My Vacation Homework Mutated

I can barely see it from the front, but ever since I joined the organization and got on the plane, I've been looking inexplicably confused. The biggest flaw is that the characters are not vivid. The heroine is like a puppet, following the author's outline step by step. Her own ideas are too superficial. The author likes to write foreshadowing and details, but the heroine is brainless and cannot notice anything is wrong... After many plots are over, some details are written as a matter of course, as if they were written wherever they thought. I can only say that it is uncomfortable to watch. To give a few examples, I didn't look carefully and remember the general meaning. Maybe my memory is wrong. A strange incident broke out. Residents went to grab vegetables. The hostess only bought vegetable seeds, and then said that the rest would be purchased by the family. However, she did not communicate with the family and in fact the family was traveling far away from home. In the mother-son part, the heroine used a drone to check the neighborhood next door, which caused something strange to appear in the corridor. The heroine, who had just experienced something strange, calmly judged that the ghost was outside by turning on and off the lights. However, the next second, I fell into a dream with my neighbor. What's the point of the ghost appearing in the corridor? Since I can only use dreams to kill people, why bother writing this plot. Is it still a mother-son plot, after finding the true identity of the ghost, the heroine goes out to pick up the cards dropped by the ghost, and then the two organization personnel in the dream come down from upstairs? The manpower was spent to blockade the neighborhood next door. How could the organizers not know beforehand that the heroine would be attracted to the neighborhood if they didn't go to the scene to solve it? Then there is a dream in the hospital. It seems to be the first time a red moon is described in a novel, right? If there is, then I remembered it wrong, please pass, and then there are lights and orders in red? I don't remember if it's these ones, but if there are several items written in red one after another, it means there is something going on, and the heroine is not aware of it yet. It is known that this dream will not distort people's cognition, and the heroine's thinking is normal. . . It was still a dream in the hospital, and the heroine woke up in the eyes of the captain twice. The captain never mentioned this dream, and the heroine was not curious about why she entered the second dream after breaking it for the first time Anyway, the writing was very inexplicable.

Although it's small, you successfully attracted my attention

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Cthulhu is too difficult for novice authors, and the audience for female videos is average.

It's quite nice, although it's a bit convoluted at first.

I came in when I saw there was no cp.