I Have an Absurd Scripture

If this book is well written, it will be a masterpiece. I have been following it and supporting the author. I hope the author can stick to it. The author has a good grasp of the storyline and has no suggestions, but I have some suggestions about the protagonist's spells: 1. In the early stage, the current author's writing method is completely sufficient, with few resources, and it is good to go beyond 2 or 3 small-level battles, but don't have too many spells, otherwise readers will not remember them. 2. In the mid-term, you can learn the thunder method, and at the same time, the coffin board can be upgraded to more than ten or twenty, forming formations and the like. Once released, it is powerful and cool; then it can involve physical training to form a trump card. In the early stage, it is better not to go too deep into physical training. , The advanced level is the Buddha body, or the combination of Buddha and Demon. After all, the physical training of Buddha or Demon alone gives people a very strong feeling, and if combined, it will give people a more cheating feeling. At the same time, it is recommended to give the protagonist a cheating top magic card, such as condensing a knife to extract the essence or blood of the whole body, or reduce part of the cultivation level. It can only be cut once and cannot be used again for a short period of time, but it is surprisingly powerful and can kill or seriously injure enemies one level higher. At the same time, I hope that the author can maintain his original intention, write an absurd world, reflect human nature, and present it from the perspective of the protagonist. Never jump to the perspective of the supporting character and write out the thoughts and feelings of the supporting character, which will make people look too boring. There is also a small suggestion, you can add some monsters. The protagonist raises various monsters, but be careful not to raise pets that the protagonist has feelings for. They are just indifferent and just for fighting. Don't be like raising an ancestor, and then often write funny plots. In such an absurd world, it is difficult for everyone to live. The protagonist is just like playing, which will make readers lose the sense of involvement. Last point, this world can be written to be more absurd, with various forbidden areas, isolating various areas, and in the mid-term, we can even write various absurd small worlds. For some reasons, the protagonist is forced to go on several journeys, his cultivation level rises sharply, and he comes back to shock the whole world. Zhongyuan and some acquaintances from the past will have another race war, but never put the protagonist together with the human race. It is best to write that without the protagonist, the war may be lost, but the price of losing will not be particularly high Come on, author, I am very optimistic about this masterpiece.

I have read almost a hundred chapters so far, and the protagonist is still cheating on so many of his spells. However, anyone of the same level he meets is stronger than the protagonist. There is also a person of the same age who is seriously injured and can fight with the protagonist on a par. The protagonist is too frustrated.

This book has its own pace. I hope the author will keep it up and not be influenced by what others say. Let me express my opinions and speculations: According to the author's description of various skills, the background is relatively large, and this world's stone realm can be called a first-class combat power, and changing the world has become inevitable. So I just imagined how the protagonist would leave. The first type: Upgrade the fish eye book, use the concept of projection to project the illusion outside the world, explore the path, locate it, and then let the protagonist use the path to leave. The second type: upgrade the coffin-stealing method, bury yourself, and the royal coffin will ascend. Third type: Upgrade the banquet method. (I really didn't expect this) The fourth type: upgrade the Great Abyss species and tear the world apart with your hands. (I didn't think of this, so I added it forcibly) Type 5: Upgrade cloud viewing, a somersault cloud is thousands of miles away (the author said it himself, although it is suspicious)

To sum up, I personally feel that it is good grass jelly, but I think it is food for others. After all, everyone has different feelings.

Each of the protagonist's skills was awesome before he learned them, and the descriptions were very impressive, but after the protagonist mastered them, they were obviously rubbish, and he used them just like small skills.

This is the first time I have seen some absurd plots, such as people coming to grab the baptism of vitality during the heavenly tribulation in the foundation-building stage of cultivating immortals, and two lunatics jumping out to grab the baptism of vitality when pig's feet are in the stone-breaking realm (the second realm). It seems that the more perverted it is, the more people watch it.

Once you have enough strength, if you don't kill the butcher who interfered with the protagonist's breakthrough, the protagonist will be a pure injustice.

I'm looking for a novel in which the protagonist kills wolves and refines the burying blade technique at the beginning, which is later called the Taotie Method. I searched through hundreds of weird books and couldn't find it. Isn't it closed?

Very good idea! First, I don't understand the settings! ! ! ! !           （） I won't tell you how a warrior practices, nor how to hone himself in the skin-grinding realm. The xx bone realm talks about applying medicine (the name of the realm is forgotten), but how to practice in the blood-exchanging realm? Transporting Qi and blood? But what about true energy? (Didn't you say that there are no secrets of Qi?) If a warrior wants to change his blood or reach a higher level and must become a deceitful warrior, then you can definitely "guess it" from the protagonist's words. There is also a protagonist who directly advances in spells through devious energy. But you don't want to tell me how other people practice advanced techniques! What other weird remnants are being sold all the time, but you didn't say anything, and you only mentioned one was used to forge weapons (I didn't see one), make alchemy (I didn't see one), and practice? (I have never seen a monk practice it). So how can this thing be sold? What's the value? Second, the transition is too crude. . .            ，（），？ ? ? (There are far more weird things outside the city than inside the city. In the end, because of not understanding the medicinal properties of xx grass (the herb used to break through the realm, the name has been forgotten), it attracted a large number of weird things, and also summoned big shots. The protagonist was ridden on his head and shit, and his foundation was abolished.) Other rhythm issues, battle scene description issues, force value and combat system are seriously inconsistent. If you are in a muddy realm, don't move, the stars will collapse, and the magic will shatter into the void. . .

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.