treasure (self-created) (Note: The author will modify it according to the original settings of this book)

There are some problems, not too bad. The protagonist's heels are definitely not bad, but his cultivation level at birth is too low. Logically speaking, the longer the time, the higher the cultivation level, but the result is just a little bit. The protagonist's character is a bit like a child, and a bit like a boy who throws money around.

I came from that book and read a few, and I feel pretty good about it. I didn't find any bad points. The most satisfying thing about it is that there is no female protagonist. In a genre like this, except for mindless and cool stories, writing about love is the easiest thing to break down. Come on, author!

In the earliest mythology, Fuxi was actually the creator god like Pangu.

Seeing that you are urging me, I am here to complain again. I am very satisfied with the emergence of the human race in your book, because you gave an answer to a question that most people ignore, that is, the human race - why is it an innate Taoist body? It does not mean that the human form is the innate Tao body. The innate Tao body refers to the nearly ten thousand Tao that the human race is born with. Everyone may have their own deviations, but they are suitable for all Tao. This is the truth of the innate Tao body of the human race. You gave me an answer. The empress borrowed the blood of the gods, immortals and spirits to cut off the roads of hundreds of mountains, seas and ten lands, giving the greatest blessing to the human race. It was also the birth gift that the empress gave to her children. The causal relationship between the human race and many great powers does not come out of thin air. It is a line of fate that has existed since birth.

The character setting of the protagonist is quite good. Today's prehistoric novels are often filled with conspiracy theories about old coins. There's nothing wrong with being more cheerful! Come on

I don't want Nuwa and the male protagonist to be a Taoist couple, and Fuxi and Nuwa are husband and wife. Don't think that Nuwa and Fuxi are brother and sister. They all evolved innately and there is no blood relationship.

Small building One hundred on the first floor, two hundred on the first floor Don't worry, the coins are ready

I got the exemption, discovered this book, and read more than 170 chapters. The setting of the realm is very familiar. What can I say? The protagonist got some kind of spirit land for the Wu clan to remove evil spirits, prompting Emperor Juntaiyi to establish the demon clan, mentioned some Kunpeng creation demon texts, worked with Zhen Yuanzi on the spirit land and earth immortals, etc., And also asked the dragon clan about the transformation of all races into dragons. After looking at the catalog, it seems that he also got something with Styx? The most important thing is that there is no main plot or main conflict, the protagonist has no goals to achieve, and the antagonistic relationship is not very clear. It is a stick in the east and a stick in the west, and the protagonist is a grown-up Luo Jinxian who is still like a child. There is really no desire to read it. Compared with the Green Snake book, it is much worse. At least I finished reading that one, but I have no desire to read this one. . .

I have read many ancient novels There is a saying that Daluo will become an innate spiritual treasure after losing himself If according to this setting, most of the spiritual treasures of Lingbao Tianzun should be his disciples who lost themselves due to various reasons!

Which family's blue luan bird is male? . .

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The writing is quite novel and the writing style is exquisite. I will keep it on the bookshelf for now.

So far, it's pretty good, the plot is smooth, and the characters that appear are also very distinct. For novice authors, it is still possible. Just can there be more updates😡😡😡

It's a very good book. The characters are vividly created. The plot development is not just a popular plot. It's great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Very pretty, but too little! Two chapters a day is not enough, author!

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