Beast Tamer: I'm Just an Ordinary Passerby

The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. The female lead's father clearly knows she's not close to him, yet he seems to lose his mind and do things that are completely incomprehensible when he's around her. There have been many descriptions of his inner thoughts before, explicitly stating that he knows she's cold-hearted, ruthless, and now holds a very high position. Why can't he control his emotions when he's with her? I'm truly speechless. It's incredibly toxic to watch. 🙂

It's a mess. The author uses "he" and "she" to describe the main character, alternating between them. I've read several chapters and still don't know if the main character is male or female.

I like the setting, but there are periods in it, which is a bit problematic, especially the periods. It feels like there aren't many periods in this story, making it seem a bit chaotic. Especially this "she" and "he," I can't tell if this is the male lead or the female lead. [At the beginning] I even feel like I'm reading a pirated novel. The premise is pretty good, but these issues make me feel like I'm reading a pirated novel.

I don't know if I've read too many cool articles, but I feel like the heroine in this article is feeling aggrieved?

It's so poisonous that the soul of an adult has been damaged, and it keeps emphasizing on family. . .

With this setup, wouldn't it be simpler to just use a soul-destroying poison on whoever you have a grudge against? You give me this today, I give you this tomorrow; I won't even be able to eat or drink in peace!

It's written in a very messy way; the sentences are incoherent and the logic is chaotic.

Does the author have some kind of period phobia? There isn't a single period in the entire text 😥? And the relationship between her and him is a complete mess. I don't understand.

This book is okay overall, but there are two things that make me feel uncomfortable. 1. The words don't make sense, but luckily I can guess the meaning at a glance 2. The heroine is a little aggrieved. First of all, they were all in their thirties in their previous lives.

The concept is great, but it would be better if the paragraph grammar and typos could be corrected to make it easier for readers to read. Also, the lack of periods is really difficult to read.