Beast Tamer: I'm Just an Ordinary Passerby

The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. The heroine's father clearly knows that the heroine is not close to him, but he still seems to be outwitting the heroine and makes very incomprehensible actions. He has described a lot about the heroine's father's heart before, and clearly mentioned that he knows that the heroine has a cold temperament and cruel methods, and now has an extraordinary status. Why can't he manage his expression well when facing the heroine? I am really convinced, and it is so poisonous 🙂

It's a mess. Sometimes he is used to describe the protagonist, and sometimes she is used interchangeably. After reading several chapters, I still don't know whether the author's protagonist is male or female.

I like the setting very much, but there are also periods, which is a bit problematic, especially the periods. I feel like there are not many periods in this article, and it always seems to have a chaotic feeling. Especially this one, I can't tell whether this is the male protagonist or the female protagonist. [At the beginning] I even felt like I had read a pirated article. The setting was very good, but these problems made me feel like I had read a pirated article.

I don't know if I've read too many cool articles, but I feel like the heroine in this article is feeling aggrieved?

With this setting, if you have a grudge against someone, can you just give him or her the Soul-Destroying Powder? If you give it to me today, I will give it to you tomorrow. You won't be able to live in peace even if you eat or drink water.

It's so poisonous that the soul of an adult has been damaged, and it keeps emphasizing on family. . .

The writing is too messy, the sentences don't make sense, and the logic is confusing.

Does the author have a phobia of periods? There is not a single period in the entire article 😥? ? And she and him, it was chaos. Don't understand.

This book is okay overall, but there are two things that make me feel uncomfortable. 1. The words don't make sense, but luckily I can guess the meaning at a glance 2. The heroine is a little aggrieved. First of all, they were all in their thirties in their previous lives. Although they lacked love in their previous lives, when they find out that they have no chance of family love in this life, they should only feel a little regretful, and forget about it. I have been arguing with my family, parents and sisters for a long time. Also, later on, I found out that there are always people plotting against the heroine, and the heroine will say harsh words. She is really a child who wants to give away money. According to this development, everyone can use the heroine as a springboard. After all, didn't it say in the article, as a parent facing such a thing, I feel that my child has done a good job, and I still feel sorry for him. The person who did it does not regret it, because he is very pitiful. According to this logic, everyone can run to the heroine. Anyway, only the heroine is aggrieved and suffers. Sacrifice one person to benefit the whole world

The setting is very nice, but it would be nice if the grammar and typos in the paragraphs could be corrected to make it easier for readers to read. There is also the problem of periods. Without periods, it's really hard to read.